SWIM Book 1 (Complete three-h...

By EricJames16

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***EDITOR'S CHOICE AWARD*** What would you do if you only had three months to live? When a tsunami traps a gi... More

Author's Note
OPENING
Day 1 Sunday, November 19, 2017
Day 1.2 Sunday, November 19, 2017
Day 2 Monday, November 20, 2017
Day 3 Tuesday, November 21, 2017
Day 4 Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Day 4.2 Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Day 5 Thursday, November 23, 2017
Day 6 Friday, November 24, 2017
Day 6.2 Friday, November 24, 2017
Day 7 Saturday, November 25, 2017
*Day 8 Sunday, November 26, 2017
*Day 8.2 Sunday, November 26, 2017
Day 11 Wednesday, November 29, 2017
*Day 11.2 Wednesday, November 29, 2017
*Day 11.3 Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Day 12 Thursday, November 30, 2017
Day 12.2 Thursday, November 30, 2017
Day 13 Friday, December 1, 2017
Day 13.2 Friday, December 1, 2017
Day 13.3 Friday, December 1, 2017
Day 14 Saturday, December 2, 2017
Day 16 Monday, December 4, 2017
Day 17 Tuesday, December 5, 2017
Day 18 Wednesday, December 6, 2017
Day 19 Thursday, December 7, 2017
Day 20 Friday, December 8, 2017
Day 20.2 Friday, December 8, 2017
Day 20.3 Friday, December 8, 2017
Day 21 Saturday, December 9, 2017
Day 22 Sunday, December 10, 2017
Day 22.2 Sunday, December 10, 2017
Author Photo
Author Photo
Day 25 Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Day 25.2 Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Day 25.3 Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Author Photo
Day 26 Thursday, December 14, 2017
Day 26.2 Thursday, December 14, 2017
Day 26.3 Thursday, December 14, 2017
Day 27 Friday, December 15, 2017
Day 27.2 Friday, December 15, 2017
Author photo
Day 28 Saturday, December 16, 2017
Day 30 Monday, December 18, 2017
Day 31 Tuesday, December 19, 2017
Day 36 Sunday, December 24, 2017
Day 36.2 Sunday, December 24, 2017
Day 36.3 Sunday, December 24, 2017
Day 37 Monday, December 25, 2017
Day 37.2 Monday, December 25, 2017
Day 40 Thursday, December 28, 2017
Day 41 Friday, December 29, 2017
Day 41.2 Friday, December 29, 2017
Day 41.3 Friday, December 29, 2017
Day 42 Saturday, December 30, 2017
Day 42.2 Saturday, December 30, 2017
Day 44 Monday, January 1, 2018
Day 44.2 Monday, January 1, 2018
Day 44.3 Monday, January 1, 2018
Day 44.4 Monday, January 1, 2018
Day 45 Tuesday, January 2, 2018
Day 45.2 Tuesday, January 2, 2017
Day 46 Wednesday, December 3, 2017
Day 46.2 Wednesday, December 3, 2017
Day 46.3 Wednesday, January 3, 2018
Day 47 Thursday, January 4, 2018
Day 48 Friday, January 5, 2018
Day 49 Saturday, January 6, 2018
Day 49.2 Saturday, January 6, 2018
Day 49.3 Saturday, January 6, 2018
Day 49.4 Saturday, January 6, 2018
Day 49.5 Saturday, January 6, 2016
Day 50 Sunday, January 7, 2018
Day 51 Monday, January 8, 2018
Day 53 Wednesday, January 10, 2018
Day 55 Friday, January 12, 2018
Day 55.2 Friday, January 12, 2018
Day 58 Monday, January 15, 2018
Day 58.2 Monday, January 15, 2018
Day 60 Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Day 60.2 Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Day 60.3 Wednesday, December 17, 2018
Day 60.4 Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Day 43 Sunday, December 31, 2017-- DELETED SCENE
Day 43.2 Sunday, December 31, 2017-- DELETED SCENE
Day 43.3 Sunday, December 31, 2017-- DELETED SCENE
Editorial Revision
DAY 1 (SIX DAYS BEFORE THE FLOOD)
DAY 1.2
DAY 2 (FIVE DAYS BEFORE THE FLOOD)
DAY 3 (FOUR DAYS REMAINING)
DAY 4 (THREE MORNING'S BEFORE THE WAVE)
DAY 4.2 (THREE NIGHT'S BEFORE THE WAVE)
DAY 5 (TWO NIGHTS BEFORE THE TSUNAMI)
DAY 6 (MORNING BEFORE THE CRASH)
DAY 6.2 (EVENING BEFORE HELL)
DAY 7 (THE FLOOD)
DAY 8
DAY 8.2
DAY 11
DAY 11.2
DAY 11.3
DAY 12
DAY 12.2
DAY 13
DAY 13.2
DAY 13.3
DAY 14
DAY 16
DAY 17
DAY 18
DAY 19
DAY 20
DAY 20.2
DAY 20.3
DAY 21
DAY 22
DAY 22.2
DAY 25
DAY 25.2
DAY 25.3
DAY 26
DAY 26.2
DAY 26.3
DAY 27
DAY 27.2
DAY 28
DAY 30
DAY 31
DAY 36
DAY 36.2
DAY 36.3
DAY 37
DAY 37.2
DAY 40
DAY 41
DAY 41.2
DAY 41.3
DAY 42
DAY 45
DAY 45.2
DAY 46
DAY 46.2
DAY 46.3
DAY 47
DAY 48
DAY 48
DAY 49.2
DAY 49.3
DAY 49.4
DAY 50
DAY 51
DAY 53
DAY 55
DAY 55.2
DAY 58
DAY 58.2
DAY 60
DAY 60.2
DAY 60.3
DAY 60.4
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DAY 49.5

