Raina- OS (Pyar Hua- Ikraar H...

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Epilogue 1
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Naina is in her room....after few moments Shalini and Nandini come to her room...& Found her sitting on bed with back faced them....

Shalini- hii Nainaa...she comes nd back hugged her.... I m soo happy for u....naina immediately wipes her tears nd turns with a smile....

Shalini- hey...kya hua tum ro rhi thi...

Naina- n..nhi to...she looks down...

Nandini- naina...tum humse jhooth nhi bol skti... Btao kya baat hai...

Naina- kuch nhi ma baba ki yad aa rhi thi....
Shalini hugs nd consoles her...

Shalini- chlo ab chup ho jao...or hme tumko ready krne do...naveen bahar wait kr rhe hai....

Shalini & nandini make her ready....(point 1857's look).... Naveen came inside nd saw naina...she too looked him nd smiles lightly...he comes to her with baby steps, hold her face with his both hands nd kissed on her forehead....he gets emotional...

Naveen- itni jaldi bdi ho gai tu.....bahot pyari lg rhi hai....naina hugs him tightly nd started crying...naveen's eyes also became moist...but shalini interrupts..

Shalini- ye dekho abhi tak khud hi uchhal rhe the ki shadi krani shadi karani hai...or ab khud hi senty ho rhe ho...or uska pura makeup khrab krwa diya...

Nandini- or hmari mehnat bhi...

Naveen- chup kro dono....meri gudiya ko kisi makeup ki jarurat nhi hai...wo aise hi achi lgti hai...he wipes her tears...chalo....

Naveen comes out with Naina... Rajveer looks at her nd gets lost in her....naveen stops in front of raj...nd waves his hand...raj comes out from his Naina land....nd everywhere except all five....naina looks down all time...

Naveen- yahi hai wo...mera colleague...mera dost...jo maine tere liye chuna tha... Capt. Rajveer singh shekhawat.... Naina looks at him immediately with extra wide eyes...
Pr tujhe nhi pasand to koi baat nhi...mai jabardasti nhi kruga....he smiles at her....

Naina- bhaiyaaa....aap....

Naveen- kya bhaiya...mai us time bta hi rha tha ki tu uthkr chli gai...meri puri bat sune bina....bs rona aata hai... Naina eyes again got filled but this time, its happy wale tears...

Naveen- lo fir rone lg gai....naina hugs him... Are gudiya chup ho ja wrna ye mujhe chup kra dega.... Naina gives him a confused look...

Naveen- aise kya dekh rhi hai... Dhamki di hai isne mujhe.... Naina again looks at him..
Chl teri confusion dur kr du pahle...ye jo hai na...ek nmbr ka drpok hai...ise maine hi bheja tere pass...naina shocked...or ab mujhe yakeen ho gya ki bilkul sahi kiya maine.... Kyuki tum dono ek jaise hi ho...kya kahte h wo....umm..haan.. Ram milayi jodi.... Mtlb bolna kuch nhi hai bs danveer bnne ko taiyar hai....ek kahta hai ki don't worry use kbhi nhi pta chlne duga...naina looks at raj & he lowers his eyes.... Or dusra kahta hai bhaiya ap jaha kahoge waha krugi shadi....now raj looks at her, & she looks down...mtlb kamal hai dono...or gudiya tu...mujhe iska to pta hai ki ye aisa hi hai...pr tu...6 saal....or mujhe pta b nhi chla...or tune mujhe, apne bhaiya se nhi bataya....

Shalini- 6 saal ka kya mtlb...

Naveen- kuch nhi...

Shalini- nhi nhi boliye...hmare pas bahot time hai apka pravachan sunne ke liye...
Everybody smiles at this...

Rajveer- ho gya tera drama khtm ya or kuch baki hai....

Naveen- tu kuch jyada nhi bol rha abhi...or abhi khtm nhi hua....ek chij hai... Important...

Rajveer- ab kya krna hai tujhe...

Naveen- engagement...

