Badtameez Dil (Completed)

By RicharahejaR

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A Story of A Playboy And A Simple Girl More

.Intro.
Story of two different poles
First Meeting
Who is she
Night Party
Together in Shimla Valley
The Love Story Begins
Confession
Karan's Anger
Karan Met Priyank
Promo
Engagement
Mehendi and Sangeet
Finally Married
Karan's Shocking Revelation
Preeta's Decision
Shivani Luthra
Preeta met an accident
Hope
Note
Karan's Obsession
Rishi comes on Tara's wedding
Misfortune
Badtameez Dil
Epilogue

Karan's Past

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By RicharahejaR

Guys I've changed Janvi's character. Tunisha will play the role of Janvi. Instead of Mahira. Let's continue....

Next Day Morning....

Karan woke up and saw Janvi standing beside him. She was glaring him with anger. Karan rolled his eyes and asked...

Karan: Kya hua?? Ayse ghur q rhi ho??

Janvi: Karan hum yaha kis liye aye hay??

Karan: Ghumne. Tara ne bataya to tha. Tum bhul gei???

Janvi: Mere khayal se tum bhul gaye ho. Yaar almost 2 weeks hone ko hay or ab tk hum kahi ghumne nhi gaye.

She make a crybaby face.

Karan: Hum nhi sirf tum. Mayank or mera to bohot jaga ghumna ho gaya. Tum hi nhi jati kahi.

Janvi: To kyse jau?? Tum to mujhe sath leke jaoge nhi. Pta nhi kaha ghumte ho. Or Mayank... Huh wo abhi majnu bna hua hay. Har roz date pe jata hay.

Karan: To tu bhi ja na. Priyansh k sath. Uska address nhi pta kya??

Janvi: Wait wait tumhe kyse pta hay Priyansh k bare me??

Karan: Ab mere Zan ka bf hay. Mujhe to pta hoga hi.

Janvi blushed.

Janvi (blushingly): Ay... Aysa kuch nhi hay. Hum sirf dost hay.

Karan (mimics her): Hum sirf dost hay. Meri behen agar dil me kuch hay to bta do use. Kya pta sayad wo bhi tumhe like krta ho.

Janvi: Karan.... Tum thik to ho na??

She checks his temperature.

Janvi: Nahi. Bukhar to nhi hay. Phir yeh sahi bate kyse kr rhe ho?? I mean tum to bina tedi bato ke reh nhi sakte na. So....

Karan (with disgust): Tumse to bat krna hi bekar hay. Are tum use pasand krte ho isiliye maine kaha ki use bta do. Tum na bato ka batangad mt banao.

Janvi: Acha Okk. But mujhe batao ki Priyansh k bare me tumhe kyse pta??

Karan: Sb pta hay mujhe. But kyse nhi bataunga jb tk tum yeh nhi bologi ki tum dono mile kaha.

Janvi: Okk fine. Jb main australia me padhne gei thi tb wo mere sath same batch me tha. Or last 5 years se hum dono friends hay.

Karan: But you like him right??

Janvi: Hmmm. I like him. Ab bolo tumhe kyse pta uske bare me?? Mom or dad ko bhi uske bare me nhi pta.

Karan: Wo actually ek din tum phone pe usse bat kr rhe the to mujhe pta chala.

Flashback...

Janvi was talking with someone in her room.

Janvi: Kaha the tum?? Kb se call kr rhi hoon.

Priyansh: Ab kya kru?? Mere ghar me to mom nhi hay mujhe apna kam khud krna hota hay. Tumhari tarha alsi nhi hoon main.

Janvi: You Priyansh Arora tumhe to main....

Priyansh: Nhi chodogi na??

Janvi: Bilkul nhi chodungi.

Priyansh: Ayee hayee itna pyaar. Main to mr gaya.

Janvi: Priyansh main na ek kam krta hoon. Tumhare photo ka poster banwake deewar me lga deti hoon. Ayiye dekhiye duniya ki sabse bade flirt Mr Priyansh Arora ka poster hay yeh.

