Abhi Na Jao Chod Kar!!✔️

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What happens when Gauri who is a rude businesswoman met Om who is a fun loving person?? To know more read my... Más

Character sketch
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😍😍 Oh My Mata!!!!😍😍
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New Cover.
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PROMO 1
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A big thanks...
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The Trip!!
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GOOD NEWS v/s BAD NEWS
I will try...
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I STILL LOVE YOU!
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Stay with me-Forever!
New One!
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Part-50 (EPILOGUE)
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A faster update for those who voted and commented. I'm feeling bad that I compelled you all to vote and comment forcefully but look that also compelled me to update a little faster. I think this trick is working! *wink*

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Om: vo!!!vo kaun???

Gauri: are han,,,tum nahi jante na Rudra k bhai ko,vo bhi to aayega...and he is so cute! 

Om(being jealous at the word cute): ohh Rudy ka bhai...obviously vo to aayega hi na, uske bhai ki shadi jo hai...

Gauri: are tumhe pata hai vo Saumya aur Rudra ki shadi mein sirf ek week k liye aaya tha but humne kya masti ki thi...mujhe abhi tak yaad hai! vo jute churane ki rasam hoti hai na...hum dono ne Rudy ka juta tod diya tha lekin kisi ek ko nahi lene diya tha(she laughed while he make faces)...itna maja aaya tha Saumya ki shadi mein...

Then suddenly her smile disappear from her face. Om understood that it is because she is missing Saumya. He immediately changed the topic.

Om(making faces): mujhe nahi lagta uss ladke mein kuch khas hoga...tum bekar hi uski tarif kar rahi ho...

Gauri: what? tum dekh lena,, jab vo aayega tab tumhe pata chalega ki mein jo bol rahi hoon vo sach hai,,dekh lena tum...

Om: han..han dekh lunga...

Gauri: huh.....(after sometime)acha ye batao party ki theme kya rakhni hai? 

Om: theme? is it a theme party?  

Gauri: obviously...

Om: kyun elders nahi aayenge? I mean Bhavya k mom dad to aayenge na? I don't think theme party will be good idea...pichli baar pata hai Bhavya ko vo princess vala dress pehnna pada tha(they both chuckled)...I don't think use theme party pasand aayegi. han agar theme rakhni hi hai to sabko police k vardhi pehan kar aana chahiye...

Gauri: ya...I think that's good idea...in fact it's great idea.

Om: what? police ki dress mein party...

Gauri: that will be fun!

Om: par ek baar Bhavya se puch lena...

Gauri : tum uski fikar mat karo....acha ab mein jati hoon, tum rest karo! 

She stand up from her place to go to her room...when suddenly he held her hand. She looked back at him and then at their hands. He followed her gaze and then left her hand.

Om: vo mein ye puch raha tha ki tum kya kar rahi ho abhi? 

Gauri: abhi to...book padhungi ya phir TV,,kuch kam tha tumhe?

Om: I have titanic in my lappy,, you want to watch? abhi to 9 bhi nahi baje...chalo na dekhte hai...

Gauri: what? haven't you watched titanic yet? 

Om: I have...par dusri baar bhi to dekh sakte hai na,,(becoming angry)tumhe dekhni hai to chalo varna jao apne kamre mein!

Gauri started to go from there while he became sad. She noticed that from corner of her eyes and chuckled.

Gauri(before going out of the room): mein kapde change kar k aati hoon, tum start karo movie, mein aati hoon 2 minute mein!

Om(happily): jaldi aana!

She came after changing clothes and they settled on sofa with laptop on the table. They started watching the movie. 

At the Rudra's house they both were taking their dinner. Bhavya was happy but sad at the same time. She has still the feeling of cheating Saumya. While Rudra was looking at her continuously observing her while she was eating. Till now they were eating silently but after sometime Rudra broke the ice.

Rudra: agar tumhe kisi room ko renovate karvana hai to tum karva sakti ho apne hisab se,,after all aaj k baad ye tumhara ghar bhi hai!

Bhavya: nahi,,everything is perfect. bas sare room saaf ho yahi kafi hai mere liye...

Rudra(chuckled): vo ab tum aa jaogi to hum maid bhi rakh lenge...

Bhavya: aur mein khana nahi banane vali samaj gaye tum...to jo bai aati hai na khana banane k liye use mana mat karna!

Rudra: at least tum khana to bana lena...tum acha banati ho khana! (then realizing something)iska matlb tum kuch nahi karogi?

Bhavya: nahi...I'm a police inspector...mein nahi sab tum karoge, agar tumhe kamvali bai nahi rakhni hai to tumhe hi ghar k sare kam karne honge, aur jab mein ghar vapas aaun to khana bhi mujhe taiyaar chahiye, yaha tak ki pani bhi!!

He went into deep thoughts. What if she uses her gun to make him do all the household chores?? And what if she use her powers and make him wash clothes and utensils?? 

 Rudra(loudly): nahiiiiiiii....

Bhavya(startled for a second): kya hua?

Rudra(joined his hands): please aisa mat karna...mein tumhare aage haath jodta hoon...

Bhavya(confused): kya mat karna? maine kya kiya?

Rudra: tum mujhe gunpoint pe rakh kar ghar k sare kam mat karvana...please...mein tumhare liye cook aur kamvali dono rakh lunga...par mujse vo sab mat karvana!! 

Bhavay(realized what he was thinking and started laughing like a manic): Oh my god Rudra...you are so cute...

Rudra: hasna bandh karo tum...yaha meri jaan nikli ja rahi hai aur tumhe hansi aa rahi hai...

Bhavya(still laughing holding her stomach): oh god...Rudra...tumhe aisa lagta hai ki...ki mein ye sab karungi tumhare saath?? 