Rajveer- tu engagement kr rha hai tune mujhe btaya b nhi...

Naveen- chup kr sale...meri nhi teri or naina ki engagement...

Rajveer/Naina- kyaaa....

Naveen- haan kyu...nhi krni...tujhe kya lga tha mai tujhe meri bahen k sath ghumne duga...

Rajveer- naveen tujhe mujhpe bharosha nhi h...

Naveen- aisi baat nhi hai raj...tujhpr to khud se jyada bharosha hai...isliye apni jaan se b jyada pyari meri amanat, meri gudiya tujhe de rha hu...

Rajveer- to fir ye sab itni jaldi kyu kr rha hai...

Abhi- qk inhe orders mile hai....

Rajveer- orders...kaise order...he asked seriously

Abhi- mission ke orders...

Rajveer- mission... Fir se...or tune mujhe btana jaruri nhi samjha...says in stern voice...

Naveen- mujhe aj hi pta chla... Meeting me...

Rajveer- kaisa mission...or kab jana hai...

Naveen- confidential hai...nd Abhi pta nhi hai..may be 1,2 weak me....
There was pin drop silence...naveen comes to raj...nd keep his hand on his soldier...

Naveen- Raj...maa baba ke bad naina meri jimmedari hai...koi nhi h uska mere siwa....yakeen maan jb bhi bahar jata hu to dr lga rahta ki...meri bahen ab akeli hai...meri bachi, koi nhi uske pas...lekin fir yad aata hai ki meri ek or jimmedari hai mere watan ke liye....or dekh fir se bula rhi h ye duty....jisse mai muh nhi mod skta...or tu to janta hai na ki kaise kaise missions hote hai...or iske liye mai yhi bol skta hu ki...risky hai....mujhe nhi pta mai kb wapas aauga...huh...wapas aauga bhi ya n...

Rajveer- naveen...he interrupted....

Naveen- nhi raj hum sach se muh nhi mod skte hai...or yahi sch hai...

Rajveer- to tu mna krde...ya fir mai chla jata hu teri jagah...

Naveen- ye kaisi bat kr rha hai...tu ye bol b kaise skta hai...or tujhe lgta hai ki mai piche hatne waLo me se hu....mujhe bs ek hi dar, ek hi chinta hai...wo hai naina...uska mere alawa ab koi nhi hai raj...or apni gudiya k liye mai sirf tujhpr hi bharosha krta hu...mai janta hu wo tere sath bilkul safe hai, ek tu hi hai jo ise sambhal sakta hai, mujhse b jyada ache se khyal rakhega, isliye meri ye amanat tujhe dekar mai befikri se jauga....(while giving naina's hand in raj hands)....ab tu chahe  jiddi dost maan, khudgarj insaan samajh, ya ek majbur bhai...plzz meri itni si bat maan le...shadi kr le meri bahen se...says naveen with joint hands nd teary eyes...raj immediately hold his hands...

Rajveer- ye kya kr rha hai naveen pagal ho gya hai kya.... Everyone gets emotional...rajveer tries to lighten the atmosphere....

Rajveer- kitna dramebaj hai re tu....tujhe army me nhi bollywood me hona chahiye....naveen looks at him...
Aise look mt de... Mai shadi kruga pr kuch sharte (conditions) h meri...naina looks at him nd he assures her from his eyes....tujhe manjur h to thik wrnaa....

Naveen- raj tu... Dowry maang rha hai...dahej chahiye tujhe...

Rajveer- kyaaa...tu mujhe aisa smjhta hai naveen...

Naveen- tune hi bola ki conditions h...

Rajveer- sale puri bat sun liya kr pahle...taang mt adaya kr wrna kaat dunga...meri shart ye hai ki... Shadi k bad naina yha rahegi kyuk...

Naveen- tujhe ghar jamai banna hai raj... Rajveer give him a glare...

Rajveer- chauhan sahab iska muh band kijiye wrna iska muh tod duga mai abhi....
Everyone smiles & naveen looks at him with open mouth...

