Abhi Na Jao Chod Kar!!✔️

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What happens when Gauri who is a rude businesswoman met Om who is a fun loving person?? To know more read my... Więcej

Character sketch
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😍😍 Oh My Mata!!!!😍😍
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New Cover.
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PROMO 1
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A big thanks...
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The Trip!!
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GOOD NEWS v/s BAD NEWS
I will try...
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I STILL LOVE YOU!
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Stay with me-Forever!
New One!
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Part-50 (EPILOGUE)
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Meanwhile Ruvya(the same day):

Rudra who already realized that he was in love with his wife was thinking about how to confess his feelings to her. Although they were happy with their new found love and happiness he wanted to confess his feelings. He decided to confess his love in a simple way just like she likes it. It was seven in the evening and he was home already. He heard the doorbell rang when he was inside the bathroom freshening up. He hurried to come out. It was quarter past seven only so he thought there might be someone else. There is no way his wife could be this early from her duty. It will take her two more hours to be home.

Bhavya who was standing outside the door waiting for him to open it. When he didn't open she thought he must be in the washroom and decided to wait outside. Yes, DCP Bhavya Pratap Rathod was home early the reason was his hubby. The surprise given by him yesterday touched her heart. She was feeling overwhelmed and decided to surprise him also. 

Although after promotion her work load increased she somehow managed to get two days off as it was friday. She booked two tickets to Goa to spend some quality time with Rudra as after marriage she heard him say many times that she was not giving him time. Standing outside the house she was not able to control her happy face but decided to give him surprise at night. 

After five long minutes he opened the door and his facial expression changed immediately after looking at her standing there. She smiled ear to ear after looking at him who was shocked as well as happy after looking at her. 

Bhavya: ab andar bhi aane doge ya nahi...

Rudra: ohh...sorry...(he gave her space to enter inside and closed the door behind with wide grin on face) aaj jaldi kaise?

She looked at him suspiciously when he asked that question.

Bhavya(entering in the bedroom): kyun? main jaldi nahi aa sakti?

Rudra: nahi...I mean obviously aa sakti ho...but tumne bataya nahi, varna main kuch plan karke rakhta...hum kahi bahar chalte...

Bhavya(turning to him): nup...tum please Keshav(the cook) ko call karke aane k liye mana kar do...dinner main bana rahi hoon...

Rudra(smiled happily): okay...main bahar wait kar raha hoon...

Bhavya: coming in five minutes...

She came out after freshening up and went to kitchen while he was already there seated on the platform. They were talking about random things while she was kneading dough and he was busy in adoring her. He slowly took some flour and applied it on her cheek. She just glared at him while he let out a laugh looking at her face. She also smile looking at him. 

Bhavya: Gauri kaisi hai ab? baat hui usse?

Rudra(munching his puries): hmm...aaj meeting main sirf Om ko hi ghur rahi thi...meeting main to uska dhayan hi nahi tha...

Bhavya looked at him unbelievably and her mouth opened in 'O' shape because it was unusual of Gauri to not pay attention in meetings. Looking at her open mouth Rudra put a piece of ''puri'' in her mouth.

Rudra: itna shock hone ki jarurat nahi hai, pyaar insaan se kuch bhi karva sakta hai...don't worry vo jyada din Om k bina nahi reh payegi...

Bhavya: I just hope unn dono k bich sab thik ho jaye...they are meant to be yaar...

Rudra: aur nahi hoga to hum hai na...kuch bhi kar k unn dono ko vapis ek kar denge...

After half an hour, the dinner was ready. Bhavya was arranging the food in serving bowl while he was arranging everything on dining table. Rudra who came in kitchen after putting the dishes saw his wife struggling to put her hair behind her ears. He slowly went to her and sneaked his arms around her waist back hugging her. She startled for a second but then continued her work. He slowly put her hair strand behind her ears and kissed her on cheek. She gasped feeling the contact of his lips with her skin and turned all pink. She was not able to work properly due to his gaze on her. He slowly caressed her cheek with his. She giggled feeling his stubble on her cheek.

Bhavya: khana thanda ho jayega...chodo mujhe...(she managed to speak in a whisper.)

Rudra(in romantic style): chodne k liye haath nahi pakda hai...

