Gazab Ka Hai Ye Dil (Twinj an...

By Taani10

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Story of love friendship trust brothers... itz a combination of family bonding .. brother bonding .. love hat... More

Prologue
Character Sketch
1. Start of a New journey
2. First day at University
3. Silly Fights
4. Unwanted partners
5. Underwater Diving Competition
6. Understanding Brother
7. Grief
8. Saving Nandini
9. Never Ending Concern of Kunj
10. Sensing trouble
11. New Friendship
12. Fresher party
13. claustrophobia
14. Enjoying Rain
15. Birthday suprise or a shock?
16. Maya
17. Two people with same mental Disorder
18. The four met
19. Guilty Twinkle
20. Brainwashing Kunj
21. Reason behind
22. Breaking ties
23. Missing his lil brother
24. Confused Manik
25. Shattered after the Truth
26. Guilt
27. Decesion ??
28. Making it up
29. Happy Moments
30. Partner for Prom Night
31. Prom Night
32. Hidden Emotions
33. Questions
34. Real face of Adi
35. Investigation
36. Hurt
36. Some Truths are Horroble
39. Bond getting stronger
40. Twinkle's Birthday
41. Opening Up a lil
42. Nobody knows what comes next?
43. Life is a Roller coster
44. Prank?
45. You Dont trust me enough
46. Birthday Bash
Anouncement
47. Realisation of love
48. Trip Started
49. Adventurous trip to Manali
50. He is Here
51. Heart Break πŸ’”πŸ’”
52. Why did i love you?
53. Ignoring
54. Hiding pain
55. I love you?
56. When Destiny play Dirty Game
57. Changed Lives
58. New Hopes
59. Who is he?
60. Deceision Of Going to India
New Entries
61. Ganesh chaturthi
62. Talking with Rj Av
63. Unexpected
64. Dream or Reality?
Time for some demands
65. Weird
66. Dinner At singhaniya Mansion
67. Four in One Place
68. Mystery of Arav
69. Emotions
70. Planning
71. Mystery solved
72. Life Risk
73. Reliving some moments
74. You Broke My Trust
75. Truth always comes out
76. Reunion
77. Family
78. Analysing Manik and Twinkle
79. Pain
80. Stupidity or Selflessness
81. Choose
82. Letting it out
83. Patch up
84. Heart Break πŸ’”πŸ’”
85. Gazab Ka Hai Ye Dil
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT

38. Subpressing Pain

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In Manik's room..

Manik cried the whole night in his own guilt that he trusted a lie over everybody's love

Manik cried - Kitna galat kiaa meine... sabke sath vo bhi us aurat ko bharosa karke... kitna hurt kia meine sabko.. kitne saal waste kr diye meine.. apno se nafrat kark... oh god mom plzz forgive me plzzz... apke khuni ko sine se laga k rkha... or jo log sach me acche tha mujhse pyaar karte tha mera bhala chahte tha unko kitna hurt kia... m really sorryy...

Next day morning...

Manik was internally shattered.. he wants to digest the fact and trying to be normal but itz killing him from inside .. that his mother's murderer was roaming outside and he cant do anything.. for his family's safety..

Kunj came - hey bhaii... aj to aap kafi jaldi uth gye... for a change... anyways chlo breakfast krte h...

Manik thinks - Ab tujhe kese samjhau kunj.. mujhe na to koi bhuk h or na he pyaas... apne maa k gunegar ko samne milne k baad bhi me kuch nhi kar paa ra hu... bcz me tujhe nhi khona chahta...

Kunj - hey bhai khaa kho gye...

Manik - Aree nhi kuch nhi.. chal..

At breakfast table....

Kunj - oh god mumma jaldi jaldi khana do... bhtt bhuk lagi h yr...

Uday - Tumhe har baat ki jaldi kyu rehty h kunj... khane ki jaldi jane ki jaldi... fr wapas ane k jaldi..

kunj - oh god dad.. dont start again... me kia buddhe logo ki tarah dhire dhire khau ab...

Uday - kyu? Manik ko dekho .. vo buddha h kia.. but kese dhire se ache se khata h... tunhari tarah train ni pakarni hoty use

kunj - Ab vo to h apka well mannered baccha.. me wesa nhi hu.. usme meri galty h kia?

Anamika - Haa to galat kia keh re h tumhare dad... tumhe humesha har chiz ki jaldi rehty h...

Kunj - Aree yr hadd hoty h... subah subah aap dono aj meri class lgane kyu beth gye... dekho na bhai...

But Manik was lost in his world ..

kunj clicked his finger..

Manik - Huh??