Naveen- ab kya galat kaha...naina yaha rahegi to mtlb tu b yhi rahega...

Rajveer- isliye bol rha hu puri bat sunne k bad muh khola kr...maine ye isliye bola qk tu b janta hai ki hamari duty kya h...aane jane ka koi time nhi...or mai nhi chahta naina waha akeli rahe isliye main...

Naveen- to yaha kaun do char log hai...mai to ja rha hu...to kaun rahega yaha watchman mohan....

Rajveer- nhi... Mohan nhi.... Yaha naina ka khyal rakhne k liye uski apni...BHABHI hogi......

Naveen- naina ki bhabhi kaun h...he gets confused nd looks at raj who was busy in giving a extra toothy smile...naveen got his hidden words...nd so all except Abhi..

Naveen- nhiii....u must bhi joking ryt??? Raj shakes his head in negative... Mai aisa kuch nhi krne wala abhi...samjha tu...

Rajveer- thik hai fir hum bhi nhi karege...he looks at naina.... Right naina??.. she nodded with a smile...

Abhi- koi hume bhi explain kr do ki kya ho rha hai...ap log kya bat kr rhe hai... Everybody hit their heads with hands....

Rajveer/shalini/Nandini- ab tum apna muh band rakho...

Naveen- nhi raj mai aisa nhi kruga...tu smjh na...mujhe waha naina ki chinta na ho isliye tujhe shaup k ja rha hu...or tu ye bol rha hai...taki mai firse waha tension me baitha rahu ki koi h jo intzar kr rha hai...he says while looking at shalini... Nhi raj mai abhi ye nhi kar sakta...pr agar wapas aaya to mai wada krta hu mai teri ye bat jarur puri kruga...pr abhi nhii...mai nhi chahta ki koi mere intzar me apni poori life bitaye...
Shalini comes to him & hold his face nd turns to her...

Shalini- naveen..hamara rishta hmare liye kya h ye hum dono jante hai...or mai tumhare hr decision me tumhare sath hu...pr ye jo tumne abhi kuch bate kahi...unme nhi...pr mujhe isse koi shikayat nhi hai kyuki mai b ek soldier hu or samjhti b hu...pr mai ek ladki b hu...Naveen tumhara intzaar to mai har bar karti hu or hmesa karugi bhi...iss bar b karugi...pr iss bar mujhe kuch chahiye... Hamare iss rishte ko ek naam de do naveen... Jisse mai pure haq se tumhara wait kru...plzzz... Naveen hugs her immediately....

Shalini- Naveen mai hug nhi haq maang rhi thi...says with a pout...

Naveen- ab itne haq se manga hai to mana to nhi karunga....shalini smiles happiness in his embrace...

Naveen- ( to raj) tum dono ke bad humara nmbr...ab to khus hai na...ya or bhi koi shart hai... Raj smiles & hugs him....naveen eyes caught naina, she stood their lost in her thought...naveen comes to her..

Naveen- kya hua gudiya...tu ab bhi khus nhi hai kya...

Naina-nhi bhaiya...mai khus hu bahot khus hu...

Shalini- abhi bhi maa baba ki yad aa rhi hai?...

Naina- nhi bhabhi...ab thik hu mai..

Naveen- to fir kya bat hai...bta mujhe...kaha khoi hui hai...

Naina- bhaiya...maa baba ke bad unki kami nhi lgi mujhe...qk ap hai mere pass....maa baba nhi h isliye maine socha tha mera kanyadaan aap dono milkr krege...pr... Naveen put his finger on her lips..

Naveen- aisa hi hoga....naina smiles nd hugs him...

Both couple got married in a weak....naveen & shalini married first as per naina's wish... After that our Raina....
It is the 4th day of their wedding.... Morning 10:00 a.m.... Naina enters raj's room...(oppsss correction)...Naina enters in their room with coffee in her hands...nd found him still sleeping without any worry...she smiled at him...she puts the cup on the side table & sat besides him...after looking him few moments she kissed on his forehead...nd moves to go but halt in her way listening his voice....