Priyansh: Are wahh. Tum to mujhe famous bnana chahte ho. Banao banao. I don't have any problem.

Janvi: Priyansh....

Priyansh: Acha sorry. Ab bolo kuch kam tha??

Janvi: I'm missing you.

Priyansh: Main bhi. Australia se ane k bad hum mile hi nhi.

Janvi: Main tumse milna chahta hoon. Main tehri Mumbai me or tum Shimla me.

Priyansh: To tum yaha aa jao. Because mujhe yaha office bhi sambhalna hota hay. Mere behen k sath. Main nhi ja sakta.

Janvi: Yeah. I know. Chalo bad me bat krte hay. Mujhe thoda kam hay.

Priyansh: Okk bye.

She hang up the call.

Janvi: I really miss you Priyansh. I hope main Shimla aa pau. Mujhe tumse milna hay. Or tumhe btana hay ki I like you. From the first day we meet. Ahhhhh main pagal ho jaungi.

She smiled. But It was unknown to her that Karan was listening her every words.

Flashback ends...

Karan: To ayse mujhe pta chala.

Janvi: Tumhe ayse chupke se hamari bate nhi sunni chahiye thi. Yeh galat hay.

Karan: Karan Luthra k liye sb sahi hay. Ab dekho tumhara bf kaha hay??

Janvi: Actually I know wo kaha hay. Wo abhi nadi k pas hoga. Har roz jogging krke wo waha jata hay. Tum please mujhe le chalo na. Mujhe rasta nhi pta.

Karan: Okk fine. Jaldi se ready ho jao.

Janvi: Yahoo! Love you Karan.

She kissed him on his cheeks and leaves. Karan irritatedly rubs his cheeks and said...

Karan: Pagal hay puri. Chal Karan ready ho ja. Janvi ko drop krke tujhe apni Preeta k pas bhi to jana hay.

He smirks.

On the other hand

Priyansh was standing beside the river. Preeta come to him running. She was breathing heavily.

Preeta: Ansh k bache tujhe main chodungi nhi.

She started hitting him.

Priyansh: Are mujhe q mar rhi hay??

Preeta: Ayse apni choti behen ko akela chod kr kon ata hay??

Priyansh: Main ata hoon.

Preeta glared him. Priyansh pinch her nose and said...

Priyansh: Or tu koi choti bachi nhi hay ki tujhe hamesha sath leke tera hath pakadke ghoomna hoga.

Preeta: Tu na bohot bura hay. Acha bta aj konsa din hay??

Priyansh: Aj Tuesday hay.

Preeta: Ugh... Main puch rhi hoon aj ka date kya hay??

Priyansh: Dekh Pree subha subha mera dimag mt kha. Tu na badi irritating hay. Abhi chup kr tu.

Preeta felt bad by his words. He lowered her eyes and said...

Preeta: Sorry tujhe tang kiya. Chal main chalti hoon. Tu bhi ghar aa ja.

She was about to leave Suddenly Priyansh pulled her holding her hand. Preeta was about to fall but Priyansh hold her through her waist. Preeta closed her eyes by the Sudden fear. While Priyansh was giggling seeing her expression. Meanwhile Karan and Janvi arrived there. They became shocked to see Preeta and Priyansh in that position.

Karan was fuming in jealousy. Janvi's eyes became teary.

Priyansh made her stand and put his hand around her neck.

Priyansh: Tune kya socha main tera birthday vul jaunga. Pagal kahika. Main tera birthday kabhi nhi bhul sakta.

Preeta: To tu ayse q bol rha tha??

Priyansh: Wo kya hay ki mujhe na tujhe tease krna bohot pasand hay.

Preeta: Ansh...

Priyansh: Acha baba sorry. Yeh le tere liye.

Priyansh took a chocolate box from his bag and gave her. Preeta became very happy to see the chocolate box.

Preeta: Mera favorite chocolate yippy. Love you Ansh.

She kissed on his cheeks.

