book: yours truly
author:Oznapitsbizzle
(one direction fan fiction)
This is quite a unique book, i dont remeber reading any fan fiction books like this and i read A LOT of fan fiction books. Its really refreashing and new. Grammer is good and the cover is cute but dont bold important parts of the book, write it in italics instead cause it seems more proffessional. Most important thing is make it realistic. You want readers to relate to your book and charaters the most. Dont make it unrealistic cause it ruins the book even if the plot is great. adding a bit of twists and turns wont hurt, it may spice up the book and dont confuse the reader. I kind of got confused in the middle. Overall this book has potential, but that all up to you. Hope this helped :)
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