Kunj - Khaa khogye bhai aap.. yhaa itna kuch ho ra h mumma or dad milke meri class le re h aapko kuch dikh nhi ra kia

Manik - Uhh vo.. sahi to keh re h.. tu kisiki baat sunta h kia...

kunj - ohhh waooo ab sare milke meri taang khichte raho...

Anamika - Ekdam nautanki mat karo tum...

Kunj - Ya ya ryt... uralo mera mazaak.. agar itny problem h mere se to me kia karu batao aap? Duniya chor du??

Manik shocked and angrily - KUNJJ..

kunj shocked - Bhai.. aap ese kyu react kar re ho

Manik angrily - bolne se pehle kabhi bhi nhi sochta na tu...

kunj - Bhai aap serious kyu ho re ho... me to bas

Manik angrily - chup... agli baar agar tune esi koi bhi ulty sidhi baat apne zabaan se nikali na to me tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga...!!

Manik left...

kunj - aree bhai suno to..

uday angrily - Kar dia na use naraz.. tum bhi na kunj.. bacche k bacche he rahoge...

Kunj pouts and ran to convince manik.. Manik was about to go..

kunj - bhai bhai.. plzz m sorry ok ok fine esi galty dubara kabhi nhi hogi.. me to stupid hu na.. kuch bhi bol deta hu... aap plz naraz mat hojao...

Manik glared

kunj - kyuki jab aap naraz hote ho na to aapko manana bohot mushkil hojata h.. n fir abhi breakfast bhi nhi kiaa ese kese chale jaoge... dekho plz aap nhi karoge to me bhi ni karunga... or mujhe bht bhuk lgi h... bhai plzz thora rehem karo... bhuk k mare behosh he hojaunga me.. plz..

Manik chuckled seeing his cute puppy face . kunj sighs in releif..

Manik - kitny nautanki karta h yr tu..

kunj - yahi to mud thik krne k kaam aty h... dekho warna aap he batao is duniya me esa koi h jo aapka mud ese chutkiyo me thik kar de...

Manik - ya right .. but ek or h .. ab.. jo teri trh nautanki h... vo miss nandini..

kunj chuckled - ya ryt.. chlo koi to h meri jesi.. but ab bohot hogyi baate khana khane chlte h...

Kunj and Manik sat again and finally had their breakfast...

After breakfast..

Manik got a call from maya.. he shocked why is she calling her..

Manik -hello..

Maya - ghabrao mat har roz phone kark pareshan ni karungi me tumhe.. meine bas itna kehne k liye phn kia h.. ki tumne jo complain.. file kia h use wapas le lo taki police mujhe dhundna band kar de.. or agar tumne esa nhi kia u very well know wht can i do..

Manik shocked n scared but maya cutted the call..

Uday came at that time

uday - Manik..

Manik startled ..

uday - Kiaa baat h beta kafi tensed lag re ho.. or chehra kyu utra hua h tumhara.. tabyt to thik h na..

Manik - haa dad me thik hu esi koi baat ni h...

uday - Acha chalo.. i was saying ki tumhe yaad h meine tumhare or kunj k nam ka factory start karne wala tha but tum bhaiyo k anban ki wajah se vo ni hopaya as kunj ne nam plate tor dia tha... to i was thinking ab jab sab thik h to kyu na waps usi nam se bnau n inaugration bhi kar du...

Manik was tensed about.. maya's call... so he didnt bother

Manik - nhi dad koi zarurt nhi h.. wese bhi kunj ne to kha tha hum dono k nampar kuch na bane to rehne dijiye.. aap sirf kunj k nam par bna dijiye..

saying this he left hurrily because he was scared about something else

uday - Manik ab bhi usi baat ko leke betha h..

kunj heard everythng..

kunj came - Dad .. bhai ne apse mana kr dia kia

uday - haa beta vo to shayed tumhare gusse me kahi hui baato ko seriously he le lia.

kunj - but dad meine vo sab dil se ni kha tha trust me.. and mujge koi idea bhi nhi tha ki bhai insab ko aj bhi bhule ni...

uday - Manik thora sentimntal h tum to jnte he ho na

kunj sadly - dont worry dad.. bhai ki ye misconception me dur kardunga.. aap ek kam karo jesa me keh ra hu wesa karo... n bhai ko leke ane ki responsebility meri...

uday smiled n nodded...

In university..

Manik reached after closing the case... he was upset that he had to close the case..

Nandini came - hey manik...

Manik - hi..

nandini confused - hey.. whatsup? mud kyu off h tumhara?? n khaa tha tum.. i was waiting for you...

Manik - no.. itz nothing like that... anyways tum batao.. kuch kam h mujhse ..

Nandini - uhh actually.. come.. come with me..

She hold his hand dragged him in a corner..

manik confused - what happened nandini.. batao na...

