So this is the part you have all been anticipating, the result! Well here you have it👇
★TEEN-FICTION GENRE
* Doubtful Poems by Hopeful Teenager by KaitlinJackisch
Description 7
Title 10
Plot 22
Character 13
Cover 7
Grammatical Structure 19
Overall Enjoyment 6
Follow: No; -5
Total 79
* The Murder of Golden Boy by GreenAlaskas(Young Aldult Mystery)
Description 10
Title 9
Plot 25
Character 15
Cover 9
Grammatical Structure 19
Overall Enjoyment 10
Follow: No; -5
Total 92
* One Paper Plane At A Time by kristelwrites(Young Aldult)
Description 9
Title 10
Plot 24
Character 15
Cover 10
Grammatical Structure 18
Overall Enjoyment 9
Follow: No; -5
Total 90
* The Art of Loving by AndreaaaRam
Description 10
Title 10
Plot 23
Character 13
Cover 7
Grammatical Structure 18
Overall Enjoyment 6
Follow: yes
Total 87
Alike by Hallie_May
Description 8
Title 9
Plot 21
Character 14
Cover 7
Grammatical Structure 18
Overall Enjoyment 8
Follow: yes
Total 85
Judged by Blissxfulll
★GENERAL FICTION GENRE
* Castle(The Badland Series) by EmberShy
description 8/10
title 9/10
plot 19/25
character 12/15
cover 10/10
grammatical structure 16/20
overall enjoyment 8/10
total 82/100
* Speaker's way by YvonneKindle
description 10/10
title 8/10
plot 24/25
character 13/15
cover 7/10
grammatical structure 20/20
overall enjoyment 9/10
total 91/100
* Soulmate Cookies by findmysteryinme
description 9/10
title 10/10
plot 22/25
character 12/15
cover 7/10
grammatical structure 18/20
overall enjoyment 8/10
total 87/100
* The Great Pretender by bcpratt
description 10/10
title 10/10
plot 23/25
character 15/15
cover 8/10
grammatical structure 20/20
overall enjoyment 10/10
total 96/100
* Yakari by Pris_cillia
description 9/10
title 10/10
plot 22/25
characters 13/15
cover 7/10
grammatical structure 18/20
overall enjoyment 10/10
total 90/100
HORROR GENRE
* The 200 Murders of 1977 by EmberShy
Description: 7/10
The author made a very short description and I really think he/she could've described a lot more in their description. I think they could have made a bone-chilling description to frighten the reader before even opening up the book, this would also add to the fact that the book is a horror book and is intended to scare you out of your socks.
Title: 10/10
The title of the book is very appropriate and fully describes what the book is about.
Plot: 25/25
The plot is very captivating and the idea is shown throughout the book perfectly. The author explains things very nicely as well as the events and how one situation affects multiple other ones. The way each plot twist links with the others is very interesting and enjoyable to read. Like when Millie killed Tom in one chapter and then in a later chapter Tom's fellow Gorifiers went and killed Seth as revenge for Tom's death, but Seth's death was also linked with one of The Gorifiers who were broken-hearted.
Character: 14/15
I'm taking that single point away because sometimes the swop in character POVs isn't clearly shown and can be a tad confusing to some readers. The POV is constantly changing between different characters and therefore needs to be clearly stipulated to avoid any confusion.
Cover: 9/10
It's a beautiful cover but I don't necessarily think that it shows the 'horror' of the book. Whether you like it or not, people always judge a book by its cover, it's what captivates a readers attention to read the description after all. So if your book is a horror book it needs to have that horror factor, if you know what I mean.
Grammatical structure: 18/20
There were very few grammatical errors, only a few every now and then. But I think the biggest thing was the sentences were very lengthy. There were many instances where the author should've made one of his/her sentences into two instead. It would make the flow of the paragraph a lot better and could put more emotion or emphasis on what's being written on the paragraph.
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
I really enjoyed reading this book and couldn't put it down. It was very captivating and interesting, leaving me on the edge of my seat to find out who was behind all of the deaths. It was brilliantly written and the author described the bloodthirst and gore of the book beautifully. Just as a little side note: I think the author could add a lot more emotions to the characters and broaden the story a lot by describing in length how the characters feel with their loved ones get murdered and also describe the evil and vile emotions the murderers feel as well when committing a murder.
