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PERCY POV
Chaos opened a portal with had this deep purple colour with Serling pinkish purple. When I walk through the portal I was meet with an astonishing view, my eyes were meet with a land which has never been seen before, a castle and many many houses all white, and the people in this city /heaven were not all humans they looked like some creatures and monsters, but all peace full. as I walked deeper into the city I was just, just.... amazed and the beauty of this city, it was all so peaceful and felt so right to stay here.
Time skip _________________________
It has been quite long since I am to the land of chaos. I was made the heir of the universe and was now the son of Chaos. But I was so strong that I could beat Chaos with 80% of my energy. But you know what he never came to me and tried to decide weather I should live and he never doubted my loyalties towards him like some other people did.....(I am not gonna take any name *cough Zeus cough)
I had also gone on many missions and had actually enjoyed my time on this land. But their memories still haunted me and her words still brought up the old wounds.
I am gonna write more to this