Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

By I-believe-in-destiny

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hello guys...so basically this is my third avneil ff....just peep in it...i m sure u would love it...this sto... More

characters
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
teaser
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
teaser
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
teaser
chapter 16
teaser
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
teaser-most awaited part
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
Imp
chapter-24(last part)

chapter 17

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By I-believe-in-destiny

Khanna's reach mehta mansion...

Mehtas welcome them...

All settles down

Neil was nervous about avni's answer but he respects her decision....

Neil sees avni coming down.....

He immediately gets up followed by all family members....

Avni comes in front of neil

Avni(in mind):I m sorry neil...ab joh main bolne vaali hu use sunkar shayad tumhe bahot bura lage...lekin mujhe yeh karna hoga..i m sorry

Avni:neil...kya tum sach main mujhse shaadi karna chahte ho

Neil:haa avni...main tumse yeh pehle keh nahi paaya...lekin mujhe lagta hai ki ab mujhe tumse yeh keh dena chahiye...i love u avni...i really love u and i wanted to marry u

All khannas and mehtas were just looking at them waiting for avni's reply

Avni:theeke...I m ready for this marriage

All were happy whereas neil was on cloud nine

Neela:avni...thank u baccha...tum nahi jaanti tumne hume kitni badi khushi di hai....main kal hi pandit ji se shaadi ka muhurat nikalva lungi...

Avni:ek minute maa...meri baat abhi puri nahi hui hai....

Ashish:baat puri nahi hui matlab...tumhe aur kuch kehna hai kya avni

Avni:haa papa....yeh shaadi hone se pehle neil ko ek sach batana bahot zaruri hai....

Neil:konsa sach avni...

Avni:I AM NOT VIRGIN NEIL ....main virgin nahi hu...main apna sab kuch pehle hi mere pyaar ko...mere neil ko de chuki hu...isliye mere paas ab tumhe dene ke liye kuch nahi hai....main bhale hi tumse shaadi kar lu lekin pyaar main humesha neil se hi karti rahungi.....toh bolo...kya ab bhi tum mujh jaisi ladki se shaadi karna chahoge joh apni virginity pehle hi kisi aur ko de chuki hai....

All are shocked hearing this while neil was totally shattered.....

He was just looking at her with teary eyes...

Neela came forward and slaps avni due to which she falls on floor holding her cheek...

Neela:mujhe sharam aati hai tumhe apni beti kehte hue...kash avni..kash tum paida hone se pehle hi mar gayi hoti toh aaj mujhe yeh din nahi dekhna padta..

Avni(shattered):maa...

Neela:chali jaa yaha se...aur kabhi mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana...just get out..

Neil:neela maa...

Neela:nahi neil...iss baar nahi....

Avni ran from there while crying while neil followed her...

Khannas too left from there without saying anything...

Neela sat with thud on sofa...

Ashish:neela...sambhalo apne aap ko

Neela:ashish...avni aisa kaise kar sakti hai...kya usne ek baar bhi humare baare main nahi socha...humare parvarish main hi koi kami reh gayi isliye avni ne yeh had paar kar di..

On other side...

Avni is running on road while neil is following her...

Suddenly a truck comes in front of her and neil becomes numb seeing this

Neil(shouts):Avniiiiii

So here is the double update

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