Total: 93/100
Judged by pixxies02
★FANTASY GENRE
* Obsidian by Siennafrost
Title:7,5
Plot:20
Character:13,5
Cover:10
Grammar:20
Overall:8,5
Total: 88,5
* From Down Under by Alana2215
Description:7,5
Title:10
Plot:14,5
Character:10
Cover:10
Grammar:14
Overall:6,5
Total:72,5
* The Chronicles of Mel-Luo (Book One: The Search) by LadyWazzy
(-6 points for not following)
Description:10
Title:9
Plot:22
Character:15
Cover:10
Grammar:18,5
Overall:8
Total: 86,5
* Death Raven by Arya_nightshade
Description: 10
Title:7
Plot:15
Character:11
Cover:5,5
Grammar:10
Overall:6,5
Total:61,5
Judged by unicorn_jelly_lol
★FANFICTION GENRE
* Brother Revealed: Black Dagger Brotherhood Fanfiction Novel by YvonneKindle
Description: 7
Title: 7
Plot: 24
Character: 14
Cover: 10
Grammatical Structure: 18
Overall Enjoyment: 9
Total: 89%
* Fake Love by pixxies02
Description: 7
Title: 7
Plot: 23
Character: 15
Cover: 3
Grammatical Structure: 19
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Total: 84%
* Why Do You Love? By AuthorLSN
Description: 7
Title: 9
Plot: 22
Character: 13
Cover: 10
Grammatical Structure: 17
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Total: 88%
* A Future Without Fear - The Vampire Diaries by bloodbrothers1864
Description: 9
Title: 10
Plot: 25
Character: 15
Cover: 7
Grammatical Structure: 19
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Total: 95%
* The Broken Soul | TFP by Lonely_Irene12
Description: 8
Title: 7
Plot: 20
Character: 10
Cover: 7
Grammatical Structure: 15
Overall Enjoyment: 8
Total: 75%
* Red Lies by Socasm
Description: 9
Title: 9
Plot: 23
Character: 13
Cover: 10
Grammatical Structure: 15
Overall Enjoyment: 9
Total: 88%
Judged by jes_uba123
★ROMANCE GENRE
* By Allah's Will by zarinashia
Description 6/10
Title 7/10
Plot 14/25
Character 6/15
Cover 8/10
Grammatical Structure 10/20
Overall Enjoyment 5/10
Total 56/100
* Take Me Back by KatsyDawne
Description 8/10
Title 9/10
Plot 21/25
Character 14/15
Cover 8/10
Grammatical Structure 18/20
Overall Enjoyment 9/10
Total 87/100
* My Heart Meant To Be Yours by SaniaAhmed295
Description 7/10
Title 7/10
Plot 14/25
Character 7/15
Cover 5/10
Grammatical Structure 12/20
Overall Enjoyment 5/10
Total 57/100
* The Knowsy Neighbor by N3c3l3
Description 5/10
Title 7/10
Plot 16/25
Character 8/15
Cover 4/10
Grammatical Structure 13/20
Overall Enjoyment 6/10
Total 59/100
* Smile by Teenagexchaos (User Not Found)
Description 0/10
Title 0/10
Plot 0/25
Character 0/15
Cover 0/10
Grammatical Structure 0/20
Overall Enjoyment 0/10
Total 0/100
* In The Gang Leader's Realm by Legend_Khan
Description 8/10
Title 7/10
Plot 11/25
Character 6/15
Cover 5/10
Grammatical Structure 8/20
Overall Enjoyment 4/10
Total 49/100
* The State I Am by GiovannaSuleiman
Description 8/10
Title 7/10
Plot 18/25
Character 14/15
Cover 7/10
Grammatical Structure 19/20
Overall Enjoyment 8/10
Total 81/100
* Hello There Stranger by franticscribbler
Description 8/10
Title 7/10
Plot 21/25
Character 14/15
Cover 7/10
Grammatical Structure 19/20
Overall Enjoyment 9/10
Total 85/100
* FAITH by ShaunaMc2019
Description 9/10
Title 7/10
Plot 20/25
Character 13/15
Cover 8/10
Grammatical Structure 18/20
Overall Enjoyment 8/10
Total 83/100
* Letting You Go by DanPaul01
Description 8/10
Title 8/10
Plot 20/25
Character 13/15
Cover 7/10
Grammatical Structure 17/20
Overall Enjoyment 7/10
Total 80/100
* Paradise by JuliaRV3
Description 9/10
Title 8/10
Plot 22/25
Character 14/15
Cover 7/10
Grammatical Structure 18/20
Overall Enjoyment 8/10
Total 86/100
Judged by EmberShy
★SHORT STORY(IES) GENRE
* His Resting Place by N3c3l3
Description 10
Title 10
Plot 25
Character 14
Cover 8.5
Grammatical Structure 20
Overall Enjoyment 10
Total 97.5
* Bea's Bedtime Story by EmpressPenguin
Description 3
Title 10
Plot 21
Character 10
Cover 8
Grammatical Structure 18
Overall Enjoyment 9
Total 79
* To Escape Time by w_nnie
Description 10
Title 10
Plot 23
Character 12
