for this rewrite, some things are changing majorly, such as:
- the main character, known as Y/N in the original work, will just be referred to as ___. (the y/n thing is just weird to me now)
- in addition to that, the book will change from the first person to the second person (so, using words like you and your instead of I and my)
- the plot will change slightly, and chapters will be added and taken away to fill in plot holes and get rid of things that don't make sense. (ex; Jennie appearing the way she did. like?? girl what?? and no one ever exploring why exactly ___ was sent to the other world in the first place. and why Jung broke up with her- god, i could go on)
- I plan to make it more realistic, slower-paced, and without the weird lurches and unneeded twists.
- most of all, I want to build the characters personalities more and make them less one-sided and cringeworthy.
- book 2 (ephemeral) will be unpublished because that book is horrible and never should've been written, no other reason lol.
- and lastly, some other characters are undergoing name changes since i took the names from real people in a bout of laziness! Lalisa will be known as Kyo, Jennie will be known as Jiyuu, and Jung will be known as Jun. I'm sorry if this turns out to be confusing, but I don't think it'll be too hard, as their actions will still be the same and whatnot.