raglak:made for me by vm (co...

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A unique story of raglak... Don't miss to read... πŸ˜‰ More

raglak:made for me by vm
Main Hoon Lucky.....
Character sketch
The HER....
Cast...
The story begins...
The meeting...
HER Vs Ragini..
It's a Yes!!!
My sherni...😍
I love you... ????
I am coming....
I am with u ....forever....
Mann ki baathe...
Thank you... πŸ’ž
Little happiness....πŸ’•
After exams.. πŸ˜€
TIme to answer....⌚
journey continues...
Bonding...
time for emotions....
The Invitation... πŸ’ŒπŸ“œ
The Ring ceremony...πŸ’
romeo-juliet... πŸ’”
THE PROMISE... πŸ’“
Memory Lane... πŸ‘£
Lunch time... 🍱
Wedding card... πŸ’—
Pre-wedding.. πŸ’
RAGLAK... πŸ’•
Rituals....! πŸ˜„
PROMO...
WEDDING...
wedding celebrationπŸŽ†
After wedding...
Mr & Mrs. maheshwari...
Maheshwari bahu...
TIME TO QUESTION.. ⌚
RECEPTION... πŸ’ž
meeti meeti baathein.. πŸ’‘
Aww mera baccha... 😘
TIME FOR BREAK.... πŸ™…
what for you? 😁
Lovey.... Dovey 😍
THE HURT.... 😫
Forgiveness... πŸ˜•
Dr. Ragini😁
Victory... ✌
godh barai.. πŸ‘Έ
love trouble...πŸ˜‚
Love is in the air... πŸ’–
poor lakshya... πŸ˜₯
laila oh laila... 😝
RRR... πŸ™ˆπŸ™‰πŸ™Š
missing... missingπŸ˜•
Mr & Mrs Attitude. πŸ˜†
week of love...
life after death... πŸ‘Ά
Valentines... πŸ’–
what's the name? πŸ˜‚
history repeats... 😝
u should go...!!
love in the rain... 😊
birthday boy !!πŸ™‡
made for me... πŸ’ž
New beginning...πŸ˜„
Together foreverπŸ‘«
love is in danger... 😱
Time for tears... 😭
u r my kiddo... 😜
saas - bahu... πŸ˜₯
dushman +dushman 😈😈
I am leaving... 😭😭
lakshya to remarry 😒
dard baat lenge hum..
bday Boy 2...
Paris pranayam...😍
Amusement park... β›²
EPILOGUE-1 (republished)
Epilogue -2
Good bye πŸ‘‹

suji bua... πŸ˜₯

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By Vm9627

Hello guys...

Next update is here... Read this after ' god barai'  part...

This is dedicated to anju9624

Enjoy reading...

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Ek teer mein do nishan...

Shruthi is not less in irritating me... It's because of her only, my lucky couldn't spend time with me... It's time to pay for that baby...

It ll be so good to see ur face when u ll lose ur baby...

It ll be even good to see maheshwaris kicking their laadli bahu..

Na baccha Na bahu...

She smiles devilishly...

But some one slaps her...

(guess who! )

"Mom "

"don't call me that... Ye sikaya hai maine tumhe... "

"mom, what's wrong with u... Don't u want to take revenge from those who became reason for my this state.... "

"by killing that innocent soul...? Do u know how painful for a mother to get separate from her child... U won't get place even in the hell... U idiot "

Disha just holds her cheek and cries...

"then what shall I do... I can't see lucky being chummy with that ragini... And she getting praised by everyone.. U sent me Australia to forget all these..

But u don't know...my wounds are still fresh... "

"Ram is right! I have only spoiled u...its all my wrong upbringing...

Shru is always my daughter like u... I can't see anything go wrong for her... That too in the matter of the baby...

Don't u know, how much she yearned to become mom... Don't snatch that from her... She ll end her life... "

Disha is seen looking other side...

"u ll never change... Better we leave this place... " she drags her outside.

"Ram, book tickets for tonight... We r leaving... "

Ramprasad looks at her surprised...

"u sure suji...?"

"haan ji...its better for us to leave now... "

"as u say... "

Ram's pov...

"kamaal hai! Pehli baar mera kekne ke pehle Jane tayar hogayi meri biwi... "

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Days roll over... Shru is getting pampered by everyone in mm.

Especially, her lovely bhabhi who never leaves chance to care for her...

It was one fine day...

Where ragini, dp, lakshya and shru were playing carrom in their lawn...

Ragini and dp in a team... Shru and lakshya in other team...

Ragini strikes the white pawn...

"thats y I wanted to be in bhabhi's team... Bhai, see we r loosing... "

Ragini and dp laughs..

"arrey! It's not over yet... Mein bhi kaccha khiladi hoon... " he lifts his imaginary collars...

