Note from author: Hi, I'm a terrible speller but i love writing storeys and stuff. Anyways, The past year i took a creative writing class and i had to make a novel in a month. I manged it pretty well, but i got a C on it. Here comes my point, I need help and I want to know what others would have done! I kinda want to be a writer but like I said I'm no good at it! So will you help me out?
Well then I guess I will get on the story!
She began to fall to the cold dark concrete