u r my everything(completed)

By bloomysravs143

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this story continues frm d day after talent hunt. where manik makes a big mistake in his life lets see will... More

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part 1
note
part 2.
part-3
part:4
sad
Part 6
Part 7
pictures
part-8
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
part-13
Part-14
part 15
part 15b
answers plzzz
Part 15 C
part-16
part-17
part-18
part-19
part-20
note:
part-21
choose one
my new short story
part-23
thankuuu
part 24
only becz of u😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
part 25
part 26
part 27
Part 28
Part 29
part.....
part-30
problem on part 30
part 31
question and answer
part-32
be careful
part 33
part 34
new characters intro
review
new story
part 35
part 36
doubts
+ve
part 37
part 37 b
part 38
Epilogue
sneak a peak
& new story &

part-9

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By bloomysravs143

Lets get into the story.....



I want to give a leap of 2 days but ill brefily write it to u

After nan left rishab arrived house he didnt knew abou f5 is here,he gave greetings and left to his room
Dav took all the groups to the office and selections went on tgere only
He came at night to see rishu as all the groups are tired they directly went inside the g.h
Next day all went away by 10 but rishu got up at 10:30 he freshed up and went to hospital
(Guys i dont want rishab to see manik so its written like this)
As usual f5 won and the contract came to them 5months 9 songs
Is the contract they happily signed they came back all other teams wish them luck and went off ..f5 is happy as they 1st time got international project they are invited to rm for break fast

Arrival of nan:

Dav was happy that he got good team and happily sitting on the dinning table waiting for b.f
Fab 5 also joined them all are sitting and seeing the b.f they are stunned to see manyy varieties even richards are also shocked to see different types of foods on the table and all looked towards bella

Bella: its just that ,think its my treat of wishes (saying to f5)
F5: thanks a lot









Then for us???,, dav asked making a puppy face (fab5 shocked to see this type of behaviour as they saw him only in bossy mood)
Bell and others laughed and bell asked what he wants

Dav:(think for some time and asks i need ham
Bell:ok..,u(pointing edb
Ed:me, i need some indian
Dav:yeah me to me to
Ed: u just said u need ham
Dav:u said indian
Ed:god,dad! Say him not to follow me
Tom:are u kids and ha me too
Bella laughs and going towards kitchen and stooped by listening a voice "for me also"
Richards: u
Ed:wt r u doing here 😠
Bell:jake😯
She runned towards him all thought she will hug him and ed became straight and suddenly stopped by seeing the veiw and started laughing covering his mouth
Actually bella runned and kicked him in the stomach with the force he fell down
F5 are stunned to see the scene infront of them
Jake: what the fuck idiot
Bell:shut ur fucking mouth,where were u these days ha
Jake: aree i went to n.k
Bell:why,even if u want to go y cant u inform me ha
Jake:aree sorry my dear bells next time it will not ok ( he was going to hug her then suddenly she was dragged and collids to him
Jake: see here comes mr.jelousy king 😒😒😒
Ed:she is my wife
Jake: then she is my best friend
Dav:oh co'mon im hungry,after finching my hunger u can fight
All makes faces and sat on the dinning table









All starts eating there break fast

Jacob cords:

He is the best friend of nan and bella (i forgot to say nan and bell are kindergarden friends upto now and also jake, jake had a crush on bell but in his life came our hero for him villan and proposed her,she happily accepte him and seeing her happiness he did'nt felt the pain which will be experienced by atrue lover and waited for his love and it came and going to propose today)main chair person of most branded car austomartain ,rich kid and also works with bella in eb dancer by hobbie
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Jake: where is champ
Manik swift his head in a jerk by listening the word champ as he used to call rishab euth that name
Tom: as usual in his room
Jake:why soo
Tom:because of ur evil
Jake turns towards ed and asks
Now what did he do?
Ed: no need to say to you and he did a mistake in his final internship so i need to be harsh in time of this he needs to learn his mistake he may be a good doc but for me he is just a kid ,my son and he needs this punishment
All richerds and jake: tell uss tge reason
F5 are simply seeing them
Ed: after the operation he forgot to give the main injection,due to which the person all most died and as i saw i gave him and now he is safe
Tom:sighed and said u did right dont worry
Ed just hmmed and all just resumed there b.f

After b.f all are sitting on the sofas and chairs
Jake:when is she coming
Dav:any min
Jake:omg! I need to prepare
Dav:no jake
Jake: when i listened to u darling😉😏
Jake went off

After 5 min they heard a horn,,all stood by hearing and made there way to the main door then they saw her coming f5 are not able to see as the men are covering them
They heard some sounds like shouting , laughter
Manik focused on hearing the laughter it is familier
All moved and his heart stopped beating for a sec by seeing her

Nan out fit

There eye sight followed by a man wearing a causal outfit and tears started flowing out of there eyes the first one was mukthi who uttared a word from her mouth was c..a.bi..rrr

Cabir outfit

All hugged him and asked
Ed:where is birdy
Birdy:here im my swweet bro

All are shocked a sec to see her like that,as she always would be like behenjii type and now she is like this all hugged her nan is not leaving her dad she is clinging him like a leech and tom is also not leaving her as he missed his princess a lot
The suddenly she felt wet on her back she left her dad and saw backwards then again it splashed on her face now she is angry bird as she know whose work is this she is just searching the source from where it is coming now again it splashed it is coloured water he came infront of her and said:welcome home beautiful
Now manik body got stiff as he called her beautifull she went towards him ,,he thought she would gift him with her fav puch but its quite opposite was going on She hugged him tight and nex thing she does is pour paint colour on his head
F.b
When she hugged him from back jack came and gave her a paint
F.b ends
All are laughing seeing them then ed thrown juice on both
and ran from there to garden area ....like this all are playing suddenly while jake is going to throw colour water on her and while escaping she hide behing a person and water got hit him she is laughing like hell catching his coat and seeing from his waste side

She thought he was george and hid more by catching his waste
She looked her left side found george and jake laughing seeing them
This made her confused and checked who he is

The moment he saw her his eyes got fixed and she shocked seeing him here and was about to move but she slipped and going to fall but he caught her by waist,her breath stopped and there eyes are locked

(Not this much intensity there still some space between them i did'nt got a perfect picture for this movement so adjust) screen freeze on there faces like same in that pic
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