When The Angel Fell For Devil...

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Intorduction
summary
c h a p t e r 1
c h a p t e r 2
Chapter 4 (real)
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
characters
Authors note
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
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Chapter 26
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chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
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chapter 25

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ALEX'S POV

date

I had alot of them in past, but today was different ,EDWARD FUCKING KNIGHT taking me out for date

I know that it his hard for him to actually do these kinds of stuff ...but i dont care , i only thing i want right now is that Edward open up to me and feel the way i feel for him

Looking him in his eyes make me sad ,his eyes always look dull and sad ...there is nothing like satisfaction in it ..it feel like it caused him alot of pain ...i am sure there is something more in the story ...he didn't told me much about his life ...but i know there are alot alot alot of more things

And i am hell sure i will find it out

"We are on mission" i said applying my eye liner ...well i do makeup perfectly

"You put another skin on your self ,buy applying that much foundation" jennie said fake gaging "and what mission" she said closing the P-13 magazine she was reading

"I didn't applied foundation,its just little bit of concealer " i said combing my hairs "and mission to make Edward fall in love with me " i said turning towards her

"Well he is already in love with you,its just he don't want to accept" she said

I cried in annoyance , i mean not litreally cried ,just shout in frustration

"I don't know,, i wanthim iwanthim iwanthim " i was ranting this soo fast

"Stop whining, first go on date ..okay ....we have to make him accept the love for you " she said

"And how???" I asked curiously . I know jennie has potential

She jumps out from bed and flip her hair back

"My child , there are Five steps , Five element of love " she said and sit on near by chair like a queen sit on her throne

She motion me to sit on the ground

What the fuck?

Okay i can bear this ..cause she is helping me ...i quickly sit on the ground folding both of my legs on each other while she was on chair like a fucking queen and i was her slave

Only for Edward

"So whats next , my lord?" I ask very carefully ...if i dont talk to her respectfully ..she will lose her shit and won't tell me ..

And dude jennie can make even a log fall in love with you ...she is such a cupid

Why i didnt ask her help me before?

"Five element " she said opening her palm to show fingers i quickly pull out small notepad out of my pocket and start writing what she is saying

" 1- beauty , attarct him with your beauty , my child there is no chance a person ignore the fact that how his/her partner looking ..so show him how beautiful you can be " she said ..i was listening it very careful and writing things down on a note pad

"2- care , show your partner how much you care for them , make dinner for them ..offer them help , clean there room , do things which make them feel that they are special ," she said , oh this point is nice  , i wrote this down also

"3: intimacy , have intimate movement ..i am not saying to seduce him to love you ,but you have to generate spark between your partner , have a sudden movement of intimacy.  Like fall purposely so he cam save you falling and hit you face on the floor or mud " she said , imagining intimacy with Edward made so blush like hell....i buried my face in my hand and squeal like a child ..i am becaming giddy

Jennie gave me dirty look but i ignore her

"4: jealousy, it is most important .... making your partner jealous ...if he became jealous he will show you his feelings" she said

" And 5 and most important  ignore your partner" she said and this makes me confuse. .i knitted my eyebrow in confusion

"After completing all the steps ...start ignoring him ...so he can miss your presence and crave for you ...he will go crazy , trust me " she said

And i was like damn ..thats right

After writimf everything ... Jennie is now no use of me ...so i kick her chair hard .

"Common get up ..we have to go college and then shopping cause buddy i have date today " i said

"You are bitch you know?" She said getting up and swing her bag over her shoulder ..i just rolls my eyes

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We came in hall of mansion ..seeing my father and max talking and laughing on god knows what

"Daddyyyyy you changed the party " i said hugging him

"Oh no sweetheart ..its just we are, i am soo fond of max ..." He said

"Really? What you did to my father max" i said playfully

"Alex ....i see father figure in him" he said looking down with a sad smile ...edward told me that max was orphan and he picked him up a while ago from road where he was passed out of hunger , i feel bad for him

"You know i can share him " i said and he give me chuckle

" Common lets go we are already late for class" jennie said pulling me with her my father stuck his tongue on her ..and she gave him flying kiss

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I am in my boring class ...i miss edward coming to college....he was great time pass

And i am so excited for today's date ..lets not talk about that

Suddenly my phone vibrate ..

"I cant wait to be with you today "

Yayayayayayay ..it was messege from edward .....

"Me too boy , " i replied

"See you soon " he replied back and i broke into grin

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Bell rang and indicate that we can ran away from the hell hole

I have free period but not jennie. ...she is in class ...so we decided that i will wait for her and then we will go for shopping

I am in parking lot ..and moving towards my car with bounce in my steps and swaying my handbag in air

I came to stop in front of my car ... suddenly i felt presence behind me

I quickly turn around ..and came face to face with non other than

"Simba" i wisper his name
"Alex" he said with a same tone

I come forward and close the gap between us ....event from past came in my mind and i took step back which made me hit my back in the car

"What are you doing" i asked

"I came to see you " he said ...he looks towards me like he is going to eat me up ...he is not even blinking his eyes

"Well, you did ,now you can leave " i said and tried to walk but he grabbed my arm and pin me to the car

"What the hell?" I said , trying to break the hold ..but he lean and kiss behind my ear

"Alex you know ....when i woke up ,you are the first thing come yo my mind .......i always think about you .... goddamn i know how much it take not to just bend you and fuck you hard" he wisper in my ear ....it disgust me to my core ....

