Lovely Writing System

By Yansusustories

363K 23.6K 1.9K

Su Yan always wanted to be an author. Being moved by his determination (Well, in fact, she was just an avid r... More

1 Applying for a System
2 A Dirty Joke
3 An Enticing Offer
4 What a Lovely Novice!
5 Issuing the First Task
6 Strange Thoughts
7 Telling the Truth
8 A Perfect Couple
9 A Real System?
10 Unintentionally Starting the Rumor Mill
11 Being Misunderstood
12 I'm His Boyfriend!
13 How Long Do You Want Me To Wait?
14 Accepting the Offer
15 Resigning With Obstacles
16 There's No Medicine For Regret
17 Sharing a Meal
18 First Customer, 0% Affinity
19 Accidental Slip-Up
20 Potential Partner?
21 My System Is Gay?!
22 Understanding The System
23 Writing A Romantic Encounter
24 The System's Evaluation
25 The First Questline
26 A Place To Meet A Hero
27 Definitely Not A Hero
28 The Hero Saving The Beauty
29 Not That Altruistic
30 Coming Clean With The Caregiver
31 How Can That Person Not Realize?
32 Asking The Sage
33 His Person
34 Too Hot For The Hot Guy?
35 Big Boss And The Beauty
36 Canceling At The Last Minute?
37 Picking Up The Wife
38 Vying For Attention
39 He Delivered Himself
40 Boiling The Frog In Warm Water?
41 Sadly, There's No Rain
42 How Do You Know About That?
43 A Cat On A Bicycle
44 You Better Remember That
45 You'll Be In a Relationship Soon
46 This Is All A Ploy
47 Some Sweet Hours
48 You're A Ten
49 A Sweet Confession
50 Independent But Lonely?
51 It Should Be This Way
52 Who Dared To Torture Her Child?
53 You Still Call Those Coincidences?
54 Tricking Her Child
55 A Million Times Fiercer
56 Something Must Have Happened
57 As Rotten As You Want
58 I Love You
59 Take Me Home
60 Did You Seduce Me?
61 A Test Is In Order
62 Special Dimension
64 Apprentice Of Dating
65 Let's Do It Right Now
66 I'll Show It To You
67 So It's Real?
68 Tell Me How You Fell in Love
69 You're a Source of Inspiration
70 Maybe It Was Time for Him To Leave
71 A Late Realization
72 I Was Wrong
73 Making a Decision
74 Their Relationship Changed
75 Surprisingly Fun
76 Happy End ... with Cuts
77 A Diamond in the Rough
78 The Beginning of a New Life
79 Lazing Around in Bed
80 Coming Out
81 You Hid It
82 You Can't Throw Me Out!
83 Two Weeks It Is
84 You Can't Win Against a Beauty
85 Something Was Wrong With Their Heads
86 Indulging A Cute Little Fox
87 Dumbest Couple of 2018?
88 A Brilliant Idea
89 Implementing the First Suggestion
90 What Had Disturbed Their Boss This Much?
91 The Most Romantic Gesture
92 I'll Surprise You As Much As You Surprised Me
93 Sending an SOS Signal
94 Everyone Will Know You're a Couple
95 You Took My Breath Away
96 Bad Boyfriend! Punish Him!
97 Like a Rich CEO?
98 Operation Cubicle
99 That Kind of Situation
100 What Did You Say?
101 The Crows on Your Roof
102 Let's Be Nice
103 It's the Little Gestures That Count
104 A Tiger Won't Change its Stripes
105 What to Do with All This Happiness?
106 A Fitting Name
107 Registering An Account
108 Solving Another Problem
109 The Child Still Needs a Name
110 Finishing the Set Up
111 Publishing the First Part
112 Beware! A Horde of Fus!
113 New Feature: Publication Stats
114 It Only Got Weirder
115 No Reason to Wait
116 I Thought it Was Exciting
117 Way Too Troublesome
118 Searching for Rewards
119 Building a House
120 A Shock in the Morning
121 Gaining New Insight
122 A Reason to Break Up
123 Beautiful Misunderstandings
124 Clearing Up a Misunderstanding
125 What Do You Like About Me?
126 A Good-Looking Big Brother
127 I Must Be a Masochist
128 Not My Fault!
129 Setting a Rule
130 Experience is Crucial
131 Really Too Strange!
132 Such a Good Author!
133 There's No More Love
134 A Ridiculously Handsome Man
135 Give Them Something to Talk About
136 Why Would They Fall in Love?
137 Special Items Are Ordinary for a True Master
138 Making a Point
139 What an Adorable Scaredy Cat!
140 Not Having Enough Self-Control
141 You're the One Kissing Me
142 Wrong Number? Wrong Person!
143 Just Lie Down And Let Him Do It
144 Plotting Something?
145 Not Planned Well Enough
146 A Powerful Background
147 It's All Natural Talent
148 Interaction is Key
149 Sounds Logical
150 Are You a Troupe of Performers?
151 Practice Makes Perfect
152 Why Did the System Become So Useless?
153 The System's Suggestions
154 The Male Lead Makes His Appearance
155 A Tenacious Spirit
156 Get Back to Work!
157 Pretty Sister
158 Sweet Little ... Daddy?!
159 You Can Disinherit Me!
160 How Did They Find Out?!
161 A Lot of Dual Cultivation
162 Perfectly Representing the Story
163 Publishing Another Story
164 Who Would Dare to Have Impure Thoughts?
165 Can't Marry Anyone Else
166 Too Much to Handle?
167 Lean Back and Enjoy the Show
168 Committing a Crime
169 You're an Idiot
170 A Pretty Sister with Valuable Stones
171 Slightly Off-Topic
172 I Really Am the Best
173 As Terrifying as His Mother
174 An Even Better Story!
175 Comprehensive Style Check
176 Fishing for Experience Points
177 He Absolutely Had to Obtain Him
178 The Final Version
179 They Were Right After All
180 Why Did He Write in the First Place?
181 Acting All Pretentious
182 Start Simple
183 A Deadly Weapon
184 Striking Home
185 Nowhere to Vent His Anger
186 Out of Practice?
187 Mahjong!
188 Do It the Right Way this Time
189 It's Alright If You're Gay
190 I Only Love Him
191 Best Boyfriend of the World
192 Showing His Gratitude
193 Hurry up And Get Your Things!
194 One Step after the Other
195 The Novel with the Gay Birds
196 The Only Strange Thing
197 Getting the Readers on Board
198 The Dubious Bathhouse Arc
199 Explain the Matter with the Birds to Me!
200 A Corrupted System

