u r my everything(completed)

By bloomysravs143

289K 10.7K 770

this story continues frm d day after talent hunt. where manik makes a big mistake in his life lets see will... More

charectors;1
part 1
note
part 2.
part-3
part:4
sad
Part 6
Part 7
pictures
part-8
part-9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
part-13
Part-14
part 15
part 15b
answers plzzz
Part 15 C
part-16
part-17
part-18
part-19
part-20
note:
choose one
my new short story
part-23
thankuuu
part 24
only becz of u😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
part 25
part 26
part 27
Part 28
Part 29
part.....
part-30
problem on part 30
part 31
question and answer
part-32
be careful
part 33
part 34
new characters intro
review
new story
part 35
part 36
doubts
+ve
part 37
part 37 b
part 38
Epilogue
sneak a peak
& new story &

part-21

3.5K 187 10
By bloomysravs143

Hey guys sorry for the late im free form my oral exams and i have done good in those

And for all thanku because i know u would be saying cngrts writer😎😎😛😛😛😘😘
Okok ill be getting into the story before i could try all ur slipperss 😅😅
_________________________________
Manik stood infront of the office which had its own beauty with a globe like structure in the middle

Evalin's office (Eva comp.org)
He was very happy that he was going to meet the best bussiness women who had suceeded more in her life in a little span
Maniks pov
Omg im here hahah patnership with this company can change ME(malhotra empire) future hufff wait i feel wait on my shoulder ... i turned to see fab 3 is present wait what r they doing here aghhh cant they live me alone for some time hufffff i think i should act surprized happy and alll sigh....
M:heyyy guys wt r u doing here(uffo mujhe naa acting feildd me chalijaani chaahiye wait aaj kya hogya mujhe why iam....)
Aliya:aree we came here so that u can stay strong
M:(stay strong my foot)hoooo thanks aliya
Druv:ok lets go in buddy
We moved in i was amazed with the interiors

Reception:

We all went to reception mukthi alruv sait on the sofas i thought did they came to show offf i asked the receptionist about the appoinntment she said i have to wait for 15 min as she is in some meeting.i came sat on the sofa i was thinking y iam getting a wrong vibration from start even if they talk also my mind is working in different way im cursing my own like y my mind didnt worked all these dayss god whats happening
My thoughts are disturbed by a voice
V: sir u have been called
I took all my belongings and moved to the direction as the receptionist stood with a man
Man: hello sir im broc helson evalin mam ps
Broc helson

Very sincere to evalin co.org personal secretory of eva and also very trust worthy person..

M: hello mr.broc nice to meet u
Br: follow me
We all followed he is good at speak very less i think hufff gooood wt happened to me today y iam speaking to mysellf i think i should go meet psyciartist
.........

I like the interiors (if want pics of the office ask)we moved to the meeting room it was big room woaahhhh

And while comming towards this conference room i saw a small meeting room

I really like it i think i should also design one type of thisone so that my team members get new view and also they get refreshend
(Woah pata nai aaj sir ko khya hua apne aap batkaraha hai heeheh kya manik ji kya hua ???)
We all sat in the room broc went to infrom evalin and after a long time im seeing my frnds from the entry i didnt even took a glance over them they are just wandering and oogling at the interiors hufff these felllows aghhhhhhh wts happening😭😭😭😭😭

My thoughts are disturbed by the sound of click of door brock entered

Brocs attair
and opend the door for evalin i was nervous and she entered

Maniks attair

Nandini entered
My pov: woahhh e kya nadini aagay srysry me tho stry me aagya
Nan: its ok writer no prblm
Me:hehhe😅tqs nandini
Aliya:tum wt r u doing here

Nan:wo me puch na hai et u ppl are doing here
Muk:tum aisa baath kar rahe ho jaise hum tumhare office pe aaya hai
(Infact its correct na)

