Hello! Wanted to quickly mention that book #2 "Cherished" is unfortunately on hold for the time being. I want to work on it when I'm not so busy this semester, and also, book one has changed quite a lot as I continue to edit the second draft. We still have the same villains and similar plot, but I built more on the setting and description. Slowly but surely, I'm making progress with the second draft. If any of you can recall what bothered you in "Borrowed" and forgot to mention it in a comment, please let me know. I want to improve!
Questions:
Did you want more of the love triangle played out between Finn, Irissa, and Kyler?
Were you disappointed Hanna died?
Did you want more setting? Descriptions? Did you want to explore the dystopian society more?
Please comment below to help aide me as I continue with my second draft. Thanks!