I hate this story.
I'm sorry it's just...UGH.
I hate the way it was written and all of the spelling and grammatical errors and it just makes me twitch.
Honestly, the day when your own writing gives you a headache is when you know that something was seriously wrong with you when you wrote it.
Plus I went too fast with the plot. There could've been way more chapters if I would just slow the hell down and stop being so eager. Like seriously it was in a one month period for a good ten chapters before her pregnancy.
It's also extremely cliche and has no surprises at all. It's so obvious what is going to happen when and where.
UGH!
I love this book, I really do, but I also hate it for all of these fatal flaws.
Yeah so it was my first official Wattpad story but it's just poorly written, completely expected and is quite boring.
But if you loved it despite all of the problem areas I salute you!
Soo yeah this was just a short rant after reading this story for the first time in a while.
Byee!
Adios!
^_^