AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
avnis decision
note
consoling him
confession
dinner!!!
avnis denial
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
horror movie
dressing
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AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 66
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

family !!!

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By alka000

avneil and riyali came back to mumbai , all are happy with their lives 

at breakfast table 

bebe : sunny tomorrow we all have to go to your cousins home

prakash : yes bebe i remember 

neil : but y dad is there any special occasion ?

prakash : yes its his grand daughter naming ceremony 

neil : oh wow great

swetha : yeah i know its great but dont know when i am going to get the chance to call for our grand daughters naming ceremony  

neil chokes out his food , avni who is in the kitchen to get some item listens this and stays there stilled 

neil : mo--om 

swetha : yes neil i know this is ur personal but its enough now i cant handle it more i want a grand child 

bebe : swetha!!!

swetha : bebe plse dont shout at me , even i want to feel the happiness of having grand child , i want to pamper him , play with him , already its very late now i cant wait more 

neil gulps down 

neil : but 

swetha : ok neil i know i am being personal but i cant help , anyway its ok if u r not ready 

saying this she goes to her room sadly , avni sees her mummyji sad and feels sad 

neil too feels sad but he should also talk to avni once , he goes to office after having his break fast and avni goes to hospital 

avni keeps on thinking what about swethas words and at lunch time she goes to neils office 

in neils cabin 

avni : neil 

neil looks at her 

neil : woah avni u here 

he gets up and hugs her tightly 

neil : what a surprise mam , u here in the working hours ?

avni : yeah its just that i want to see , so took half day leave and came here , y i shouldnt come ?

neil : how can some one dare to stop u to come here 

avni laughs followed by neil , they break the hug and neil kisses her forehead 

neil : u know u r looking sexy in this saree (he snakes his arms around her waist )

avni : mr khanna did u forget that this is ur office not our room 

neil immediately leaves her and goes to lock the cabin door 

neil : see now no one will come here 

saying this he goes close to her , avni moves back ward until she gets hit by the wall 

neil cages her between wall and him 

avni : neil r u mad , come let us sit what r u even trying to do ?

neil : plse wifey just one kiss , u dont even have any idea how beautiful u look in saree 

avni : but neil 

neil : shhh , no one will come wifey just one kiss plse 

before she can reply he places his lips on hers , they both drown in the moment and he not able to control his hormones opens the zip of her blouse , she tires to push him away but he pulls her more into him 

due to lack of oxyzen they break the kiss , but neil is not done yet he places wet kisses on her neck and bites her there 

avni : ahh neil 

neil continues his ministrations and avni feels pleasure , he then pulls her blouse down and kisses on her bare shoulder giving bites all over there , he removes his shirt in one go and again kisses her 

some one knocks the door , both avneil get scared 

neil : oh shit , wheres my shirt ?

avni : neil look what u have done see me i am totally looking messed

neil : avni u go to washroom , i will look who is on the door 

avni rushes to washroom and neil wears his shirt and opens the door after adjusting his hair and himself properly 

in bathroom 

avni blushes looking at her image in the mirror , her hairs are dishevelled and her shoulder consists of of his love bites 

avni : this neil !!! what should i do ? even in the office also (she smiles slightly blushing )

outside neil opens the door to find his dad 

neil : dad ?

prakash : y did u take so much time neil?

neil : dad  i was --- i was in the washroom 

prakash : oh with avni right ?

neil gets shocked

neil : what r u talking dad ? avni ?

prakash : i know son , i am ur dad , anyway i think u r busy , sry for the disturbance and yes i came here to see my daughter in law 

neil : its nothing like that dad , we are just 

prakash : its ok puttar i can understand 

neil gets embarrassed while prakash laughs and goes to his cabin , neil closes the door cabin 

neil : avni open the door 

avni opens the door and as soon as she opens the door neil kisses her fiercely and after the kiss avni hits his chest playfully 

avni : neil u r mad 

neil : yes i am only for u and because of u i am embarrassed in front of dad 

avni : what papa ji came here !! oh god neil what will he think of me and this is all because of u and u r blaming me , u shameless creature 

neil : so what can i do u r only responsible , if u will be this irresistible then how can i control my hormones 

avni : ok then i will go home then 

neil : ok ok ok i am sry , come now sit 

he made her sit on the couch and he sits beside her 

avni : neil i want to ask u something 

neil : hmm let me guess u want to talk about children right ?

avni looks at him shocked 

neil laughs and pulls her chubby cheeks 

neil : dont get shocked wifey , i can read ur mind and dont ask me how 

avni smiles and puts her head on his chest while he pulls her more close to him , his one hand on her waist and another playing with her fingers 

avni : neil i want a child 

neil looks at her , she too looks at him 

avni : neil its ok if u r not ready but 

neil : i am ready avni 

avni hugs him tightly 

neil : but avni r u sure ? i mean r u forcing urself to do this because mom wants this?

avni : no neil i want it because i am ready for it , even i want to feel of having a child , our own blood in my womb , our son / daughter who will be the born by our love , i too want our own family in which u , me and our kid will be present, a happy family 

neil smiles at her and kisses her forehead affectionately 

neil : i love u avni 

avni : love u too neil and yes r u ready to take responsibility 

neil : of course as long as u r ready i am too ready for it

avni : ok then i think i have to go i will go to mehta mansion i want to meet maa 

neil : ok then see u 

avni bids bye to him and goes to mehta house  



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