Ockham's Razor: A Deductive R...

By RichardLittle8

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An ad hoc gang perpetrated a nearly flawless bank heist. Now, the Benefactor who ordered the heist is out to... More

Title Page and Dedication
PART 1 - INITIATION
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
PART 2 - EXECUTION
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
PART 3 - RESISTANCE
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
PART 4 - RESTITUTION
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
PART 5 - RESOLUTION
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70

Chapter 17

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Outside the hotel, Ian grabbed Dean and Lauren and dragged them into the lea of the building from where he had planned his entry into the hotel.

"Alright, I don't like this. I want to make that clear. This is not what I expected." He caught himself subconsciously rubbing the spot on his head where he had been hit. He quickly dropped his arm.

Lauren, in her terse persona, countered "You think we volunteered for this? I'm stuck doing this. So, let's get it out of the way and then we can avoid having to ever deal with each other again."

Dean, looking like he was enjoying the others discomfort, smiled.

"Did you guys get a Traveltel Motel key?" asked Ian.

Lauren opened her envelope and pulled out the key. Dean just nodded.

"Ok, what do we do now?" Ian chafed at being manipulated like he was. He was looking for any way out of this, and if Dean or Lauren had the answer, then he would be very thankful for it.

Lauren shook her head in defeat. "I think we need to go through with this, just do what the Benefactor says and get him off our back." She sneered when she mentioned the Benefactor. This was a good sign. Ian was warming up to the terse woman. He considered her an ally. Her reliability might become an asset, if she had some.

Dean finally broke his silence. "Well, I don't know about you, but I'm going home. Do you want to meet up tomorrow?"

Ian, shocked at Dean's decision to not go to the Traveltel Motel, stared at Dean. Dean returned his stare, almost daring Ian to do something.

Then it struck Ian. Why go to the Traveltel Motel? There were no instructions to go to that hotel. There was just a hotel key. Perhaps there was an implied task to go to the hotel, but nothing stated. He smiled. "I'm going home too."

Now both Dean and Lauren stared at him, Lauren like she wanted to protest and Dean because he was being subverted. Ian, with a grin, explained "If we apply Ockham's Razor, the decision becomes simple. Option 1, this is all an elaborate ploy to control us completely so we are forced to carry out the Benefactor's plan. And staying at the Traveltel is a crucial part of the plan. Option 2, the Benefactor is providing us with as much opportunity to get this job done to his satisfaction, including providing a distraction-free workplace without us knowing too much about each other. Simplest solution is the right one." With that, he turned and headed across the street to catch a bus back to his neighbourhood.

Dean asked him, "What's that got to do with razors, dude?"

Lauren called, "What time and where will me meet?"

"At the Traveltel Motel, tomorrow at eleven!"

"What room?"

"Guess!" Ian did not doubt that the room would be 468.

With that Dean and Lauren turned their own ways and left. Ian continued to the bus stop silently giggling to himself about razors.

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