hi guys. im writing a new story. ill do my best to finish it and i dont think i can change the mistakes all the time cause...toooo lazy XD....sooo wish me luck =). im new and so u guys can give me some points to correct it thx.
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it was 8 o' clock in the morning woke up with a head ache i sit on the corner of the bed and look around my bedroom, walls coverd in gray wallpapers, ( what did u think? girly pink?! never) cupboards with less clothes...and bla bla bla...uhh... i get up from where i was sitting towards the window i undo the curtains and open the window. i looked out side and looked around " Good morning "