"L-leave.me.simba" i say through greeted teeth and still trying to push him

"I love you alex , be mine " he said

"You are being unreasonable simba .how can you love me ? You dont even k-know me ....we met only two times " i said trying to manipulate him and ran away from here

"I know everything Alex ... everything about you ..." He said

"Which shampoo you use , which body wash you use .. you fav food , music, places .. everything" he said looking in my eyes

Thats enough.  I push him hard. .like really hard. . he little goes back and i found my chance to wiggle out of hs hold

"Let me tell you one thing simba ...dont ,dont ever do this to me again .....and i mean it .....i dont have any interest in you. .so you better leave my way"i said amd walk past by him ....he again grab my hand forcefully .. but this time ..i turn around and slap him hard on his beautifully disgusting face

His held tilted to oppsite side.    He was in movement of shock ....i spare my hand and ran away as fast as possible.. not because i am afraid or something ..its just ..i cant bear his presence ....i just hope i dont see him ever again

But something screams inside me that it is not the last time i am going to see him

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After , little too disturbing encounter with simba .....i found jennie and we both came for shopping at Antonio's place ,he is the same person who gave Edward's men makeover ...i know him from sooo long and almost all my clothes are from here

Simba came in my mind again .. what is the problem of that bitch

I am not overthinker ...so anything with simba is not effecting me much , and i have my first date with my cookie ..so i can't let me mood ruin

My phone rings again ,Edward's name flash with his photo only in boxers ...well once upon a time i strom inside his room ..i was basically making a vedio blog so i was shooting everything and when i strom inside his room ...he was in his boxer ..he tried to hide but no use ..later i screenshot the particular part as a photo

I picked up the call

"Where are you?!!he shout from ther side

I am coming in an hour bitch!!" I didnt told him that i am doing shopping,

" Come fast baby" he wisper

"On my way cookie" i said through a big grin

And then i cut the call

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After hours of digging and almost made antonio's place mess We decide to took a beautiful dark maroon dress

Well its first element of love showing your partner how beautiful you can be ..so i am just completing first step

After putting the dress on
I straight went to have makeup and hair

(Dress)


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I am standing in front of Edward's mansion alone ..well edward somehow threaten jennie ..to disappear and let him have me for sometime alone

Now i dont know what i am supposed to do ...would he even serious of date!? ...or he was just messing with me ... He didn't even came to pick me up from outside ...and didn't call ..

Well i sighed ..i dont know what to do ....i will be soo embarrassed if i show up dressed like this and he didn't want to take me to date

Well i will just say that i was going to attained a party and didn't dressed for him ..than i will catch a cab than will go to airport and catch a flight for honolulu and gonna start a new life ..well honolulu it actual place near Hawaii ...at end of world

Sounds like a plan

With another deep sigh

I start walking inside ... There was six guards standing there . 

As soon as they seen me ...they remove something from there back

Oh my FUCKInG god ....

They all have different type of flowers

They all stretch there hands towards me ...with a smile

Didnt expect this

I happily took each one of them with the biggest smile on my fac3

"Where is edward" i asked one of them  .. snuggle deep into flower ..this is smells so good

"Go ahead mam ..you will know" he said

I listened to him and go inside ..there another 6 man ...with a shopping cart with them ...i walked with confusion

"Take this mam" one of them said and i took it ...and all six of them start throwing different,almost hundreds of chocolates .

Oh my FUCKInG god ....is this charlie and the chocolate factory??

After my cart almost full 9f chocolate ...let gave me big smile and hand me a card

I opened it and foumd very neat writing of Edward

"I know this is lame ..i shouldn't listen Jennie and you mother ..but what i supposed to do ? Alex my life ...now turn your heels and come to backyard ,i am waiting

Your cookie"

First this is soooo beautiful!!!!!!!

Well ending up In Edward's toucher room ...give him this disasteric change ..i should have go there sooner

And second ..how he kmows i am wearing heels? I should have wore shoes

I push all the thought behind my mind and ask one of the man to put all this in my room and start running towards backyard

The whole path to backyard was decorated by flowers ..and there was purple carpet underneath my legs ..a long purple carpet. 

And also there was photo frame stands which was as tall as my height ..and each of them have my photo on it

With captions ofcourse

You light my dark world ...cherry ..
One of the photo had this

While other one

You know? You are like my shield  on one photo

I didn't knew how i came to this ..but alex is you are mine  .on another ...well shit gone chessy

Anyways there was 100s of photos ...like really hundreds ...i was like i am in heaven ... Edward doimg soo much for me ...

I followed the purple carpet which leads to back side of backyard

In backyard there was a big big big box almost like 10 foot

Oh my god edward goes to this level for our first date its like dream

I go near the box .. there was ribbon attach to it..i slowly pull the ribbon ...when it didn't came of i pull it little harder

This time it came of .. i was feeling like i will bury under the wall of the box . But manage to quickly ram away before it fall on me

When box opened ..i forgot to breathe ..like litreally forget to breathe

They was almost 1000ssss of balloons flying in air ...white ,purple, orange , red , yellow ..sooo many colours

It was the most beautiful scene in my whole life ...

But the next thing i saw ... was more beautiful

When balloons flied i see


MY FUCKING GODDDDDDDDDD

BUT WHAT THE FUCK HE IS WEARING!!?????????~

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Mic drop!!!
KILL ME!!!!FUCK ME!!!!

MOST CRINGE SHIT I WROTE.  OH MY GOWWWDDD

well just bear okay??? I will make this shit better ...

Well simba is also shit ..and the date edward planned is also shit ...if someone did that to me ...i would ran of quickly..as fast as light

Anyways .. shit gonna go interesting

And i never thanked anyone of you who read and vote for my stroy ....and make it reach 2.32k

So thankyou sooooooooo much ...

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