Ragini laughs even more... He gets lost in her...

"bhai, abh kelo bhi... "

"han han..." he looks at her one last time and strikes Red...

"hurray! U saved us bhai... "

"hmm... Bola na. Cha hai kuch bhi hojay, akhir raani mujhe hi milegi... "

he kisses that red pawn looking at his raani ...

While she looks down and blushes...

After some time,

"bhai, get water no... "

"array, let me focus... " he keeps striking..

"I am thirsty.. "

Ragini smiles and gets up to go...

"Raghu! "

"I ll go get water for her... "

"wait naa, I ll go... U keep playing "

While shru fumes at that..

Dp mutters "lover boy"

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Ragini is seen taking rounds in the hospital...

She keeps talking to every kid with love and care...

A little girl holds her Saree end...

Ragini looks at her confused... And bends down.

"hi cutie... "

"doctor aunty! Mera bhai teek hojayega naa? I can play with him right"

The other doctor tells her that the girl is a sister of that 2 yr old boy... Who is a seizure patient...

"oh! Of course, he will get better dear. But he should take the medications for few more years...."

"tank u... "

She caresses her cheek and kisses that...

Ragini in mind:

god!plz give me the strength to handle all these... I know one day I would face the situation where I cannot guarantee someone's life...

And that day, I would surely break down...

Please, help me...

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Shru is seen side hugging her Romeo...

"I love you... "

"I love you too... U fine? "

" I am so happy here... Bhai and bhabhi are taking my good care... "

"really! So nice of them... "

"sharath... U know what! I had got a weird dream. "

"and what's that! "

"even bhabhi was pregnant  and we both delivered at a time...

I had a boy and she a girl baby...

They both will grow together like me and u ... Finally, they fall in love same like us and get married...

So nice naa... It was like watching our own story... "

She claps her hands...

Sharath was smiling at her weird imagination...

"ur dream will be dream forever... "

Says lakshya and gets into their room with ragini...

Everyone gets surprised..

"y so? " asks shru...

"because, we gonna have a baby boy... Not girl... Okk"

Ragini looks at him surprised...

"aah... How many boys u want... U r a male protagonist... Idiot bhai"

"whatever u say, I know raghu will have a baby boy same like me... Haina raghu? "

She just blushes as it is her dream too to get a son like him...

Shru twists her lips...

Raglak goes to their room..

And ragini is seen in the balcony thinking something deeply...

Lakshya comes out from the washroom...

"where r u lost madam...? Don't tell me in my dreams."

She smiles at his words...

"ok, what happened... "

"nothing, I was just thinking about what u said to shru...

Don't u want a baby girl like all men including my dad... " she says in a complaining tone...

Lakshya holds his stomach and laughs loudly...

He gets inside and sits on the bed...

She too follows him frowning and sits beside him...

"so, u were thinking of kids haan... Not bad! "

"lakshya, not that! I was just curious... "

"look ragini, I was just teasing shru... I like to irritate her so much... It's my birth right u know... "

Ragini just smiles...

"in fact, I am fine with any baby... All I want is a healthy baby...and healthy u... " he cups her face...

She gets lost in his words and hugs him...

"but, according to maheshwari tradition.... Always it's the baby boy to born first...followed by a girl... I don't know how far it's true... "

She looks at him surprised..
"really... "

"haan... Look me and shru...
Dad and suji bua... Dadaji and his sister kaveri dadi...and so on... "

"interesting... "

"hmm... We all brothers love our sisters a lot... More than our life...

Shru is my everything...

Suji bua is everything for Dad... "

His phone rings at that time and he goes to attend it...

But something that strikes her mind is sujatha bua ...

In mind...

What's wrong with sujatha bua... I know she doesn't like me from the beginning.

Even I tried to patch up with her, she didn't let me..

But all of a sudden, on that godh barai day...

She goes into fb...

That evening...

Sujatha comes to ragini's room...

Ragini will be struggling to open a neck piece... That's when suji helps her...

"thanks laksh...
She stops in the middle seeing bua there...

"bua! What u want? "

"maafi! Karogi? "

Ragini looks at her surprised...

"bua! I have no grudge on u.. That's okay..."

"why r u so good.. Haan? "

Ragini still looks at her..

"hope my disha gets 10 percent of ur nature...

I am very sorry beta! I have tried hurting u many times. 
But everytime, u impressed me with ur kindness and intelligence...

Bye beta... I ll never come in ur life again...

Take care of lakshya... He is fortunate to get you... "

She kisses her forehead... And leaves.

That's all, since then she has not come to mm...

Fb ends...

"what shall I do! Shall I tell this to lakshya?

No no, he won't understand... He would label that as her 'new Drama '...

I want to know more about sujatha bua...

Something strikes to her mind and she goes some where...

