Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

By I-believe-in-destiny

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hello guys...so basically this is my third avneil ff....just peep in it...i m sure u would love it...this sto... More

characters
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
teaser
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
teaser
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 14
chapter 15
teaser
chapter 16
chapter 17
teaser
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
teaser-most awaited part
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
Imp
chapter-24(last part)

chapter 13

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By I-believe-in-destiny

Avni wakes up from her deep slumber...

Avni:good morning neil...

She says staring at her ring..

As usual she gets fresh n up and leaves for college without having any word with family members...

At college

First lecture was of management...so all were waiting for neil to come..

Neil enters in classroom...and his gaze instantly fall on avni who was already staring at him..

Avni remembers yesterdays incident how she was sitting on road fully drenched..how neil came there...

Avni(in mind):I should atleast say thanks to him for yesterday..

Neil(in mind):mujhe nahi pata yeh kya hai..lekin agar yeh pyaar hai toh i promise ...main tumse itna pyaar karunga ki tum majbur ho jaogi mujhse pyaar karne ke liye..

Neil's thoughs were broken because of students voice who wished him good morning...

Students:good morning sir...

Neil:good morning students...so today is my first lecture in ur class...so lets start..

Neil starts his lecture ...all girls were continuously staring at him which made him uncomfortable...

Mitali:riya yaar...yeh kitna hot hai...dil karta hai ki abhi jaake ise kiss kar lu...

Avni who was sitting in front hear this..but she ignored it.

Riya:just shut up mitali..

Mitali:tu toh rehne hi de...main ise pataa ke hi rahungi...dekh lena..

The bell rangs as it was break time..

Neil leaves from there...

In class room..

Juhi:vidyut..

Vidyut:hmm..

Juhi:tumhe yeh neil neil ki tarah nahi lagta ....

Vidyut:juhi..neil toh neil ki tarah hi lagega na...

Juhi:arey...mera matlab hai ki yeh neil.. avni ke neil ki tarah nahi lagta...

This line was heard by avni...she immediately looks at juhi with teary eyes...

Juhi saw avni

Juhi:avni...sorry voh.

But avni immediately goes from there without listening her...

Vidyut:juhi yaar...thoda dheere bolna chahiye tha na...

Juhi:sorry yaar...lekin sach bata...tujhe sach main yeh neil.. avni ke neil ki tarah nahi lagta...matlab dono main kafi similarities hai...jaise ki aawaz bhi dono ki same lagti hai....haa looks main difference hai lekin phir bhi....kahi yeh neil ..avni ka neil toh nahi..

Vidyut:tum pagal ho gayi ho juhi..yeh tum kya keh rahi ho....agar yeh neil hota toh voh obviously avni ko pehchaan leta na...aur tum jaanti ho na ki neil ke saath 1 saal pehle kya hua tha...

Ali:bhai..kuch bhi keh...lekin juhi ke baat main kuch toh dum hai...mujhe bhi yeh neil uss neil ki tarah lagta hai...

Mitali:aisa kuch nahi hai guys...yeh neil khanna hai...humare proffessor... aur avni ka neil ek tourist guide tha...yeh avni ka neil nahi hai...voh mar chuka hai...

Suddenly a voice came from behind...

Voice:kon mar chuka hai....

All turns and founds neil standing there...

Mitali:sir...voh..kuch nahi...bas aise hi...

Neil:ok...achha aap logo ne avni ko kahi dekha...

Mitali(jealous):sir aap avni ko kyun dhund rahe ho ...aapka kya kaam usse..

Neil:hai kuch kaam..

Juhi:sir..voh abhi abhi bahar gayi...shayad canteen main ho...

Neil:ok...thanks..

Neil leaves..

Juhi:mitali zara soch samajhkar bola karo....agar avni yeh sun leti toh...