Cover 10
Grammatical Structure 20
Overall Enjoyment 10
Total 95
* The Killer's Eyes by Octavius_
* Short Stories by ilovetodrawalot
Description 3
Title 8.5
Plot 20
Character 8
Cover 0
Grammatical Structure 16
Overall Enjoyment 6
Total 61.5
* Unsent Messages by extinct_asterxids
Description 0
Title 10
Plot 18
Character 10
Cover 7
Grammatical Structure 16
Overall Enjoyment 8
Total 69
Judged by shinybubblymia
★CHICK-LIT GENRE
* 24 Weeks and A Day by EmpressPenguin
Description: 9
Title: 7
Plot: 21
Character: 14
Cover: 10
Grammatical Structure: 15
Overall Enjoyment: 6
Total: 81%
* Half Hope, Half Love by lily97000
Description: 10
Title: 9
Plot: 24
Character: 13
Cover: 10
Grammatical Structure: 15
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Total: 91%
Judged by jes_uba123
★VAMPIRE GENRE
*Formerly; Untamed and Wild: Now; Deadly Lessons by QueenNicholson(Romance)
Description 9/10: the description is really good. Finishing by some questions on the story was a good idea to input mystery.
Title 6 /10: she shouldn't have change it.. I think the old one was more odd and less "teacher - student" obvious relationships.
Plot 20/25: The plots has a lot of potential. I think she re-wrote the story, it does feel like she had great ideas at the beginning, but decided to change for some reasons. And because of that I think she lost herself in the writing.
Character 10/15: the protagonists are very reachable. But again, as I think she changed her story, she got caught in the limit date here as well, and didn't really had enough time to perfect them. Also, there are only 2 chapters in her story, so I do believe that with more chapters the characters will reveal themselves better.
Cover 4/10: I don't think the cover really relies to the fantastic/mystery genre of the book. Although it's very esthetic and well presented.. if I didn't knew this was a vampire story, I could have misplaced it for an adults genre one because of the cover.
Grammatical Structure 8/20: I assume, once again that, she got caught in time after choosing to re-write her story. And by so, she didn't had the time to read-proof, and check-spell her work... it really felt like a rush writing..
Overall Enjoyment 5/10: I do have hope for this story; I understand it's not finished, so I believe if she takes the time to go over the 2 first chapters before going further to, it would make a huge improvement. I read another one of her work so I am sure she can improve this story in so many ways.
Total: 62/100
Judged by Marisol_Isaievych
★WEREWOLF GENRE
* Hunter's Shadow by EmmaConnolly379
Description 8/10
Title 7/10
Plot 23/25 - I find it cliche and pretty obvious.
Character 12/15 - Characters are fairly generic for a werewolf story but I might just be picky
Cover 7/10
Grammatical Structure 19/20
Overall Enjoyment 7/10 - The writing quality is strong but I'm just not really a fan of the plot. To me, it feels a little bit forced and cliche but it might be that all werewolf stories are similar. Nevertheless, I am a strict grader so a 7/10 is a pretty high score for me.
Total 83/100
★SCIENCE-FICTION GENRE
* The Children of Frebus by AlienPhantom46(Dystopian)
Description: 10
Title: 10
Plot: 25
Characters: 15
Cover: 10
Grammar: 20
Overall enjoyment:8.5
Total: 97.5
Judged by poppylanelman
★PARANORMAL GENRE
* Innocent as Charged by Black_panther31
Description 7/10
Title 5/10
Plot 14/25
Character 12/15
Cover 6/10
Grammatical Structure 15/20
Overall Enjoyment 7/10
Total 66/100
Judged by EmberShy
★ACTION GENRE
* Sweet Talk Agency by Rose1677
Description: 5
Title: 10
Plot: 20
Character: 14
Cover: 5
Grammatical Structure: 17
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Total: 81%
Judged by jes_uba123
I want to give a quick apology for the delay....it was due to some problems problem's problems....sorry for the two months delay, I think this might he the last contest for this year.
Thank you.