63 Crafting The Perfect Male Lead

1.8K 145 2
By Yansusustories

Su Yan looked up to where the voice of the System seemed to be coming from. "Hey, how can I leave this place?"

[Has the host finished the test?]

"No, but ... I at least have to tell Nie Chang where I went, don't I?" He waited but this time the System didn't answer. It seemed like he wouldn't be able to leave the Special Dimension before he finished the test.

Su Yan sighed. Well, it probably wouldn't take much time and maybe this was one of those dimensions that weren't part of the normal timeline so that not even a second would have passed when he returned to the normal world. Wasn't that how it normally happened in novels?

Mn, he should just concentrate on the test.

Su Yan rubbed his chin and slowly circled his protagonist. This was really marvelous! Crafting characters like this was fun! Now, what had the System said how he was supposed to give his character a personality? Just think about it to try it out and then say it out loud to finalize it?

He went back in front of his character and stared at his face to not miss any change in his expression. 'Friendly,' he thought and the corners of the character's mouth lifted in a graceful arc.

Su Yan clasped his hands over his mouth. Whoa! That really was a pleasant smile! This was definitely a good character for a romantic story! Wouldn't every woman love a handsome, gentle and proper gentleman such as this?

...

Su Yan crouched down on the floor and cradled his head. Oh no! He had completely forgotten about it but there wouldn't be any woman with this shitty System! That so-called 'Lovely' thing was gay! It wanted him to pair up men!

Su Yan's lips twitched. Wait. Why was he complaining about that? He himself had a boyfriend since today. There was nothing strange about that.

He nodded to himself, stood up and turned to the other platform. If he understood it correctly, he would still be able to change both characters later on. For now, his protagonist was alright as he was.

Su Yan stared at the second platform. Alright. He had no idea how he should create a compatible character for his protagonist. Mn, most likely, it would be a good idea to use the tips he had gotten from the System with the basic character taskline.