Ansh: Awwwwww love you too. Ab chal ghar chalte hay.

Preeta: Thik hay. But tu mujhe apne pith pr uthake le jayega. Bol manjoor hay??

Priyansh: Jysi apki agya Preeta ji.

Priyansh bent down and lift Preeta on his back.

Karan and Janvi was unable to hear their talks. They only saw their closeness. Janvi was looking at them with teary eyes. While Karan was looking at Priyansh with bloodshot eyes. Suddenly Priyansh saw Janvi. He became obliged to see her. He whispered..

Priyansh: Janvi...

He drop Preeta down.

Preeta: Kya hua??

Priyansh: Chal mere sath.

Priyansh hold her hand and went to Karan and Janvi. Preeta couldn't see Karan's face because he was showing his back to her.

Priyansh: Janvi. What a pleasant surprise. Tum yaha??

Janvi: Wo ghoomne ayi thi yaha. Tum jogging krne aye the??

Priyansh: Haan. Waise yeh kon hay tumhare sath??

Janvi: Ohh dekho batana hi bhool gei. He's my friend Karan.

Janvi make him face Preeta and Priyansh. Preeta became shocked to see Karan.

Preeta: Bajarbattu tum??

Janvi: Tum ise jante ho??

Preeta: Of course. Waise tum yaha??

Karan: Haan main. Waise tumne mujhe bataya nhi tumhari bf hay.

Preeta: Hein? Mera bf?? Are yeh news to mujhe bhi abhi mila ki I've bf. Then she realized. Ek minute tum iske bare me to nhi bol rhe na?? Are duffer he's my brother not Bf.

Janvi: Kya??

Priyansh: Don't say that Jani ki tumne is pagal ko meri gf samajh li.

Karan/ Preeta: What did you say?? Jani??

Janvi blushed.

Priyansh: Are main ise Jani bulata tha college me.

Karan: Acha Jani.

Preeta: Kabhi mujhe to itne pyaar se nhi bulaya.

Priyansh: Ab pyaar sabke liye thodi na ata hay?? Or tere liye.. nah bilkul nhi.

Preeta: Hawww. Ja bat hi nhi krti tujhse. Karan Tum mere sath chaloge??

Karan: Kaha??

Preeta: Bad me bataungi. Is Ansh k bache k samne to bilkul nhi bataungi.

Preeta hold his hand and drag him with her.

Priyansh: Are Pree ruk. Pree...

But she left. Priyansh took a deep sigh and said...

Priyansh: Yeh Pree bhi na. Waise Jani tum kb aye yaha?

Janvi: 2 weeks ho gaye.

Priyansh: Or tumne mujhe bataya bhi nhi. Wahh. Jao main bat hi nhi krti tumse.

He made a cute angry pout. Janvi look at his cuteness and pulled his cheeks.

Janvi: Awwwwww meli Priyanshi gussa ho gaya??

Priyansh: I'm not Priyanshi I'm Priyansh Arora.

Janvi: Aww. Acha thik hay. Sorry galti ho gei.

Priyansh: It's Okk.

Janvi: Wo tumhari behen thi??

Priyansh: Haan. She's Preeta my Pree. Mere jigar ka tukda. I love her so much.

Janvi: Awww. Priyansh Arora apne behen se itna pyaar krta hay??

Priyansh: Bohot jyada. Waise yehi khade rehne ka irada hay kya??

Janvi: Nhi ghoomna hay. Mujhe le chaloge??

Priyansh: Okk but pehle samne wale dhabe se kuch kha lete hay. Kya kehte ho??

Janvi: Chalega.

They smiled.

While other side Preeta and Karan entered into a orphanage. As they entered there the kids of the orphanage shouted.

Kids: Pree di..

They all came and hug her.

Kids: Happy birthday Pree di.

Preeta: Thank you mere kiddos.

Kids: Pree di yeh bhaiya kon hay??

Preeta: Yeh Karan bhaiya hay. Sb hi kaho inko.

Kids: Hiii bhaiya.

