Our Secret Love Story - AvNei...

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Peep to know about the story becouse it's secret πŸ˜‰ (UNDER EDITING) Highest ranking - #3 in AvNeil (08.06.1... Mais

About the story & Cover
Glimpse
Character sketch
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
TEASER 1
CHAPTER 4
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CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
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CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
TEASER 2
CHAPTER 10 (a)
Update
CAPTER 10 (b)
NEW STORY
CHAPTER 11 (b) - LAST CHAPTER
New Story

CHAPTER 11 (a)

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Sorry for late update 😭😭😭😭 . I was thinking to update ot before my exam start but some how i can't  and my exam got over so I'm updating it. I donno u hv still any interest in it or not😢

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Continuation from previous chappy,




KW: Princess u here!?
R: Ha dady mujhe andar nahi bulayenge?
KW: are ha ha ao andar ao but princes ko achanak aapni dady ka yaad kaise ayi?

   After coming there .
R: dad mein ab se humesha k liye aapke pass rehna chahti hu.
KW: suddenly kiya hua princess sab thik to hai na?
R: dad I'm just pissed  off with this middle class lifestyle.  Mom meri koi v iccha puri nahi kar pati ha . I am just bored of it.  I want to be with u dad from now.
KW: chalo atleast tume samajh mein to aya I'm very happy for u princess. ( hugging her)

R: Dad where is bhai wo achanak se humare college group se chale aye mein v bore ho rahi thi isiliye chali ayi. Is he with neil sir?
KW: ( shocked hearing about neil from riya) (in mind- princess ko neil k wareme kase pata chala k wo don saath ha??)

R: what happen dad? Don't worry i know everything.  Bhai has told me  everything.
KW: everything? ???
R: yes dad yehi k bhai avni se pyaar karta ha aur neil sir ko raste hatana chahta ha aur bhai ne yeh v bataya ka aap log drug dealing k kaam v karte ha.

Kunal's jaw touched the floor hearing this😂😂

KW: what? Yeh sab tumhe karan ne bataya?
R: to aur kon batayega😑. But no worry I will not say anything to anyone.  I'm also with u na.
KW: yes princess it's true.
    And being emotional fool he himself started explaining about his dark secrets.

KW: but yeh karan avni k pyaar mein itna pagal ho gaya ha k neil ko kidnap kar baitha ab humare plan unsuccessful na ho jay.
R: neil sir kaha ha dad?
KW: ek bohot hi secret place mein.
R: secret! Where dad please tell me na.
KW: there is a underground room in our office and the gate is in our parking area .  No body knows about it.

R: ( chuckling ) but aab sab jaan gayd ha dad.
KW: what? Kehna kiya chate ho tum ?
R: dear dad i hv  a secret camera with me aur aapne apki jo mahan karnamo k wareme avi kahani batayi na sab live streaming ho rahi ha to the commissioner 😏
KW: what?😲  how can u do this to us. You betrayed us😠 i will not spare u ( pointing his gun towards her).
R: dad (a mare sound went from her mouth as whisper. seeing her dad is pointing gun towards her a lone tear slipped from her eyes unknowingly ).

    Kunal was just about to shoot riya meantime kunal got hit by a bullet (sirf haath pe laga ha 😂)

KW:  (looking at the direction ) Avni😰 ..... Riya to tum yaha puri police gorce lekar ayi ho😠
A: yes mr. Wahi aap jase demgorous insaan k paas hum riya ko kase vej sakte ha akele. Constable arrest him. Aab tumhare bete ki bari agar neil ko kuch hua na to kisiko pata v nahi chalega k tum aur tumhara pyaara  beta kaha gayeb ho gaya kiuke camera ab off ha.😠
A: ali jalgi chalo hume neil ko bechana ha aur sayed vidyut aur baki sab v waha hi hoga.
R: avni mujhe v tumlogoke saath ana ha.
A: but it may be demgorous for u.
R: please avni.
A: ok.




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Not proof read.

Another update is on the way , the last chappy sure😅. Mein 1 chappy mein hi end karna chahti thi but wo bohot long ho jata😥.
   And I'm expecting a good response from u all for this last chapters😊 please vote and comment.



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