Nandini smiles - vo.. tumne itna kuch kia h na nere liye .. and since u have done so much for me.. i thought i should give you something special..

Manik - special?

nandini - yaa offcours look humari dosty itny special h and ane wale kal k bare me who knows.. kon kab kha rahega u never know na... so i want to gift you something which will stay with you Forever..

Manik amazed - umm wht?? can i see it now..

Nandini took out a bracelet where it was Nicely written " Manan"

Manik confused - Manan? wht is this..

nandini - are buddhu nandini plus manik equals to Manan...

manik amazed

nandini - u keep it with yourself forever because MANAN IS FOREVER ..

Manik felt touched to havr this beautiful gift..

Manik - thanks itz really awesome and i will keep it with myself.. forever..

Nandini and Manik had a cute eyelock.. because thre feeling were growing for each other.. gradually but steadily..

Nandini -seriously Manik i dont know how to thank you enough agar tum nhi hote to me aj pta nhi konsi halat me hoty..

Manik - nandini plz ese mat bolo u r my friend.. and frndz ka farz hota h ek dusre k crisis me khare rehna.. jab meri crisis thi tab only u were the person who stood beside me guided me wht is wrong n write.. so now it was my turn..

Nandini smiled - And we shall continue this forever..

manik smiled n nodded..

nandini - Bas gussa thora kam kia karo.. sweet manik he raha karo.. monster manik nhi..

manik - wait what? what did u jzz called me..

nandini - umm.. no .. nhi kuch bhi to nhi..

Manik - monster?? i m a monster? u wait...

Nandini ran and Manik ran to catch her but they were having good time....

Otherside...

Kunj was walking and thinking what should he do next ..

kunj thinks - Ye bhai bhi na... meri us gusse me ki hui baat ko ese dil pe lgake bethe h.. mujhe to pta bhi nhi tha... n me bhi na kitna stupid hu... mujhe bhai ko esi baate bolni bhi nhi chahiye thi...

And he bumped into Twinkle... both get hurted

Twinkle - Aaah ouch.. it must be you kunj singhaniya...

kunj - yes offcours college k first day se yhi to hotaa aa ra h... bcz ankhe to h he ni tunhare pass 4-4 button h.. isnt it?

Twinkle angrily - to tum bhi to dekh k chl skte tha

kunj - Dekh k he chal ra tha mei.. tunhari tarah hawa me pair rakh k nhi chalta me ...

Twinkle angrily - Listen.. kunj singhaniyaa ... apni zabaan ko thora lagaam do warna me ise kaat dungi..

kunj - Yahi to ataa h tumhee... katnaa.. or kiaa kuch ataa h... suno mere pass bhi zyada wakt nhi h ok.. tumse behes karne ka i have lots of work to do...

Twinkle angrily - Or vo lots of work kia h? kisiko irritate krna.. pareshn krna... yhi sab na.. 2 graam ki aakkal to h nhi tumme

Kunj - wht the hell.. tumme akkal ka pahar bhara hua h kia.. m very sry to say... kyuki tum is duniya ki sabse stupid ladki ho . .. jise khush rehne k liye bhi bahane ki zarurat hoty h.. tumhare dil k andar kuch or h.. tum dikhaty kuch or ho... kise proof kar ri ho.. or kia??

Twinkle stiffs went quiet..

kunj - kiaa huaa hogyi bolty banddd ab to chup he rahogi na...

twinkle - tum.. tumhe esa kyu lgta h ki me wesi nhi hu..

kunj smiled - Kyuki is saru twinkl k piche chipi twinkle ko meine dekha h mehsus kiaa h... but afsos ki tum khud use mehsus ni karna chahty...

twinkle sighs - Dekho kunj.. plz.. me jo bhi hu jesi bhi hu.. yahi hu.. me badal ni sakty na he me badalna chahty hu...

kunj - ek sawal ka jawab de skty ho?? KIA TUM KHUSH HO?? i mean ese sabse dur dur rehke.. kia tum khush ho...

twinkle had no answer

kunj holds her - Nhi h na jawab koi.. kyuki tum khush nhi ho twinkle... tum sirf zindagi kaat ri ho.. ji nhi rahi... tumhare is twinkle k piche ek esi twinkle h jo Jina chahty h... udna chahty h.. u want to fly like a bird... barish me jhumna chahty h... to kyu rok k rakha h use...

Twinkle felt teary how come kunj knows everythng but she dnt remember that she was the one who expressed all this.. in her drunk state...

Kunj - kia hua twinkle.. blo...

twinklw looks away removed his hand - Plz kunj.. me hath jodty hu tumhare aage plzz mere andar kia h vo janne ki koshish karna band karo... plzz or yahi jnna chahte tha na tum ki me khush hu ya nhi.. me khush hu kunj.. bht khush..!!

tears roll out her eyes when she said kunj sensed her pain .. twinkle left..