Karan: Hii.

Preeta: Ab chalo mother ko bula ke lao. Mujhe unse milna hay. Phir hum bohot masti krenge.

Kids: Okk di.

All left to call mother. Preeta smiled.

Karan: Happy birthday to you Preeta. Tumne bataya nhi aj tumhara birthday hay.

Preeta: Usme kya hay?? Ab to pta chal gaya na.

Karan: Haan pta to chal gaya. Bolo kya gift chahte ho??

Preeta: Ummmm.... Haan in sare bacho k liye chocolates. Main lana vul gei.

Karan: Tumhe apne liye kuch nhi chahiye??

Preeta: Nhi. Mere pas to sb kuch hay. But in bacho k pas bohot kuch nhi hay. Isiliye agar koi unhe pyaar se ek chocolate bhi de de to yeh bohot khush ho jate hay. Or inki khushi hi mera best birthday gift hoga.

Suddenly she saw Mother is coming with the kids.

Preeta: Mother aa gaye.

Preeta went to her and take her blessings.

Mother: Happy birthday my child.

Preeta: Thank you mother.

Mother: Priyank or Priyansh kyse hay??

Preeta: Sb thik ap bataiye.

Mother: I'm fine baby.

Preeta: Meri mithai???

Mother: Layi hoon.

She took a bowl of sweet from a kid and fed her.

Preeta: Ummm yummy. Love you mother.

Mother: Love you too my dear.

Karan was watching them with teary eyes. He got some flashes of Shivani and him. He left the place. Preeta saw him and said..

Preeta: Mother main abhi ayi.

She followed Karan. Karan was standing in the garden. Preeta went to him and placed her hand on his soldier. Karan wipes his tears and turned.

Preeta: Mom ko miss kr rhe ho??

Karan: Nhi to. Main unhe q miss krunga??

Preeta: Q chupa rhe ho? Bol do you're missing your mom.

Karan (shouted): Haan I'm missing her. Because I love her. But you know what main unse usse bhi jyada nafrat krta hoon. In bacho k pas to phir bhi ek bachpan hay. Bohot kuch na hote huye bhi sabkuch hay unke pas. But you know mere pas sb hote huye bhi kuch nhi tha. Sirf or sirf us aurat k wajah se. Unke wajah se mera bachpan kho gaya. Are apne liye gham nhi hay mujhe. But unke wajah se Tara k sare sapne choot gaye. Ghar sambhalne k liye mujhe sambhalne k liye usne apna sapna sacrifice kr diya.

He started crying. Preeta cupped his face and asked..

Preeta: Main samajh rha hoon. But isme unki kya galti?!

Karan: Galti unhi ki hay.

Preeta: Okk mujhe batao aysa kya hua tha tumhare bachpan me ki tum apne hi Mom se nafrat krte ho??

Karan: Janna chahte ho?? To suno. Main bs 7 saal ka tha tb. Ek din main or Tara school se ghar aye and humne dekha Mom or Dad lad rhe hay.

Flashback..

Karan and Tara entered into the house. Suddenly they heard their parents quarreling.

Young Karan

Young Tara.

Shivani.

Karan: Tara mom dad lad q rhe hay??

Tara: Pta nhi chalo dekhte hay.

They went upstairs.

Shivani: Ap aysa kyse kr sakte hay Rishi?? Ap bhuliye mat ki ap shadi suda hay. Do bache hay apke. Ap aysi harkate kyse kr sakte hay??

Rishi: Kr sakta hoon. Sb kr sakta hoon main. Pta nhi kya dekh k mere gharwalo ne meri shadi tumse kr di. Itni badi property hay tumhare pas or tum kuch paise dene se itrate ho mujhe. Kysi patni ho tum haan?

Shivani: Or kitne paise doon apko?? Khud to kuch krte nhi main jo kamati hoon wo bhi ap le lete hay.

Rishi: Itne paison ki kya krogi tum haan? Itni badi property hay tumhare Nam pe or tum us me se kuch bhi nhi de sakti mujhe??