Bhavya looked at his eyes and the same love was reflecting in his eyes which she has for him. But she couldn't assume things. Yes she felt bad sometimes when she thinks about their little romantic moments that maybe he was doing all these to just keep her happy. But she also didn't wanted to force him or make him uncomfortable by asking him about his feelings. 

After dinner he was watching some match on TV when she entered the bedroom after completing her work. He smiled at her and gave her space to sit beside him. She went and sat there on the bed. Then she remembered her surprise and decided to tell him about it. 

Bhavya: I've something for you...

Rudra turn off the TV and looked at her.

Rudra: what is it??

Bhavya: a surprise...

Rudra(his eyes sparkled with the mention of surprise): what??

Bhavya: I've taken a day off and...

Rudra: and???

Bhavya: and we are going Goa tomorrow to spend our weekend.

Rudra(a big smile appeared on his face): tell me you are not joking...

Bhavya: main sach bol rahi hoon...

Rudra: oh my god...

He immediately hugged her with excitement while she hugged him back. He was really happy that finally they are going to spend some time together and maybe he could confess his feelings too. He broke the hug and looked at her who was also smiling looking at his reaction. 

Rudra: kab nikalna hai?

Bhavya: subah 5:30 ki flight hai...

He looked at the clock and it was only nine. He immediately took the bags and started packing his stuff while she was just looking at him. She hadn't found him this much happy after what happened with Saumya and felt proud on herself that she could manage to make him happy somehow. She also joined him with in packing. Unknown to her it was going to be the best trip for her ever.

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Sunday Evening:

It was sunday evening and as per plan Om was already present at the resort he booked exclusively to propose Gauri. It was far away from the noise of city so that no one can disturb them. The place was decorated heavenly with white fairy lights and white jasmine flower, which were center of the attraction of his fairy tale theme. The entrance row was decorated with beautiful lantern. A table was set for two people with arrangements of candle light dinner at one of the corner. Om was in one of the room which he has reserved for them for being ready. He wore a blue tuxedo to match with her dress. 

Om:


He once again looked at the dress which was specially designed for her placed in the middle of the room. He remembered the day when she showed him that dress. 

Flashback:

Om: tumhe ye dress pasand hai?

Gauri: kyun, tumhe nahi achi lagi?

Om: han achi hai, but aisi cinedrella vali dress kon pehanta hai? aur sabse badi baat ki tum aisi dress pehnogi kab?

Gauri: mujhe pasand hai aisi dress but problem yahi hai ki mein ise kahi pehan nahi sakti, aisa koi occasion hi nahi hai...otherwise mein abhi ye dress banva loon...

Om: vaise ismein garmi nahi lagegi?

Gauri: han, par ek baar to pehan hi sakte hain...bas ek baar pehan k picture click karvani hai...

Flashback ends:

He just wanted to see her expression when she looks at that dress. Giving himself a final look he headed out of the room to check the arrangements. 

On the other hand Gauri was pacing back and forth in her room to decide what to wear when Om was going to propose her. Nanima wasn't also there to suggest her something. And cherry on the cake was Rudra and Bhavya were also out of station and she didn't want to disturb them. Om also didn't gave her any hint on what to wear. Finally she chose one of the dress her designer suggested her. It was a beautiful silver colored evening gown. Still she wasn't contained with what she was wearing. To keep it simple she just wore diamond stud and left her hair open. It was 7 already and Khanna was waiting for her from last half an hour. For the first time she was nervous to face Om. She tried to keep herself calm but of no use. 

She just knew that Om messaged her in morning to be ready and Khanna will pick her up at sharp 6:30. She was already late. She sat in the car and Khanna greeted her. After sometime she decided to ask Khanna about Om's plan.

Gauri: kaha ja rahe hai hum Khanna?

Khanna: vo mujhe sir ne aapko batane se mana kiya hai...

Gauri: what? ye Om bhi na...

She just looked out of window feeling nervous about what to say when he propose her. On the other hand Om was waiting for her near the entrance. The screen freezes with both of their faces either side.

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Hii guys,, an update after almost 3 months and really really really very sorry for making you all wait. And also for updating a small chappy but I want to cover the whole proposal scene in next update. Will try to update the chapter as soon as possible. 

Hope you'll like the chapter. For now please vote and comment to motivate me to update next chapter early. I will update after getting votes around last chapter. Please don't let me down because right now I'm feeling really lazy to write.

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