u r my everything(completed)

By bloomysravs143

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this story continues frm d day after talent hunt. where manik makes a big mistake in his life lets see will... More

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part 1
note
part 2.
part-3
part:4
sad
Part 6
Part 7
pictures
part-8
part-9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
part-13
Part-14
part 15
part 15b
answers plzzz
Part 15 C
part-16
part-17
part-18
part-19
part-20
note:
part-21
choose one
my new short story
part-23
thankuuu
only becz of u😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
part 25
part 26
part 27
Part 28
Part 29
part.....
part-30
problem on part 30
part 31
question and answer
part-32
be careful
part 33
part 34
new characters intro
review
new story
part 35
part 36
doubts
+ve
part 37
part 37 b
part 38
Epilogue
sneak a peak
& new story &

part 24

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By bloomysravs143

Hey guys im here i got some time to write the part,, if its short then im sorry aafter my exams ill give a big part ok
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Man: i think there is a lot of wrk for me here comes inside making a hufff faace
Nan: darling see na he became like this again😭
Man:(removing the hat)love dont worry when RAJ MALHOTHRA is here then no fear (i know u all are maaster minds and s all answers that u commented are right)
Manik:DAD!! wt is he doing here and why he is speaking like that i mean very casually and why the hell he is calling my girl as love.
Fab 3 gasps😱😱
He goes near tom who is facing his back cluching his handss to cntrl he just pats his back turns him and careses his forehead a white shiny light comes from his hands which made tom to go into sleep, tom falls on raj and raj hugs him and carries him to toms room on his back made his lie down covers duet and comes out closing the door.

All this are seen by f4 made a shock face, here down all the girls run to raj hugs him and cries,while boys are just holding them selves not to go near him as girls needed him the most now

Raj controls girls and move to boys and hugs them(cabir,edvid)

Fab4 comes down manik directly goes near raj running and stands infront of him with huge tears in his eyes which are making difficult to see eachother rubs there eyes harshly and without wasting any time they hugged and cried

Maniks pov:
I missed him a lot these dayss neyo doesnt make me to meet him if i want him to meet me then she allows only a day that to in the mansion itself,i even ddont know the reason y she behave like thaat but now i dont even wannnt to leave frm my dad i want him to hide him under his wings so that i wont go that hell
Manik:i missed u papa😭😭😭😭
Raj:😢 i missed u too son
End of pov

Manik is just ranting papa papa...
All the family saw him with tears in there eyes as they know much raj missed his son and he used to say everything about him when he comes back after his visit neyo didnt even allow him to keepp a picture of him

Nandini is already  crying and this scene made her more messy cuz she already faced the situation he used to cry hiding in the crook of her neck when his father leaves him she know how badly he misses his father

she ran to her room,,thiss was seen by edvid,cavya,bella
They followed her to console her davids head is a mess cuz he is listening all the mind talks without even concentrating we caan say he is also mess tears are flowing continuously seeing raj and manik in that state and donot forget about ed he is no less

All reached the room to console there baby
If it crosses its limits no one can cntrl her this time like happened in the last time

All the kids in the room made her sleep edvid sat either side of her legs cabir  on chair beside the bed navya bella on the either side carsing her hair
Ed:i think he is creating this scene to make baby weak
Dav:i cant see her like that
Bella:now dad(tom)is also not in a situation to control her like last time
Cab:that scene still plays infont of my eyes
Nav: that time he was absorbing all her powers ,he is doing the same now we should not let that happen

Edvid:lord zues! Help ur child

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Which one u like the relation ship between

Father and son
Raj and bacha clain
Raj and tom
Between the younger clain relationship

So this was for today as i promised i came as i got a holiday between my exams and next one will be after my exams only

Until then
Bye
Ill miss u
Ur writer😍😍😘😘

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