Rajveer- galat hai...

Naina thought he didn't like it nd feels bad...she turns to him with lower face...

Naina- s..sorry...wo...mai....nd her eyes get moist... Rajveer quickly gets up from bed...

Rajveer- are...tum dono bhai bahen ki yahi prblm hai...puri bat nhi sunni bs action krna hai...
Mai bol rha tha galat hai...he pulls her from her waist... Jagah galat hai... Morning kiss aise nhi hoti...naina looks at him with shock..her cheeks turns red...

Naina- morning kaha hai...10 bj rhe hai...chhodiye mujhe...

Rajveer- mai to abhi utha hu...meri morning to abhi hui...naina frees herself nd turns to go but he caught her again nd back hugs...

Rajveer- return gift to lekar jao....naina smiles & knits her brows... He kissed on her cheeks... her eyes got wide & blushes hard...
It was the first kissi from him...he kept his chin on her shoulder & tightens his hold...but door bell rings nd they come from their world...he goes to open the door...naina comes out after few moments nd saw him standing with a envelope...

Naina- kaun tha...or ye kya hai...

Rajveer- ruko dekhta hu... Rajveer opens the envelope nd read the letter...nd his eyes comes out...he looks at naina...nd a big smike comes on his face...

Naina- kya hua.. kya h isme...he hugs her tight...

Rajveer- u r soo lucky for me....thanku soo mch...i m soo happy...

Naina- are pr hua kya h...maine kya kiya...kya h letter me...he comes out from hug...

Rajveer- HQ se hai...i got promotion...i'm major now....

Naina- to isme ap mujhe thanku kyu bol rhe hai....maine kuch nhi kiya...apko promotion mila apki wajah se...apke hard work ki wajah...or kyuki aap deserve krte hai...isliye...

Rajveer- nhi mere liye to tum lucky ho...tumhe pta h jbse tum mili ho mujhe...aisa lgta h sb badal gya hai...mai pahle aisa bilkul nhi tha...thanku naina meri life me aane ke liye...mujhe accept krne ke liye...meri life me khusi lane ke liye... Naina too gets emotional...

Naina- ab aap apni bat se piche hat rhe hai...bhul gye kya kaha tha aapne...
Rajveer shakes his head in no... To fir...
He hugs her again...

Rajveer- I love you naina...

Naina- hmm...she smiles...

Rajveer- fir se hmm...naina 3 words hi to bolne hote h... He says with a baby face...naina smiles..

Naina- mai apse bahot pyar krti hu...
Rajveer smiles broadly...

Rajveer- naina maine 3 words bolne ko kaha tha tumne itne sare bol diye...

Naina- qk jo sukun mujhe in ITNE sare shabdo me milta hai wo un 3 me nhi milta...

Rajveer- ye to sach hai...sukun to milta hai...he says with a smile... Nainaa..

Naina- hmm

Rajveer- mai bhi tumse se bahottt pyar krta hu...or Hmesha karuga....
they come out from hug...naina lowers her eyes...he hold her face nd their eyes met....he found love & shyness in her eyes...nd she saw his eyes which is filled with immense love & some desires...he kissed on her forehead then eyes then cheeks then...............




Aage Kyu btau....ye unka personal mattel hai...ol mai kisi ke ghal me taank jhaank nhi klti...bad mannels..

The End


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Note:
( But sirf tab tak jab tak mere exams mere sir pr hai....yupp my Graduation Exams are going onnn....isliye maine break liya.....jb pahle maine ye publish kiya to socha nhi tha iska negative effect bhi ho skta hai....so m sorryyy to those jinhe upar ki lines pdh ke bura lga or sayad naraj bhi hai....mujhe aj hi pta chla...so m sorry once again...i'll continue with my other stories..but after exams....or i'll try to update till Sunday....so plzzz apna precious support bnaye rakhe...)

Okk tata bye...ab  jaldi milege..  😋😋
Namaskaar...

Love

TANI.... 😘😘

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