Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

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hello guys...so basically this is my third avneil ff....just peep in it...i m sure u would love it...this sto... More

characters
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
teaser
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
teaser
chapter 16
chapter 17
teaser
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
teaser-most awaited part
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
Imp
chapter-24(last part)

teaser

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Doctor:avni...sabse pehle tum kise dekhna chahti ho...

Avni:neil ko.....

Operation is successful

Doctor:toh avni....are u ready to see this beautiful world...

Avni:pehle mujhe mere neil ko dekhna hai...kaha hai voh...bulaiye na use...

Doctor remains silent...

Avni:doctor..aap ho na yaha...main chahti hu ki meri patti kholte vakt neil yaha ho...i want to see him first...plz bulaiye use....

Mehta family arrives...

Neela:avni

Avni:maa....

Neela:kaisi ho tum avni...

Avni:maa...main bilkul theek hu...ab toh aapki beti dekh bhi sakti hai...

Doctor:chaliye...ab hum inki patti kholte hai..

Avni:nahi...pehle neil ko aane do...

Neela:beta...yeh neil kon hai...

Avni:maa...neil vahi hai jisne mujhe iss operation ke liye raazi karvaya...jisne mujhe saari khushiyaan di...maa...

Neela:baccha...kya tum neil se pyaar karti ho...

Avni(blushing):haa maa....main neil se bahot pyaar karti hu aur neil bhi mujhse bahot pyaar karta hai...

Mehta family is happy that finally avni got her love...finally their is someone who will love her unconditional...

Doctor:dekhiye...hume ab aur der nahi karni chahiye...hume inki patti abhi hatani hogi..

Avni:lekin neil...

Neela:baccha...neil aa jayega...lekin abhi tumhari patti hatana zaruri hai na...toh plz zid mat karo

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Neela:doctor...aap itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe hai..sab theek hai na...

Ashish:haa doctor...ab avni ko koi problem nahi hogi na dekhne main...

Doctor:haa..avni toh theek hai lekin

Dayavanti:lekin kya

Doctor:  ......................
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All gets shocked...neela sees avni standing at door with shocked expression.....

Neela:avni(teary eyes)

All sees her

Avni screams

Avni: Neilllll!!!!!!!

So guys here is the small teaser....what do u think what happen to neil....share ur views and plz vote and comment...

Love Mamta

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