What had it said which archetype a good male lead could be? Well, if he remembered correctly, then more or less every archetype could be used as the male lead. The System had mentioned him for the Hero, the Caregiver, the Sage, the Explorer, the King, and the Lover. Only the Creator had been suggested for the protagonist instead. But there had been some gradation: The ones most suited to the male lead seemed to be the Hero and the Lover while the others might just be alright or might be better suited to other positions.

"Alright, so I guess my male lead should be a hero and a lover. Now about his appearance ..." Su Yan honestly had no idea. If he actually went with that protagonist, then he'd need some kind of cultivator-type character, someone who was compatible with him and wouldn't be left behind like a normal human. "Mn, he should be a cultivator, too."

Su Yan imagined one of those ancient robes and the image of a person slowly started to form in front of him. The only problem was ... the person didn't have a face.

Su Yan pursed his lips. Alright. This was creepy. He needed to think of something as fast as possible. His male lead had to be handsome, though. Someone like Nie Chang ...

Su Yan smiled wryly. Alright, this Special Dimension worked too fast. Just when he had thought of Nie Chang, that male lead actually started to look like his best friend. Ah, no, like his boyfriend.

This probably wasn't good? First of all, which cultivator had short hair? It needed to be long! Guys with long hair were cool! He tried to ignore that this person looked like Nie Chang now and imagined him with long hair.

Alright, much better! Now he just needed to change the face a bit. It shouldn't be a problem if his character resembled someone he knew, right? Nie Chang was really handsome, after all.

Su Yan looked at that familiar face and pursed his lips. Hmph. How was Nie Chang so good-looking even with long hair and in ancient garments? This face of his was not scientific at all!

"Honestly, Ah Chang, have you ever thought about becoming a model? Or maybe an actor? I bet the women would all go crazy about you."

The cultivator-like Nie Chang actually smirked in response.

Su Yan leaped back and clutched his chest. Oh my god! Could the System not scare him so much?! He nearly would have thought the real Nie Chang stood in front of him!

"I guess I thought a bit too much before." Indeed, when imagining Nie Chang in front of him earlier, he had actually thought of that slight smirk. It seemed like the Special Dimension had picked up on that and made it part of the male lead's personality.

"Ah, but it's not too bad. If I can fall for you, then other people would also recognize how great you are. I guess you're really suited to become the model for a male lead." He grinned at the Nie Chang look-alike and finally went to work with remodeling him a bit.

Those sensual thin lips he had had the pleasure of feeling for himself became a little more curved, that long and straight nose ended up slightly crooked and since it was supposed to be a cultivation story those dark eyes lightened up and were adorned with golden specks. He also made them a bit thinner and narrower.

Honestly, Su Yan had always hated that cliche of the peerless martial arts genius. Why couldn't those guys look like normal people and had to be some celestial beauties instead? Sure, they would shed impurities thanks to their cultivation but that was the inside of their body, not the appearance they had been born with!

This version of his boyfriend was something he felt would make a great character in a cultivation story. He was handsome but not overly so. In fact, he had a slightly evil charm about him that might be able to lure people in.

Su Yan actually felt his heart thump while looking at this character.

He hurriedly turned away and pressed a hand to his chest once more. Nie Chang had looked at him like this, too! Ah, it seemed he had really crafted the perfect male lead. Thanks to his boyfriend.

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

242K 12.2K 56
Chapters: 87 Status: Completed Author(s) Jiu Pin Level Nine 九品 Lin Xiao was addicted to reading Qidian novels. He always fantasized that he would ha...
37.7K 711 20
𝙄𝙉 π™’π™ƒπ™„π˜Ύπ™ƒ They fall for each other after an unexpected trip to the mainland π™Šπ™ They find out how important the other is to them, without even...
2.8M 182K 87
What will happen when an innocent girl gets trapped in the clutches of a devil mafia? This is the story of Rishabh and Anokhi. Anokhi's life is as...
89.3K 4.3K 120
Author (s): A Lifetime Of Beautiful Clothes δΈ€δΈ–εŽθ£³ Year: 2016 Chapters: 115 + 5 Extras Translated by: Shrimp Chips Translation ___________ A major eve...