Ahkmenrah: The Fourth King of...

By HackedByAWriter

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He was prepared to say his last prayer. But the blow never came. Instead his saw the Nubian fall to the groun... More

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Prologue
Chapter 1: Race
Chapter 2: Wrath of the Pharaoh
Chapter 3: Banquet
Chapter 4: The Tablet
Chapter 5: Fair "Maiden"
Chapter 6: The Heirs
Chapter 7: Three Ways To Kill A King
Chapter 8: Cobra
Chapter 9: The Knife
Chapter 10: Poison
Chapter 11: Sea Storm
Chapter 12: Big Brother
Chapter 13: Self Defense
Chapter 14: Crocodile Tears
Chapter 15: Resurrection
Chapter 16: Long Live the King
Chapter 17: Dreams of Serpents and Victory
Chapter 18: The Storm Has come
Chapter 19: Being Reckless
Chapter 20: Fear Silence and Secrecy
Chapter 21: The Crown of the Nile
Chapter 22: The First Flash of Lightning
Chapter 23: Dark Horse
Chapter 24: Ramses the Great
Chapter 25: Wild
Chapter 26: Learning of Sargon
Chapter 27: Keeping the Peace
Chapter 28: The Messenger
Chapter 29: The First Blow
Chapter 30: Man, Woman and Child
Chapter 31: Remembering
Chapter 32: Nightmares
Chapter 33: Threads of Mortals
Chapter 34: This War
Chapter 35: Martyrs
Chapter 36: Have Faith
Chapter 37: The Most Spectacular Fashion
Chapter 38: Fight Song
Chapter 39: Blood Gold and Lions
Chapter 40: Conquered
Chapter 41: Defiance
Chapter 42: New Hope
Chapter 43: Phase One
Chapter 44: Vengeance
Chapter 45: Most Dangerous Job
Chapter 46: Thirst and Hunger
Chapter 47: A Promise
Chapter 48: Return of the White Lioness
Chapter 49: Thirteen
Chapter 50: Hathor and Sekhmet
Chapter 51: Fame and Glory
Chapter 52: Pain
Chapter 53: Life and Death
Chapter 54: The In Between
Chapter 55: Death March
Chapter 56: Lies
Chapter 57: Tears
Chapter 58: Rogues of the Nile
CHapter 59: Embody
Chapter 60: Heated Moments
Chapter 61: Food is Power
Chapter 62: Love and Hurt
Chapter 63: Raging Hearts, Nervous Smiles and Sentimental Slop
Chapter 64: Shattered Rain
Chapter 65: Strangeness and Honor
Chapter 66: Old is Gold
Chapter 67: Flesh and Bone
Chapter 68: Heartless
Chapter 69: Scars to her Beauty
Chapter 70: Love's Labours
Chapter 71: And This
Chapter 72: A Race
Chapter 73: Guardian
Chapter 74: Knives in Hearts
Chapter 75: The Plummet
Chapter 76: Method and Madness
Chapter 77: War Against Love
Chapter 78: Monster
Chapter 79: Blind Fools and Thieves
Chapter 80: To Kill A King
Chapter 81: A Clash of Swords
Chapter 82: The Truth of Kings
Chapter 83: The Plunge
Chapter 84: Of Whores and Mothers
Chapter 85: Fire and Water
Chapter 86: The Winged Soul
Chapter 87: The Smile
Chapter 88: The Throne
Chapter 89: Threads of Silence
Chapter 90: Racing the Sun
Chapter 91: Queen
Chapter 92: Exile
Chapter 93: Gifts
Chapter 94:
Chapter 96: Queen Slayer
Chapter 97: An Ambrosia of Ashes
Epilogue 1/3 - The Stories of Our Lives
Epilogue 2/3 - Who Would Want to Live Forever?
Epilogue 3/3 - King of Kings

Chapter 95: Just Like Old Times

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The first time she drew a blanket over her sleeping children Shepseheret remembered the way her sons had been so entangled in each other that she couldn't tell their limbs apart. They had been very close, even as babies. Wherever Kahmunrah went, Ahkmenrah would follow swiftly. She didn't realise that this meant in death as well. Today was the last time she would ever shroud her son in a blanket. She looked at his peaceful features, he seemed almost asleep.

