Loved but not forgiven ✅

By VabnaMohan

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A journey of MaNan where they love each other but they can't forgive.... When you choose your happiness by ma... More

Is It To Late
Character Sketch
Who is Who
How do They Know
Young Man, Old Man
Fabulous 5 VS Fantastic 4
Valued Relations
The Annual
They Meet?
Music Fest
Thank you All
How Could You?
A Different Point Of View
Rewind
Character Sketch
Interview
Rewind Reel One
Kids
Rewind- Reel Two
Where is it?
Let's Football
Anticeptic And Horror
New Cover
Mausam Badal ne Wala Hai?
I Swear He Sweared
The Call
Complicated Malhotras
Why Was The Call?
Turn in Events
If You Hurt Them I Will Kill You
Sneek Peek
One Step Closer
Men's Time
Confrontations
The Breaking
The Good For Nothing Wins
The Promise
He Killed Her Vibe
Their Time
His Kids
Big Hearts
Family Mornings
Kavya's Birthday Gifts
I Love You
Twin Trouble
Redemption
Your Love
Their Ways To Show Love
Pure Confession
Birthday Decor and Looks
Looks 2
Looks And Gifts
Any One There?
Birthday Blast
Manik's Nandini
"Mine" "Yours"
Back to Mumbai
The Proposal
Lost And Found
Pre Wedding
Wedding Outfits
Wedding
Epilogue
Signing Off

The Return Of Monster

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By VabnaMohan

"Ari" Nandini called her as wiped her mouth after making her brush

"Ha Mom" Arya said playing with her Teddy

"Kya ho gaya tha kal raat?" Nandini asked as Arya who stopped

"Wo I got a night mare" she said and hugged Nandini who was astonished by her behavior

"Mom he won't leave us na?" Arya asked her voice was low

"Who baby?" Nandini asked confused seeing her mode suddenly change

"Dad" she said meekly as Nandini was shock but she composed herself

"Aap ko daar lag raha hai?" Nandini asked withdrawing herself from Arya

"Mom apko ek secret bataye" she said as her daughter looked at her

"Mom ko bhi daard lag raha hai" she said

"But pata hai apko mujhe kisine kaha that ki jaab apko daar lage na tho apke sath kuch bhot accha hone wala hai ya kuch bura and aapko humesha yeh sochna chahiye ki apke saath accha hoga, so let go and go with a flow" she said

"You are scared na tho apni insecurities side men rakh kar srot ek chance de do unhe" she said pulling Arya close to her

"Aap nahi jante unhe mein janti hu he is a keeper" Nandini said further

"And remember galti sirf apke Dad ki nahi kahi na kahi apke Mom ki bhi this" she took a pause

"Always remember Ari don't look at a person in either black or grey, every person had his own colors look at those colors and then make your perceptions" Nandini said hugging her

"And now let's make our princess ready han" Nandini said taking her out to select a dress so that she could take shower
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"You......you made this" Manik asked his voice was shaken as Arav looked down

Manik sat on his knees and held his hands keeping the book nicely besides him

"Please look here" Manik pleaded as Arav looked at him to see him cry

Manik pulled Arav tightly in his embraced crying, not knowing what to do and how to handle him Arav hugged him back

Manik withdrew from the hug and kisses Arav all over his face saying Sorries

"I am so sorry" he said he said holding Arav's hand in his

"I could never.... I am sorry" Manik could not say anything, he just picked Arav up and took her with him
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"Mom blue one" Arya said picking a blue dress

When Manik came with Arav in his arms, he took Arya and Arav to Arya's bed as Nandini looked at him, he was a crying mess

"I.... I" Manik started but could not say anything he was just crying

"Kya hua hai?" Nandini asked as looking Manik's state

"I am Sorry" Manik cried hugging his kids

"Manik" Nandini said making him look at her

"Kya hua?" she asked creasing is creeks

"I gave their heart a life long scar Nandini" he said and cried continuously

"Manik nahi" she said hugging him as both the kids looked at them

"Nahi nahi Haan" he said like a stubborn Baby

"They love me so much I tho rej....." he was going to say something when Nandini closed his mouth but he removed her hand and went near the kids

"Love me but never Forgive me for what I Did to you" Manik said as Nandini pulled him back to her

"Manik!" she warned

"Aru take Ari to your room" she said as Arav took Arya with her

"Nandini no they should know" Manik said "I rejected them even before you tell me about them" he said trying to get out of her hold

"Manik Shhhhhhh" she said holding him close

"Jaan" Manik screamed in agony as Nanadini hold him

"Jaan it hurts" he said as Nandini cried seeing him like that

"Mani Jaan is here and she will always be with you please stop crying" she said rocking him like a baby

Arya came back running to the room followed by Arav

She entered and went straight to Manik and hugged him tightly hiding herself in him

"Please don't leave" she said

"Apko bura laga that Bhai made that book we will burn it but please don't leave" she said making Manik shock

"Pumpkin" Manik said in disbelief

"Yeh kya bol rahe ho aap I am never leaving you ever samjhe" he said holding her close and he looked at Arav who had hope in his eyes

Manik asked Arav to come near him and took her in his arms

"I did a big mistake and I ashamed of it but I promise I am never leaving you people again" Manik said hugging both his kids

"Agar apki Mom meri Jaan hai, the Queen of my heart na tho aab aap dono mere liye uss heart ke peices ho" he said kissing their foreheads

"I love you" he said taking the two more close

Arya kissed his cheeks giving a smile

"Lo mere ko koi hug hi nahi kar rah" Nandini complained to light the situation as Manik pulled her making it a family hug
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"Manik" Nandini called as he stood in the balcony