Broc: mind ur tounge ms. I dont know who u r but mind ur bussiness and contro ur tounge none has riggt to speak against her she is
Nan: let me introduce my self broc
Ok (she came and sat on the head chair and manik got up)
Iam evalin EVALIN NANDINI RICHARD
Now broc who has appointment
By this all mouths are zipped f3 shock nandini rocks
Broc says she has an appointment with mr.malhothra
Nan:so here im evalin bussiness is bussiness so all of u(pointing at fab3) u also have appointment
D:no we came with manik
Nan:is he a baby or wt get out dont waste my time and u mr.malhotra if u want yo waste my time u also can go out
M:no nandu....
Nan:its evalin/ms.richard for u
M:sry msm evalin here is my presentation
After an hour meeting finishe and she said we will go through this once aagain and w'll approch u and she went off
Manik was stunned he is regretting his mistake wt he had done in the past
(Ab regret kaarke kya karega us din tho wo tumhari pair(legs) pakadke rok rahithi aur ek chance keliye maangrahithi tune kya kia chii)snapped his brain
Crt haina guys gusse me jo bhi bhol dete hai but hum ye nahi socchthe hum kya bol rahe baad me gussa kam hone ke baad jab humko yaad aata hai ki hum kya bole but time etna aage nikalgaya hoga ki ek sry se unka dil chipak nahi jaateutna toot chuka hotha
Esa hi hai nandini aur manik ki relaation ek taraf manik ki pyaar ke liye nandini apni saari powers chod ke ek mamuli seeda sadaa ladki jaise jeena chahthi hai aur ek taraf manik unki self obbessed frnds ke liye apni pyaar chodi hai
Kya haal hai na
Chalo phir next chappy me dekh the hai oo voice kiska hai and who is the one witb sweat all over who want a man to be his servant lets seeeeee
--------------------------------------------------
















Part 22:
Kya socha chaligye hu heheheh joke tha

In Rm
David and eddy are very angry they are very dessperate to see nandini they just want to see her her mind link is blocked as she is with humans she never links with them. After some time
She came inside the mansion
And edvid started questioning aand peg also started asking
Ed:where were u pumpkin
David: why didnt u notice that u didnt even on ur mindlink
Now nandini come to know that y her brothers are angry on her
Nan: sry bhayyu i didnt notice i was in the meeting sry
Ed:pumpkin come here sit (made her sit)
See bachha we were worried for u and see thos time he came with a new plan to kill u and us so before itself dav is observing all the f5 members one day he heaard a voice that made one of them him he is observing us mainly U
And upto now we didnt have any clue in that 4 we cant find who he caught
Dav:that became more difficult for me to identify and baby u should be care full with out uncles(bodyguards)u are not leaving the house and one more if u are in the garden uncles and peg or any other of ours should be with u and while sleeping u should sleep with dad / near me did u get that upto festiva u must and should follow these
Edvid:do u get that
Nandini was shocked and surprised and felt very lucky
Nandini just nodded her head and hugged her both brothers then cabir caame aand saw thiss eye catching scene prayed lord zues to make them live happily came near them
C:lagta hai yaha sab mujhe bhul gaye😭 bhai bhai na rahaaa
Ed: stop ur naaaaauuutankiii cabu
C:ed dont speak hindi agaain its horriible pahle seeko baad me baath karo
Dav: hahaha ur right edddy ur speech in hindi sucks man
Ed: not more than uu idiot
Like this cabnan are laughing seeing both the brothers fight
4 pair of eyes are watching both laughing 2 pair with happy as well as sad tears and other 2 pairs with anger and lustfull eyes

The first two pair of eyes are areee

S he is our own manik who iss happy that his 2 ssouls are laaughing like pigs and also sad for being far not understaaanding them
App logonne kya socha ki me hamare maanik ko villan bana doongi nai bilkul nahi

And. Another 2 pair of eyes whose eyes are red are none other than

Yes he is under the spell of that voice as he already hates manan and his lust over power made him weak and it became to the voice to take over
Voice is nonother than hades yes he is hades who waants kill nandini and want to take over the powers from hercules and now nandini his target
Words:1450
============================
So this is for today i tried my level best to keep my promise now its ur duty to keep ur promise to vote and comment
Thank u
Ur witere

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

358K 24.7K 48
Hello people am back with another story. By now, you all must be knowing that I write plots which are serial related. So here is another Manan fan fi...
372K 22.4K 35
Copyright ©️ 2021 the_bogummy All rights reserved. No part of this book/book may be reproduced without the writer's permission on any kind of sites...
356K 21.9K 39
And it began with that one night. One night that changed everything. One night that changed all equations. One night that broke all relations. One ni...
35.8K 2.1K 15
πŸ’› This FF is based on Rebirth of MaNan. This basically starts Talent Hunt. All this story original updates are on Wattpad so I would request everyon...