The Wrong Order of Us

By jowanderstruck

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Meet. Date. Fall in love. That's how it was supposed to be but Andi and Louie got it all in the wrong order. More

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By jowanderstruck

12 April 2026, 7:29 AM

Andi:
Sorry, I had to leave early.
I'm driving  my dad's family
from the hospital. Didn't wanna
wake you up. I had a great time
last night. Enjoy your day.

10:02 AM

Louie:
G'morning.
Wished you woke me up
but no worries.
Everything okay?

1:56 PM

Andi:
Yes. The baby's home safely.

Louie:
Congrats again!
Does she have a name already?

Andi:
Astrea Louisse Sebastian

Louie:
Nice!

Andi:
I thought of the second name.

Louie:
Really?
Good job!
She'll be an awesome girl for sure.
Like her older sister.

Andi:
She won't be like me.
She'd be so much better.

Louie:
Because you're there to guide her.

Andi:
Thank you, Louie.
And yes, her name
is inspired by you.

Louie:
I had a hunch.
LOL
I miss you already.

2:34 PM

Louie:
Can I see you again tonight?

Andi:
I have dinner with Chris
and Dianne tonight.

Louie:
Oh okay.
😢

Andi:
Besides, I think I need you
to miss me some more.
So the next time we see each
other, you'll kiss me already.

Louie:
I didn't know you want me to.

Andi:
I thought my lipstick last night
would've give you a hint.
It's called Please Me.

Louie:
Baby, why do you say
things like that?

Andi:
Baby?

3:12 PM

Louie:
Yes, baby.
Do you wanna be my baby?

Andi:
Lol.

Louie:
You don't want to?

Andi:
Didn't say that.

3:15 PM

Louie:
Open your door.

Andi:
You rang the doorbell?

7:07 PM

Andi:
Thanks for driving me.
Chris asked why didn't
you just join us.

Louie:
I was just wearing slippers.

Andi:
*bedroom slippers

Louie:
LMAO
I wanted to get to you
as soon as possible.
Totally worth it.

Andi:
😘

Louie:
Can't get enough.
There's no turning back.
It's you and me now.

Andi:
It's us now.

Louie:
I love the sound of that.

Andi:
Me too.

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