Shivani: Nhi de sakti. Yeh sb mere bacho k future k liye hay. Apki ayaasi k liye nhi. Dil pe hath rakh kr kahiye to aj tk Maine apko jitne bhi paise diye unka kya kiya apne? Main batati hoon. Wo sb apne apni rakhel Vidya pe uda diya.

Rishi: Vidya ko beech mt tum lao hi mt. At least wo tum jysi nhi hay. Jb bhi main usse paise mangta hoon wo de dete hay. Isiliye maine faisla le liya ki main ab Vidya k pas chala jaunga.

Shivani: Nhi ap aysa nhi kr sakte. Rishi apke do bache hay.

Rishi: Bache my foot. Koi bache nhi hay mere. Are jinke duniya me ane se main khush hi nhi hua tha unhe main apna bacha nhi manta.

Rishi was about to leave but shivani hold his hand.

Shivani: Nhi ap nhi ja sakte.

Rishi: Jane do mujhe.

He pushed her. Shivani fell on the floor. Rishi left the room without taking a glance on her.

Shivani: Mt jaiye Rishi.

Karan and Tara witnessed the whole thing. They went to Shivani.

Karan: Mom please ro mt.

Tara: Haan mom. Dad wapas aa jayenge. Hum unko convince krenge.

Karan: Nhi hume unki jarurt nhi hay. Wo bure hay bohot bure. Unhone mere mom ko chot pohchaya. Main unka shakal bhi nhi dekhna chahta. I hate him. I hate Mr Rishi Malhothra. Aj se mera koi dad nhi. He's dead....

Suddenly Karan got a tight slap from Shivani.

Karan: Mom...

Shivani: How dare you?? Tum unke bare me aysa bol bhi kyse sakte ho?? Vulo mt he's your dad.

Karan: Nhi he's not my dad. Wo bure hay bohot bure.

Shivani: Karan..

Tara: Mom please shant ho jaiye.

Shivani: Tumne sahi kaha mujhe Rishi ko rokna hoga. Main.. Main yeh sari property unko de dungi. Mujhe unhe rokna hoga.

She wiped her tears and run towards the terrace. She saw Rishi was going.

Shivani: Rishi ruk jaiye. Rishi...

But he left.

Shivani: Rishi...

She broke down in tears.

Shivani: Sari galti meri hay. Mujhe jeene ka koi haq nhi. Koi haq nhi.

She stand up and jumped from the terrace. Karan and Tara reached there following her and saw the horrible scene. They screams...

Karan/ Tara: Mom..

Flashback ends...

Karan: Humne unhe hospital me admit kiya. Doctor ne kaha wo bach to gei but wo coma me chale gaye. Main bohot ro rha tha. Hamare neighborhood me jo log the wo hume hate krne lge because of Rishi Malhothra. Koi nhi aya hamari madad krne. Tara ne decide kiya ki wo apni padhai chod degi or office Jana start kregi. Maine apne aakhon k samne Tara ko apne sapno ko jalate huye dekhe hay. Uska wo dard aj bhi main nhi bhul pai. Sb kuch chaknachur ho gaya sirf un dono k wajah se. Maine mom ko samjhaya tha but wo nhi samjhe. Or uska natija yeh hua ki hum dono ki zindagi barbad ho gei. Or meri zindagi sawarne k liye Tara ne apne ap ko kurbaan kr diya.

Preeta was listening the story with teary eyes. She hugged Karan.

Preeta: Shhh shant ho jao. Main hoon na tumhare sath.

Karan (in mind): Tumhe to rehna padhega Preeta. Tumhe rehna hi padhega. Tum chaho ya na chaho tumhe mere pas hi rehna hoga. Or agar koi teesra insan aya tumhe mujhse alag krne to be maut mrega wo. Is Dil ki junoon ho tum Preeta. Is Badtameez Dil ki fitoor ho tum. Tum kahi nhi ja sakti.

Screen froze.

Precap: Same.






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