Okay so I just found out that Draco's eye color is grey, like wtf am I doing with my life?!?! Anyway I had read a story that described them as blue so I went with it, then I read plenty more that all said they were grey. I went to my trusty friend google and guess fucking what? They're GREY!!!
Now usually something as simple as that wouldn't bother me, but I don't want to offend any die-hard Harry Potter fans. So *yelling out to the abyss* I'M SORRY! Anyway, I'll be going through and changing the mistake. If there is anything else please let me know
Also, if you guys have any tips on how to better my writing or something I'd be happy to hear from you, I'm not expecting to have a lot of reads. After all it's my first ever story, but I'd like to know from the few people that have read it if this story is utter trash or not, but you know in a nicer more eloquent way. Okay thanks, byeeee!!:)