u r my everything(completed)

By bloomysravs143

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this story continues frm d day after talent hunt. where manik makes a big mistake in his life lets see will... More

charectors;1
part 1
note
part 2.
part-3
part:4
sad
Part 6
Part 7
pictures
part-8
part-9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
part-13
Part-14
part 15
part 15b
answers plzzz
Part 15 C
part-16
part-17
part-18
part-19
part-20
note:
part-21
choose one
my new short story
thankuuu
part 24
only becz of u😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
part 25
part 26
part 27
Part 28
Part 29
part.....
part-30
problem on part 30
part 31
question and answer
part-32
be careful
part 33
part 34
new characters intro
review
new story
part 35
part 36
doubts
+ve
part 37
part 37 b
part 38
Epilogue
sneak a peak
& new story &

part-23

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By bloomysravs143

Hey guys sry for the late

Lets get into the story..

Next day morning....

All are having dinner cabir and nandu are teaching hindi to ed sitting either side sm wt like this
Ca:bhai this one is called khanaa
(Showing food)
Ed:kaanaa
Nan:(pointing the hand) this is haath
Ed:hath
Seeing this all are giggling and some are trying hard to not laugh

As they are laughing dav felt some negative waves and saw towards its direction but in that direction none were there and suddenly he is out control and not able to use any powers of his he zoonedout it was like as if some one dragged hin in his senses he fabdll back on the chair
in his consious:
Voice: U CANT ABLE TO CATCH ME,,, IM VERY STRONG NOW AND THAT LADY RICHARD WILL ALSO BE MINE NONE CAN DO ANY THING AND EVEN THAT ZUES ALSO CAN'T DO ANY THING HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA

with that the voice went off from his mind,,,,he opened his eyes only to see his family fully panicked and fab3 also in worry and druv is facking the worry

Everyone concentrated on david but all forgot about ed who can also see what dav saw is lying on the floor catcging his head and this was sawn by manik he rushed to him and put his head on his lap and made him to drink the water he unknowingly caresed his hair ,, by this a unknown power went in ed and he opened his eyes only to see manik and by now everyone came to him saw ed all are worried except nandini she was astonished to see some kind of glow which was emitting when he was carsing ed's hair

After some time edvid said evrything wt they saw and both hugged nandini from side as they dont want her to face that type of situation again

Tom got up and came infront of nandini sat on his knees took her hands in his caresed them with thumb and planted and kiss leaned on them and started shedding tears.....he was soo worried more than others and now his worry reached peaks he cant able to control his emotions
He got up making everyone to gasp at his anger and the eyes changed their colour more

(Sm wt like this)
They heard raining and thundering out side everyone understood that its because of there father and uncle who is doing all this rishu went to his father so he can try to calm him
But no.  Ntngs happening all the time his anger was controllaable but not now he was just murmuring tom:how can he,hw can he

Cabir was shocked as its his first time to witness his anger as he used to be his buddy like but not now
Suddenly some thing struck in navyas mind, she went to edvid and bella and said
Lets call uncle
Thats it in a jiffy ed went to his room picked up the phone and called him
Ed:uncle u need to be here ASAP ur frnd is out of cntrl
Os:(panicked) ill be there.
This was it and turned back to go down he hearrdd some breaking noice he ran to see his father breaking everything outside it was thundering,raining heavily he throwed a vase its pices were shattered in aair and about to fall on fab4 but........they opened there eyes as they didnt feel anything they shocked to see a sheild on them created by our own nandu standing in front of manik

(Ignor all take just the sheild its from my fav cartoon winx club.who knows winx raise ur hands if u guys like i caan add there costumes over here as stellaa is a very grt fashion designer😜)
Manik wwas happy as he thought she still do cares him always his thoughts were back when nandu said "all of u people go up staris" she came out of the sheild before manik could caatch her they thought they have to wallk with that ball but to there surprize they are flying in the air and landed upstairs and the sheild was gone down here his anger is not at all going down they were worried for there father,uncle
In this mean time they heard a sounnd from the door a man stood over there with a caap coveering his face f4 are alsso seeing from upstairs

Man:i think there is much more wrk fr me to complete
Nan:darling
Edvid:(releif)pops
Bella and naavya:dad
Caabir:unccle
F4:??????
++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Sso guys this is it for today
Ok dont forget to aanswer aand whom do u think about the new chaarector????

Ok. Byeeee
Thanku fr accepting my wrk
Thanku
Ur writer😘😘😘

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