"Hmmm" he just hmmed

"If I would have come that day to you and told you that I am pregnant would you... would you..." she hesitated as he turned to look at her to see her looking at the floor so he paciently waited for her to say

"Would you have thought that these kids were" she played with her fingers clearly nervous

"Were of Harshad" she said and closed her eyes in fear but she didn't get any response

Not getting any response she opened her eyes to look at him who was looking at her the same way but now his eye balls were pitch black and eyes red with furry, his jaw clenched and fist was tight controlling himself not to hurt her

"Say that again Murty" he said in a dangerous voice making her take back steps automatically as he advanced to her

Her back hit the balcony wall as he trapped her, he could clearly see dear in her eyes and what she saw was beyond rage in his eyes

"Repeat. Yourself. Murthy" he said close to her face spitting fire with his posture

"I..... I.... I......" she shuttered

"You what!?" he said stopping her shutter

"Listen to this carefully Nandini Murty" he said

"Yes I did a mistake not to TRUST you then" he started

"Par Manik Malhotra ne apne pyar ko kabhi girne nahi diya, nahi apne aknon mein nahi dusro ke aknon mein" he said getting close to her

"If it was someone else who would have asked this I would have killed him" he said and got back

"I am stopping myself slapping you" he said gritting his teeth

"Par mein itna nich (cheap) nahi hu main aur na hi mera pyar itna nich (cheap) hai" he said pushing her as tears made her way

"Chhe tum kuch bhi socho" he said and left making Nandini cry her heart out
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Manik was leaving Nandini house he was very angry

"Hello kaha jaa rahe hai aap" he heard Arav

He closed his eyes took a deep breath and turned to Arav

"I have a school project help me in that" he said rather kind off ordered

The one who never took orders and was a bull when he was angry was calmed in minutes and followed his son with her to his room
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"Arya yeh kya kar rahi hai aap?" Manik asked his daughter who was not so good making project models

"Solar system has only eight planets" he said removing one of the plastic ball she was mostly playing with

"And concentrate warna I will punish" he showed her eyes

"Look how Bhai is almost done with his project" he said and she started to color her planets

Both kids has sensed that their father was not sad anymore but he was angry

Nandini peeked in the room to see Manik helping both the kids she cautiontly peeked and looked at the bowl in her hand and sent a prayer to her Aiyyappa and with a big smile entered the room

"Babies" she called as both the kids looked at her but Manik didn't even spare her a look, he had already sensed her and also smelled the delicious aroma of the gajar halwa she had brought with her

"My babies must be hungry" she said

"And we didn't have our breakfast so kuch meetha ho jaye" she said cheerfully as the kids face lit up like a bulb

"Gajar ka halwa!!" They both exclaimed and they both were off to Nandini

"Hmm" Arav moaned smelling the aroma

Nandini took to small bowls and gave the kids who were eating sitting on the bed and then looked at Manik with a pout

Manik packed tge kids things up and was going to leave when he heard Nandini

"Mani" she called with love as he stopped where he was she called him that after years

"Tum nahi karoge breakfast?" she asked and the kids also look at him

"Wo nahi I am full" he said then looked at her, he knew that she was doing it for him. Whenever he was angry she use to cook his favorite food

"You won't want to miss it, it's yummy" she said making him look at the halwa, it actually looked yummy

But then he saw Nandini's face which went from a smirk to a innocent look and turned

"I have important call to make" he said and left

"Gussa hai" Arav said eating his halwa as Nanadini looked at him and bobbed her head as yes

"Tho manao jao" he said and Arya giggled as she glared at the two and then ran to follow Manik
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Manik was talking on the phone as Nandini stood there paciently from last 10 minutes

And Manik looked at her from corner of her eyes she was talking to herself making faces

"Thik hai mail me the whole thing" Manik asked his PA and hung up as Nandini stood in front of him

"What?" he asked rudely

"Maina" she started talking as she looked a small kid trying to convence his parent "I am sorry" she said holding her ears

"For what?" he asked coldly

"For....for" she shuttered again

"For thinking low of me, for thinking something which never even popped in my head even once" he said and she looked down

"Just let it be" he said and was going to leave but she held his hand

"Manik I am really sorry" she said on verge of tears

"Earn it then" he said

"Aur kya karu I made halwa for you, I didn't even disturb you when you were on the call" she said "Aur kya karu? I will do anything" she said

"I don't know and I don't want to think and now leave me" he said taking his hand out of her grip

"Halwa tho kha lo" she said "Mujhe bhi bhuk lagi hai" she added as he sat on the chair and she served him, he was going to eat

"Wait wait wait" she said making him stop and then

"I will feed na" she said seating in front of him on the table folding her legs and started to feed him with the spoon as he eat looking at her all the time

After eating three bowls Nandini cleaned his face and gave him a thumbs up showing him done as he got up and turned to leave to Arav's room again with a small smile which he hid from her successfully

"Yeh monster dekho, yaha kitni planning ki thi maine isko tantrums dikhane ki yeh khud mujhse rooth kar beth gaya" she said eating her halwa

"Aiyyappa kushi nahi dekhi jati na apko meri" she complained looking up taking another bite

"Kya socha tha kya ho raha hai" she said dramatically

"Koi nahi Malhotra mein tumhe mana kar rahungi hi meri jo galti thi" she said as guilt flashed on her face

"Par phir tumhe mujhse koi nahi baccha sakta" she said flipping her hairs thinking what should she do to woo her Monster

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