AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
avnis decision
note
consoling him
confession
dinner!!!
avnis denial
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
horror movie
dressing
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AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
family !!!
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

Untitled Part 66

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By alka000

at avneils room 

avni wakes up and finds neil busy with his phone , she goes near

avni : neil 

neil : hmm 

avni : neil shall we go to a movie 

neil : hmmm 

avni : oh wow thanks neil , ok then i will get ready , u too get ready i will go and inform ali and riya too 

saying this she goes out to inform ali and riya and asks them to get ready 

she comes into the room and still finds neil with his phone 

avni : neilll 

neil : hmmm 

avni : go and get ready we dont have enough time , i will get changed in bathroom u change here itself 

saying this she goes to change and after she comes out she finds neil in same place and in same position 

avni goes near him and snatches his phone 

neil : what the ----, avni r u mad ?

avni : no neil u r mad , go and get ready we have to go 

neil : where?

avni : what ? that means u did not listen to what i have said till now ?

neil : sry yaar i was busy sending msgs to staff , so i did not concentrate on what u were saying 

avni : neill u know what i will not talk with u 

neil : ok but plse give me my phone 

avni opens her mouth in shock and neil smirks 

avni : chee neil i will really not talk to u and u enjoy with ur phone , i will enjoy with my friends , bye 

saying this she gives his mobile back and rushes out of the room 

neil : oh my god i think i teased her a little far , hmm neil khanna now go and pacify her 

when he goes in search of her , he finds her in the kitchen instructing something to charan , he goes to her but stops when he listens her saying add the powder in neils food daily , charan nods his head 

 avni : and yes plse dont let neil know this , its a secret between u and me

charan : ok mam 

neil pov : what is that powder is for? and y she doesnt want me to know about this ? 

avni : charan do one thing give the powder back to me , i will cook for neil and u cook for all of us 

charan : ok mam 

neil starts going to her but ali calls him from the hall , so he decides to ask her later 

neil: yes ali ?

ali : neil what is this u did not changed yet , go and change 

neil : yes bro give me 5 minutes 

saying this he goes to his room and gets ready in 5 minutes 

when he comes out he sees avni laughing and talking to riya and he fell for her again 

neil pov : god!! this girl, she is so beautiful 

avni finds him staring at her and looks away from neil 

neil pov : oh shit i totally forgot that she is angry with me and i have to pacify her

he goes near avni to talk to her but she keeps on avoiding him , even in the car she sits back with riya 

as soon as they get down of car ali , riya and avni goes to buy tickets where as neil goes to park his car 

after buying tickets neil comes near them and looks at avni but avni rolls her eyes looking away from neil 

avni : hey riya i will just go to washroom and come 

riya : ok come fast 

avni nods and goes to washroom and she comes out of it after 5 minutes and while coming someone closes her mouth and grabs her to a secluded place pinning her to the pillar 

avni : neil move away r u mad ?

neil : no first u talk to me 

avni : neil i said move away and y should i talk u r the one who told me not to ?

neil : sry yaar i just wanted to tease u but u took it seriously 

avni : no neil ur sry is not accepted and now leave me plse 

neil : no , not before u forgive me 

avni : y neil y should i accept ur sry u did not even listen to me , u dont at all give me attention and u 

before she could speak anything he smashes his lips on hers  , she gets shocked due to his sudden action , he bites her lower lip frustratingly because she doesnt respond 

neil breaks the kiss and looks at her where as she looks down , he makes her look at him 

neil : u know avni when u r in front of me i cannot give attention to any other thing in the world other than u , i just did it to tease u thats it and u know how i controlled myself for this much time after seeing u in this dress 

avni blushes and neil kiss her cheek lovingly 

neil : omg avni dont blush otherwise i would take u here itself 

avni smacks his arm

avni : chee neil , how shameless u r ? 

neil : only for u my dear wifey 

avni blushes hard and becomes red 

avni : ok neil now come let us go ali and riya might be waiting for us 

neil : no first u forgive me then we will go 

avni : stupid i was just acting that i was angry at u but i cannot be angry on u even if i want to be , now come they will be waiting for us 

neil : avni dont worry about them i sent the inside , now u prove me that u were not angry with me 

avni :  neil r u mad ? i said no it was acting 

neil : no u have to prove by actions 

avni makes a confused face 

neil smiles at her confused face and before she can ask he brushes his lips against her , she too responds back with equal passion 

after breaking the kiss 

neil : this is what i asked u avni (panting), action speaks louder than words my dear wifey , now i know that u were acting 

avni blushes hard and hits his arm playfully 

avni : hmm plse neil come let us go and watch the movie 

neil : but i dont want to wifey , i just want u to be in my arms right now in our bedroom 

avni again blushes and runs from there , neil too smiles and follows her 



so guys surprised with my update right ? i know i told u that i will update after 3 or 4 days but i thought to update today again so that i can compensate for late and short update , and yes my other update will be after 3 days or might be 4 days 

thanks a lot for all ur love and support 


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