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Scene opens in gadodia mansion...

"yippee! My exams are over... "

Sumi smiles at radho's excitement...

"what about the results dear? "

"Tab deklenge... Now I gonna eat well and sleep well... Also, meet dii... "

Sumi chuckles at her...

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Ragini comes to ap's room...

Dp was seen back hugging ap...

"oops! I forgot to knock the door... " says ragini turns other side.

They part apart and smiles sheepishly...

"baby girl! What's the matter... "

"actually, I am kidnapping ur gf for an hour... Is that okay! "

"anything for u... " dp smiles...

"thank you" she hugs him and take ap outside...

Ap looks at her confused and follows her to the terrace...

"raghu! What's the matter? Anything serious...! "

Ragini nods in no...
"I want to talk about suji bua with you... "

Ap looks at her confused turning into a scared one..

"did she do something again? "

"no maa... Nothing to worry... "

She narrates everything from her first encounter to that godh barai day...

Ap looks at her silently...

"maa, something Is really wrong with her... I want to know everything about her... Just a curiosity...

If u don't want to tell, I have no problem... "

She was about to go when ap holds her hand...

"there is nothing that I should not tell you... " she makes her sit in a swing and herself sit beside her...

"Dp and sujatha are the kids of devraj maheshwari. Dp was 8 years elder to suji... He always wanted a sister and god blessed him with the one.. She is his everything...

Everything was fine till baby sujatha was 6 months old...

Her mother met with an accident and died...

So, devraj maheshwari and dp becomes over protective of her... They took care of her like apple of their eyes...

Then came kaveriji to take care of suji and dp...

Since, she was a traditional woman... She brought up suji also as a traditional, naive girl...

Suji was used to their love and care...

That's when a thunder strikes them when devraj maheshwari too leaves them by suffering from a blood cancer...

Dp was 24 year old and she was just 16 year...

And dp was  over possessive of her... He never let any boy come near her..

Suji 's mind and heart were so immature... And her world revolves around her bhai... She too was possessive of him...

That time I came to their life... Me and dp were lovers since college but waited for the right time to get married...

The importance he was giving me irked sujatha...

She is used to behave maniac... She never wants to share her bhai's love with anyone... Always tried to create miffs between us...

But it's our love that was able to overcome those...

And we decided to not have a child till she gets better and marries someone...

Later ramprasad comes to her life... He was dp's business friend...he often used to come our home..

Sujatha whose heart was craving for love liked him at an instant...

She approached once and proposed him...

But ramprasad denied her proposal stating that she is just his friend's sister... And he would like to marry a modern girl unlike a traditional one like her...

She was shattered...we all came to know about this only after she attempted to give up her life...

Ragini gasps at that...

Then dp made a decision to get her married to ram only...

Because dp felt he is a genuine person...and would take care of his baby sister like him ...

Also, he felt he would fail as a brother if he couldn't do that for her...

But god is great... Ramprasad is a very nice person and he instantly accepted dp 's proposal respecting their friendship...

Everything was going well until me and suji got pregnant at same time...

Suji's happiness had no bounds... She was becoming Mom and bua at the same time...

But god could not tolerate her happiness...

She lost her baby when she tripped from the stairs...

While I delivered lakshya...

That's it! She again starts behaving aggressive...not knowing to grief for her lost baby or rejoice for her bhai's son...

It took months for her to come out of that grief...

I always used to keep lakshya away from her scared of her...

One day, when I was in the kitchen...

I could here a shriek from lakshya... I got scared and ran to the room to find suji protecting my lakshya by covering him and the almera had fallen on her back...

I thanked god million times...

And thanked suji also...

From then the equation between her and lakshya changed... She always used to pamper him, play with him... A kind of attachment she developed...

We had almost got our suji back till I got pregnant with shruthi...

She is used to take care of me like a mother... Those times..

But seeing me playing with lakshya and talking to the baby in my womb again sowed the feelings in her to become mom...

Even after doctor had forbidden to conceive as that would take her life, she became so adamant in giving birth to disha.. 

We all were so scared that time till she was fine...

Since, it was the precious child for her... She pampered the baby a lot.

She let Disha live her own life... In fact, a spoiled life...

Suji always wanted disha to get  married to lakshya..

One, because lakshya is her favorite...

Second, she feels her daughter will be in safe hands...

But when this didn't happen, she tried doing those silly things again...

And that's the reason, she dislikes u...

But less did she know that, she had liked u long back unknowingly... I could see that through her eyes...

Ragini just smiles....

U r a real gem raghu... She took almost years to accept me... But accepted u in few days... That's  my raghu's magic...

She kisses her forehead...

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Hello everyone!

That's all for today...

Precap :lakshya in trouble.. 😝

And what's that... Answer through the comments... Next part will be dedicated on your name...

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