Kunj - pta nahi esa kia dard h tumhare sine me but me vo pta karke rahunga....

otherside...

Manik catched Nandini and then both were pinned up near a wall... ..

Nandini n manik both were inches close to each other...

Nandini softly - Manik.. manik vo...

both were lil emberassed n left each other...

Manik - Haa to kia keh ri thi tum.. me monster hu?

Nandini - not everytime.. but sometime sometimes...

Nandini pushed Manik and ran away... manik smiles for few times atleast he was happy ...

soon he got a message which washed away his all happiness n made him sad n guilty because maya's case was withdrawn...

Manik eyes were teary his heart painned...

At that time kunj came...

Kunj - Bhai.. bhai kaha tha aap pura universty dhundlia mil he ni re tha...

Manik - uhh vo bas nhi kuch nhi..

kunj smiled - Acha chalo aapko kuch dikhana h..

Manik frowned - Kia kunj.. khaa leke jaa ra h tu mujhe

kunj - Aree aap chalo to...

kunj took manik in a car and left... to the construction Spot...

Manik confused - tu mujhe yhaa kyu layaa h...

kunj sadly - Sorry bhai that day i was so rude with you na .. dad humare nam ka company kholna chahte tha or me gusse me kia kia bol gyaa .. m really sry i didnt knew it hurted u so much ki aap abhi tk use bhula ni paye..

Manik -esi koi baat nhi h kunj... mujhe bura ni lga...

Kunj - bura to lga so that is why i wanna make it up to you...

Manik confused

Kunj smiled - Dad.. ap parde to hataiyyeee...

curtains got removed and there was written KUNIK CONSTRUCTIONS..

Manik confused - Kunik?

kunj chuckled - nahi samaj aya na.. kunik means kunj+Manik

Uday - ye kunj ka idea tha Manik..

kunj - so bhai kesa lga ye naam... M&k constructions se to better he h..

Manik went emotional and hugged him ... his eyes were teary...

Kunj - to apne mujhe maaf kia na?

Manik - tu pagal h kunj... mei kabhi tujhse naraz tha he ni..

Kunj smiled...

At night ..

Manik was again upset and sad about whatever he get to know he was crying.. because maya is out of the jail... manik is scared about loosing his loved ones .. thtz why he dnt wanna take any action against him... .

Manik got a vission of Madhu

" Madhu - Betaa .. tumne ye thik nhi kia.. maya meri katil h ye janne k baad bhi.. tumne.. use chor dia? "

manik shocked

madhu disappointed - tumse ye ummid nhi thi.. beta

manik cried - mom.. m sorry.. m sorry mom plz..

Madhu started taking steps back.. manik shocked... (actually there was no vission itz jzz manik's guilty consience which was not letting him stay in peace...)

Manik followed that vission - mom plzz mujhe chorke mat jao mom.. m sorryy...

Manik followed that vission like a zombie... he was not in his senses he was thinking like madhu is upset with him and now going away from him..

he walked and walked and didnt realised he reached near a cliff...

Manik was about to step at that time somebody pulled him down it was KUNJ...

Manik shocked - what the hell choro mujhe

kunj shouted - Pagal hogye ho kia aap??????  kar kia rahe tha... kabse aapko awaZz de raa hu aapko sunai ni de raa kiaa.. or kiaa krme jaa re tha aap..

Manik - jzz leave me vo jaa ri h.. vo dekho mom jaa ri h.. mujhse narazz hoke jaa ri h.. plzz mujhe unhe rokna h..

kunj - bhai wahaa koi nhi h.. hokia gya h aapko...

Manik angrily - are vo dekh na... vo rahi .. (he turned to see no one)

Kunj - kia bhai.. koi nhi h waha....

Manik shattered n sit down - vo chali gayi.. mujhse naraz hoke chali gyi.. m sry m sryy mom (he cried )

kunj shocked n hugged him.. - bhai? ye aap kiaa bol re ho... kon naraz hoke chali gyi...

Manik wss traumatised the pressure of subpressing such a big thing was making him go weak...

Kunj - bhai plz tell me kia hua h...

Manik - kunj vo.. mom... vo... (and he fainted in kunj's shoulder)

Kunj panicked and shouted - BHAII...

Manik went unconsious.. in his arms..

precap - Everyone was panicked for Manik.. and kunj wss tensed like hell but will he understand.. whts bothering so much?? or kunj had to face some other problems... 

☆☆☆ sorry for late i was busy today.. so next part after 50+ votes and 5+ comments ☆☆☆ 

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