Dramatic Teens

By MistreatedQueens

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Ashlynn had one plan for senior year, and that was to make a move on her lifelong crush. When you have no ide... More

Back At It Again
New
Santiago
A Different Side
Mona Lisa
Strange...
The Sight Is Not A Masterpeice
Paralyzed
The Kiss
Waiting for you
Anti-Depressent
Unanswered Questions
Safe

Memory Loss

14 0 2
By MistreatedQueens


      Ashlynn's POV

            When you open up a door and see the person you'd least expect is a surprise. I opened the door wider and smiled.
            "I'm sor-" I started to get a headache and there was pressure at the back of my head...I backed away and blinked. Things started to go dark and my hearing faded. I don't remember the rest after that. All I know is I never got to finish my sentence.
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       Trenton's POV

          My eyes must be deciveing
me. This can't be real. It is not real...but alas it is real. My legs acted faster than my brain and they ran through the door to Ash.
She hit her head again and this will probably lead to yet another concusion. She is just laying there unconscious. What did she seriously do to deserve this? Now...
           WHAT IS THE FREAKING NUMBER FOR 911?
           Oh yeah...umm never act under pressure...just keep your cool.
  ..............
    "911, what's your emergency?" this squeaky dude answers
    "Y-yeah...my, my fr-friend! She fell and hit her head."
    "What's your name, sir?"
    "Trenton Santiago,and the address is 546, McDonnell Avenue!"
   "Sir, calm down...what is your friends name?"
  "Ashlynn Anderson!"
  "Sir Calm Down!"
  "I am calm you Num Nuts!"
  "The ambulance should be there in about a half an hour to an hour..." the guy sighs
  "What?"
  "Sir do you want me to stay on the line?"
  "No bu-" I was cut off by this pariste with nothing useful
  "Okay have a nice day!"
     ............
    After a long call of nothing I decided just to take her to the hospital myself. It would be quicker than to wait for an ambulance that would take for forever. What if she would die in the time they got here?
...Not that I would want her to die!
........

           We arrived to the hospital not long after. I think it was because I risked getting pulled over...they would understand...right? I mean she could end up in a coma for Pete Sakes. If Ash ends up in a coma I don't know what I would do. First my mom...and now if Ash ends up in one...I don't know. Right now Ash is my world. She is all I have left.
I started pacing to keep myself from tearing up. I know deep down there is nothing wrong with guys crying but I don't see the point. People should stay optimistic right?
        
          Stay optimistic...
        
          "Oomfff!" I heard while I let out a "Ouch!" I looked up to see a kid with chestnut colored hair. He looks familiar though...Then the sounds of a kid laughing erupted. It was from another familiar looking kid. My eyes wandered back to the kid rubbing his head on the floor. We looked at each other than laughed. Man it felt nice to laugh in a time like this.
          "Here." I heard the kid say when he got up. He extended a hand and he helped me up.
         "Malachi..." the guy said in a Irish accent. Man that's so cool...and man that sounded gay...
        

            Pic of  Malachi                                     ******************************
    

        "Trenton!" I said after a while. "And...uhh, sorry."
        "Its no problem." he looked back at the other guy and nodded his head towards me. The guy just stood there with a blank look.
       "Oh!" the guy extended his hand
       "Clayton!" my eyes widened and I stood there in shock while he chuckled. These people were famous in the fighting world...they are one of the few people with guts to show their face. I have learnt from their mistakes and learnt from their moves...keep your cool Trent! Don't blow your cover. There should be three more of these guys. They are all brothers...and their father owns the underground fighting place. There are Clayton the oldest then Malachi, Cullen, Lochlan, and Senan being the youngest but not much younger than Lochlan. I stood there before saying. Looka t me knowing all about them...AND...fangirling.
          "Oh my Gosh..." I said in surprise. Then, it hit me where I was. I was at a place where Ash is in a room with a concussion. I can't be happy! But here I was being happy...I shouldn't be happy. But again here I am happy. What is wrong with me. The guys gave me a quizacle look then three more guys came walking down the hall.
          "Yup, Cullen broke my nose." the blue haired one said calmly. I'm guessing that is Senan. He looks nothing like his brothers or twin at all. He has blue eyes where as the rest have green...and well you know the rest.

         Come on Trent! Quit rambling to yourself about your idols. Ash is in this hospital. The floor your standing on has ash in a room. Quit being happy.
         That's how my brain works. In a situation like this of coarse my brain would do this. I know for a fact I should be worried but before my Dad passed...he always said-
         "Stay optimistic." I looked up and saw Clayton had just said exactly what I was thinking.
         "Come on bud, whatever you're worried about is gonna be okay." I smiled at Clayton's words
         "You're right man..." I shook my head and facepalmed into both if my hands before looking back up.
        "Oh my gosh...you're-" Cullen flicked Senan on the nose right where there's bandages on it.
        "Owww!" he exclaimed.
        Malachi just stood there quietly while studying me
        "You're with that girl they brought in...aren't you?" Malachi asked. In my head I was amazed on how he figured it out.
        "Yeah...I'm just worried you know?"
         "She'll be okay...but best of luck to you!" Clayton smiled
         "We are gonna have to go though..." Lochlan shot in
        "Bye Mona Lisa." they all said in unison. They said it cool and collected as they walked away.
I just shook my head and laughed to myself. I have a feeling I will see a lot more of them.
          Ash has been in that room with no visitors for forever. What if I just sneak in there...
          I made sure the coast was clear as I tip toed into her room. She was laying on the hospital bed unconscious. She looked so peaceful. The only sound in the room was the beeping of her monitor. I took the fold up chair off the wall and put it next to her bed. I grabbed her hand a softly rubbed the back if it. She cocked her head as her beautiful violet eyes fluttered open.
         "Hey beautiful." I said in a soft tone of voice.
         "Hey?" she questioned herself. Uhh...I don't think that is a good sign...
         "Hey." I repeated stupidly to myself feeling stupid.
         "Who-who are you?" no song pun intended. But hearing those three words 'who are you' just broke my heart. I got up as tears filled my eyes. I quickly wiped them away with my long sleeved shirt. I can't deal with this right now. I got up and left. I left the building and didn't look back. I know I should be there in her time of need but I don't think that she'd want a stranger with her. But one plan came to mind
      'Operation Regain memory'
I know its a stupid name...but it will have to do for now.
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Hey people who actually read this weird put together story! I hope you enjoy this chapter. And let me sum this up

Clayton FitzPatrick-21
Malachi FitzPatrick-18
Cullen FitzPatrick-17
Lochlan FitzPatrick- 16
Senan FitzPatrick-16

I know I said Lochlan was older and he is but only by like an hour...

Okay now...I have another story idea in mind with these crazy Irish brothers. I just don't have a name. The story will be about them and underground fighting, and secrets,and so on. So if anyone wants to help with the name of the next story just say in the comments. Maybe one lucky person will win.

Okay now...Ash lost some memory. What is Trent gonna do?

The picture at the top is me and hayls...now here are the rest of the boys

    Clayton⬆

       Cullen⬆

  Lochlan⬆

~Randi

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