She draped the white cloth over him, watching as it sunk into the hollows of his eyes and cheek. She could still make out lips, smiling even now.

She didn't weep. She couldn't. Her son couldn't possibly be dead. She half expected him to stand up and cast the sheet away proclaiming it all to be an elaborate prank. But he didn't and that was the worst part.

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"The King is dead," announced the messenger.

Sabaf froze, his breath hitched in his throat. Ahkmenrah? He couldn't mean Ahkmenrah.

"Please leave us." He heard Nitocris say.

He felt a warm hand clasp his. He looked up at Nitocris to find comfort in her features. He couldn't even do that, the tears had blurred his vision.

"We must go to them." She announced. "They will need support."

He nodded in assent, his lips trembling as he tried to reply, as he tried to fight back his tears. Nitocris cupped his face in her hands and brought him closer to her pressing her forehead against against his.

"Weep." She whispered. "You are no weaker for it."

He melted into her and wept bitterly. He wept as he had done when he lost his sister.In the end Ahkmenrah had been his friend.

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He and Kahmunrah stood now in the river of fire and water.

"When Anubis comes for us, will I have to get my heart measured?" Asked Ahkmenrah. "I've forgotten the 42 confessions. Do you remember them?"

"Ahk we have been learning those since we learnt to speak." Chastised the older brother. "But you won't need them."

"Why not?" Ahkmenrah frowned. "Have they taught us lies."

Kahmunrah turned to him, his dark eyes solemn.

"Take my hand little brother."

Ahkmenrah thought this a rather strange request, but he acquiesced. When their palms touched warmth flooded through his body and on their hands perched a beautiful blue and red bird. He recognised the warmth. It was he golden feeling of the childhood when they had slept in the same bed. It was rush of happiness as his brother laugh at his joke. It was the pain the and heartbreak of their recent betrayasl. But most of all he felt a deep sense of love.

"Don't you see brother?" Said Kahmunrah. "You and I are one."

Kahmunrah let go and the bird disappeared. But the warmth remained.

"How long have you known?" Asked Ahkmenrah. "How did you get a funeral? How..." he paused the realisation hitting. "Am I only half a person?"

"Frankly Ahk I don't know," said Kahmunrah. "I was told of this when I arrived here. My body apparently wasn't meant to have been found."

"I'm glad it was."

"So am I." Kahmunrah studied his brother over one more time. "Ahk forgive me I..."

"You should have held on!" Cried Ahkmenrah. "You could have have lived! You just had to act the noble ass didn't you?!"

"I was too far gone, nothing could have saved me."

"But your heart was weighed and you passed." He grinned. "You have a good heart. Unless little Ammit is waiting to have both of us in her jaws at the same time."

"I had meant the poison was already killing me," added Kahmunrah. "Even I'm not fool enough to feel that guilty anymore."

"I hate you."

"Of course you do." Kahmunrah paused. "How is Ramses?"

"Could you not see him?"

"I could only see you," Kahmunrah didn't meet his eyes. "It was the price I paid to keep you alive for this long."

"What?"

"I'll tell you later. First, tell me of my son."

"He's certainly better looking than the both of us combined." Ahkmenrah to contain his anger. You self-sacrificing idiot of a brother. "The happiest babe I had ever seen. He has your smile."

Kahmunrah looked as if he was about to cry.

"And Sabra?"

"We were to be married the day I was killed." Said Ahkmenrah.

"It's about time."

"That I got killed?"

"That you two finally decided to acknowledge your feelings for each to get married you baboon." His smile fell. "And mother?"


"She never said it out loud, but she misses you deeply. She's loved Ramses. I think she sees you in him."

"And now she will see you in his features too."

There was silence. Finally Ahkmenrah spoke.

"I missed you." said Ahk. "I couldn't function, I'm sorry. I let you down in the days after you died. I..."

Before he could continue speaking he felt his brother envelop him in an embrace.

"For me, Ahk, there is never a sin too big to forgive," muttered Kahmunrah. "Not when it comes to you."

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Y'all have suffered under my hands enough so I have rewarded you with this scene. A few more chapters to go.

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