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By EricJames16

Saturday, January 6, 2016

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hat's it gonna be?" Brett asked George, oar still in hand.

George, who was surprisingly indecisive at this moment, looked to Craig for insight.—Craig had survived a burning fire and managed to take all the food and the neighbor's boat with him before the whole building burned down. Craig was smart and tough. George might have thought George would listen to Craig.

Craig exhaled in deep thought. He looked over the gray horizon, which turned silver as the sun behind the dark clouds and thick mist rose through the sky. Craig's hand suddenly squeezed mine, which made me realize he had been holding it all this time. I must have been numb with thought, as I watched the three of them make their decision, and I listened to the heartbreaking cries of the undoubtedly starving family. How were they even alive? I wondered. I almost thought I was imagining the whole thing.

But finally George made a decision. He said to Brett, "You get 'em. We'll bring the boat at a safe distance from the family, and you'll have to swim back and forth for each family member."

I wanted to furl my eyebrows in confusion at George. Why couldn't the boys just bring the boat directly up to the family? Something seemed fishy about George's plan.

But George answered my question instantly. The reason was Fear: "Firstly, we can't risk that family jumping onto our boat all at once. Secondly, we don't know if they would try to attackus and take the boat for themselves."

What a ludicrous thought. Maybe the mother and father would want to ensure their children's' safety, but they wouldn't go so far as to turn to violence, not if we were here to save them! Plus. . . we could take them easily in a fight.

Brett studied Craig's face with confused scrutiny. But then, looking over Brett's shoulder to see the family across the way as they waved and cried out for deliverance, Brett exhaled in a message, "Whatever you say, George. . . As long as we help them."

George seemed surprised by Brett's willingness to agree. I could see the discomfort on his face as he turned on the motor and sent the boat turning toward the family. Brett and Craig cleared heavy debris with the wobbling oars until the boat reached halfway to the family.

Then, George stopped the boat halfway and gestured at Brett to begin his hero work.

George took off his shirt and pants so as to keep them dry as he swam to the family. His muscles shivered in the freezing air. A gust of wind moaned over the ocean, and with a single look at me, he turned and leapt off the boat. The blackened water splashed.

The water stunk on my face, and as I listened to Brett make his sacrifice of health to save the family, his desperate journey moved further and further into the distance.

I peered over the edge and watched him make it toward the other side. At that moment, I truly saw Brett as a super hero. Not just for his muscles, but for his stoicism. His courage. His caring heart.

He was a good man. Which was why I wanted to kick and scream and even kill George when I heard him whisper in a eager request to Craig-- "Time to go."

I shot my eyes at him with horror as he received a definite nod from Craig, who quickly jumped up and pushed debris out of the way and helped turn the boat in the opposite direction. Brett was far away and still making his swim to the family.

Next I heard a terrified roar of screams from the family as George kicked on the motor and the boat fled. I looked over as Brett climbed onto wooden slabs of the family's floating house.

I wanted to raise my hand to Brett and scream to him. His eyes met mine as he stood tall. Knowing he did the right thing. . . But that it wasn't enough.

They were gone from my vision. And in my emotional turmoil, I forgot to memorize the trail back to Brett.

But I couldn't scream. I couldn't protest. It was him or Jack. And I would wait as long as I had to for the right moment to take this boat around, and go back to the bay house.

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