Mitali:sun leti toh sun leti...vaise bhi kabtak voh aise devdaas bankar ghumti rahegi...use kabhi na kabhi toh yeh accept karna hoga na ki neil mar chuka hai...aur plz..yeh jo proffessor neil khanna hai na use tum avni ke neil se compare karna band karo..yeh kitna hot hai...aur voh neil...voh toh kisi gaav ka gavar lagta tha...shayad isiliye use avni jaise andhi ladki se pyaar ho gaya...

All looks at her in disbelief ....

Riya:bas mitali...don't u dare to talk like this about my sister...avni behen hai meri...so mind ur language...

Mitali angrily left from there...

Juhi:how can she talk like this about avni...

Vidyut:leave her yaar...but juhi...tum plz yeh baat avni ke saamne mat karna...

Juhi nods..

Here neil enters in canteen and found avni sitting at corner table lost in her thoughts..

He goes to her..

Neil:avni..

Avni:huh??

Neil:voh...kal...i mean.....can i sit here...

Avni nods...

Neil sits down opposite to her...

Neil:voh...kal tum...i mean..

Avni:thanks...

Neil:huh??

Avni:haa voh kal aapne meri help ki...mujhe ghar drop kiya...uske liye thanks..

Neil:ur welcome...

Avni(in mind):agar juhi ne jo kaha voh sach hua toh...lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai...ek baar isse puch leti hu..

Avni:kya main aapse ek baat puchu...

Neil:haa...lekin pehle tum mujhe yeh aap kehna band karo...jab tum mujhe aap kehti ho toh mujhe kaafi old feel hota hai...

And that's it... this line again made her remember neil...this line was said by neil during their first conversation...

Her eyes welled up remembering their first meeting...

Neil noticed her tears...

Neil(concerned):avni...are u crying?...i m sorry agar maine kuch galat keh diya ho toh...

He passes her a glaas of water...

Neil:yeh lo...paani pee lo

Avni:no thanks...i m fine..

Neil:kya hua avni...

Avni(in trance):neil ne bhi mujhse yahi kaha tha...

Neil understood her pain

Suddenly she realised what she said ..

Avni:sorry...voh...i mean..

Neil:mujhe tumhare past ke baare main sab pata hai avni....

Avni gets shocked..

Avni(stammers):kai...kaise..

Neil tells her that how neela told him about her past and also that his father and her father are business partners except that mission vaala part...

Neil:tumhari family tumhare liye bahot pareshaan hai avni..plz..unki aur apni life kharaab mat karo..tumhe apni life main ab move on karna chahiye..kab tak tum...aise rahogi...

Avni:mujhe iss baare main koi baat nahi karni...

Neil:kisi insaan ke chale jaane se duniyaan khatam nahi ho jaati...aur agar koi jaane vaale ka bahana lekar apni zindagi tabah karta hai toh voh apne pyaar ka hi nahi balki uska bhi apmaan karta hai jo chala gaya hai...

Avni smiles sadly hearing this

Avni:jab hum kisise pyaar karte hai na tab hum use hi apni duniyaan bana lete hai..aur agar vahi hume chodke chala jaye toh yeh jo humari so called duniyaan hai na voh humare liye koi mayne nahi rakhti...

Neil:pyaar dobara ho sakta hai avni...

Avni:saccha pyaar sirf ek hi baar hota hai aur ek hi baar hona chahiye jaise ki love story ek hi hoti hai aur ek hi honi chahiye

She says this remembering neil's words

Whereas neil gets some flashes as if he has heard this somewhere unaware of the fact that he was the one who said this to avni...

He comes out of his thoughts when he heard avni saying..

Avni:tum pyaar ka matlab tab samjhoge jab tumhe saccha pyaar hoga...

Saying this avni gets up and leaves..

Neil:pyaar to ho gaya hai avni...tumse....

And this line was heard by mitali who was fuming in anger and jealousy...

So guys...here is the next chappy...

I was going to update this tomorrow but thought to update today itself....

And also u can get revenge update tomorrow...or we can say double update...
So stay tune and do vote and comment

Love Mamta

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