Elements of Fire

By Nimarna

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Would the story of the Mahabharat have taken a different course if Karna had stood up for Draupadi in the dic... More

Announcement: Covers
Announcement: Aesthetics
1. The Infamous Dice Game
2. Changes
3. Of Palace Elders
4. More than a Sutputra ?
5. Making Plans
6. The Wedding
7. New Beginnings
8. Maharani of Anga
9. Of Honour and Conscience
11. Unusual Behaviours
12. Subhadra Reasons
13. Upcoming Festivities
14. Karna Invites a Storm
15. An Incomplete Talk
16. Past and Present
17. Initiatives
18. A strange Feeling
19. Changes and Changing Courses
20. Stepping Out
21. Hibiscus
22. Words and Prayers
23. Checking Moods and Gifts
24. Crumpled Flowers
25. Ritual Fire
26. Mother's Healing Touch
27. Finding Ourselves
28. Some Untangling And New Depths
29. Anchor
Announcement
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30. Unspoken And Heard
31. A Hidden Listener
32. A Decision
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33. Instructions
34. A Long Night -1
35. A Long Night-2
36. A Long Night-3
37. A Long Night- 4
38. A Long Night- 5
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39. Draupadi Resolves
40. Strange Coincidence-1
41. Strange Coincidence- 2
42. A Mute and Perplexed Spectator
43. A Talk
44. Reassuring Doubtfully
45. Getting Ready
46. Draupadi Decides to Act
47. Negotiations -1
48. Negotiations -2
49. Negotiations -3
50. Negotiations -4
51. Answering Responses
52. New Feelings -1
53. New Feelings -2
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54. In Light and Dark
55. Of Two Fire-Borns -1
56. Of Two Fire-Borns -2
57. Of Two Fire- Borns -3
58. Of Two Fire-Borns -4
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59. Of Two Fire-Borns -5
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60. Of Two Fire-Borns -6
61. His Daughter, Her Daughter
62. Conversing of the Future? -1
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63. Conversing of the Future? -2
64. Conversing of the Future? -3
65. Conversing of the Future? -4
66. Conversing of the Future? -5
67. Conversing of the Future? -6
68. Braiding Hairs and Thoughts
69. Putting To Sleep
70. Conditions?
71. Some Discomfiture and Laughter
72. Of Little Girls and Hidden Blushes
73. Of Weaving a Bangle
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74. Some Glance, Some See
75. Ruffling Thoughts- 1
76. Ruffling Thoughts -2
77. An Imperfection- 1
78. An Imperfection- 2
79. Yudhistira's Remorse -1
80. Yudhistira's Remorse -2
81. Yudhistira's Remorse -3
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10. Overhearing Things

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By Nimarna

The next day was filled with much activity. She was introduced to court and spent much of her time there.

But once it was over she was left to herself and the boredom was unbearable. Karna had not yet told her of her duties as the queen. The kind of duties she had in Indraprasth and she was unsure whether to assume her own duties.

Through out the afternoon as her husband attended high confidential matters of the state she had been largely casually going through her garments and jewellery some old and close to her heart but mostly new. They were beautiful but couldn't hold her interest for long.

She had tried striking up conversations with her maids but they were new and unfamiliar and also naturally somewhat curious so she had to be on guard about what Karna had said about the spread of gossip.

She and her husband had not eaten together after breakfast as Karna had several meetings with his ministers. Anga was a newly independent kingdom and moreover his absence for a long time meant that state work would be his peak priority for sometime.

She decided to walk around the palace and get to know it better. The staff was very respectful towards her.

She kept walking through the long corridors when she two strong voices speaking in disagreement about something. She walked towards the source and noticed a door to one of the chambers slightly ajar.

She was about to pass by knowing what she was doing is wrong but stopped when she recognized one of the voices was of her husband's.

"No guptachar there was no other way out" he said.

"But Maharaj people are now gossiping about you and the queen. They are not too pleased with you that you took in a formerly married woman. Rumours and news have spread very fast. It is going to be difficult reestablishing their faith in you."

"Gossip will die down after some time and moreover Anga is now independent and so there will be several new reforms in the country now"

"Maybe but we have to work. But maharaj... may I ask you a question..... well.... Um you could have rescued the maharani and then left her at her father's place .... That way-"

"No guptacharji I had considered it but then realized it was not feasible. As it is my intervention would have raised eyebrows at our relationship and then in her anger she severed ties with her husband. I had to marry her to prevent her reputation from being tarnished and also that of her father's. Even if I had not married her a few weeks would pass and nobody would care about me. I would go back to my normal life but society is not so forgiving towards women. Her life would have been ruined and I would never have been able to forgive myself"

"Maharaj you are truly great. I honestly didn't think of all this"

"Now you see.."


She heard their voices coming closer to the door and decided to leave before being caught.

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