Rudra(turned his face other side): mujhe tum se baat hi nahi karni...

Bhavay: acha sorry na...mein majak kar rahi thi...mein khana banaungi, I was just kidding...I swear...

Rudra: main kaise yakeen kar loon??

Bhavya: tumhe aisa lagta hai ki main zuth bol rahi hoon? main abhi bhi bol rahi hoon, mujse shadi karne se pehle do baar soach lena,(she pointed her index finger at him) samaj gaye tum Mr. Rudra Singh Raizada!!!

She stand up from her chair to put the dish but before she could move from there he pulled her back and she landed on his lap. They both looked at each other. Their faces were inches apart...and because of that they could feel each others breath. Bhavya looked down while blushing.

Rudra(whispered in her ears): tum jo bhi kam karvaogi...bhale hi jabardasti kyun na ho,,,(her heart was beating fast with so much proximity) mein karne k liye taiyaar hoon...

She was still looking down and he left his grip from her. She immediately ran in the kitchen as soon as he freed her. She put the dishes in sink and started recalling what he said and blushed profusely. After sometime she calm herself and came out of the kitchen. As soon as she came out Rudra commented.

Rudra: vaise mujhe pata nahi tha ki ek police inspector bhi itna sharma sakti hai!

Bhavya controlled her blush and started going to one of the room. Rudra noticed that and immediately came in her way. As soon as she was going to open the knob he stopped her from opening it. She looked at him with confusion.

Rudra: k..kya kar ra...rahi ho tum?

Bhavay: kya? I want to use washroom...

Rudra: to tum mere room mein chali jao...

Bhavya: nahi mein thik hoon...(she again started opening the door and he again stopped her)

Rudra: are aise kaise? a..ab to vo...vo tumhara room bhi hai...jao...

Bhavay: are par mujhe yaha jana hai...

Rudra: tu...tum ek kaam...karo...tum na ki...kitchen k pass vala...washroom use kar lo... 

Bhavay(looking at him suspiciously): andar kya hai?

Rudra: andar? andar kya hai? (trying to act normal)andar kuch bhi to nahi hai...maine kab kaha...ki...ki andar kuch hai...han andar bed hai...cupboard hai...phir dressing table....

Bhavya(cutting him in between): mein andar ja rahi hoon...

Rudra: nahi...nahi tum andar nahi ja sakti...matlb tumhe washroom hi use karna hai na...to tum mere room mein jao...(he dragged her to his room but she freed herself)

Bhavya: ab to mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai ki uss room mein kuch na kuch to jaroor hai, aur ab to mein dekh kar hi rahungi!

She opened the room while he closed his eyes being caught red handed. 

Bhavya(a scream escaped her mouth and she put her hands on her mouth): oh my god!!

Rudra opened his one eye and then another. There it was!!! The whole room was messed up. The bed was not at all visible. The room was full of files,papers, his clothes, some wrappers of eatables, blankets,bed sheets, pillows everything. In short and sweet words he had collected everything from the hall and his bedroom and stuffed it in that room. He became worried at her expression but to his surprise she started laughing. After a minute he also joined her. They both were laughing on his stupidity.

Rudra(controlling her laugh): you are not angry on me,,right?

Bhavya(stopped laughing): nahi...(pulling his cheeks)in fact you are really so cute...(a minute later)we have to fix this...

Rudra: nahi abhi nahi yaar...I'm so tired,, tum chinta mat karo mein ye sab thik kar lunga...

Bhavay: par kaise?

Rudra: are mein kar lunga, don't you wory...

Bhavya: acha...ek kaam karna, weekend ka intejar karna...I'll help you and properly arrange everything also, and don't trust the maid, thik hai?

Rudra(smiling): okay!

The next day: 

Gauri informed Rudra about the party, she arranged for Bhavya and him. He also became happy and agreed for it. At night all three went to Bhavya's home for informing her parents! 

Bhavay: par Gauri party ki koi jarurat nahi hai...agar tumhe celebrate hi krna hai to hum dinner k liye chale jate hai,,,sabko invite karne ki kya jarurat hai?

Her mother and father were very happy for Bhavya as she found happiness after waiting for so long so they also insisted to arrange a party.

Parag: Guari beta party bhale hi tum de rahi ho par sara kharcha mein karunga...

Om: nahi uncle....it' from all of us...Bhavya's friends. Hum bas aapko inform karne aaye the aur aap log apne relatives ko bhi invite kar lena...I'll give you the cards tomorrow...

Bhavya: par mujhe koi party nahi rakhni!

Sunita(ignoring her): are mein to sabko bulaungi,,aakhir kar Bhavya ki shadi ki itni badi news jo hai aur uska promotion bhi to hua hai...

Rudra: aur hume usse pehle marriage ki dates bhi to fix karni hai aur vo bhi next month ki...mom, dad aur bhai sirf ek week k liye aa rahe hai...

Sunita: maine Pinky se baat kar li hai...unhone kaha hai ki shadi ki sari taiyariyan hum dekh le...

Gauri: shadi ki taiyariyan aap dekh lena aur hum party ki...vaise ye theme party hai...aur hamne dress code bhi select kar liya hai...

Om: we'll dress up in police dress...that brown color dress...

Gauri: it's khaki...

Bhavya: are koi mujse to pucho...

Rudra: nahi yaar Gauri, Bhavya to vo dress roj pehnti hai, ye party uske liye hai to theme nahi rakhte hai...normal party dress will be fine...kyun Bhavya?

Bhavya: han...wait, mujhe party hi nahi rakhni hai...in fact mein aaungi hi nahi!

Rudra(ignoring the second line): dekho usne bhi han bol diya...acha to sab tay ho gaya! It's done...

Rikara: done!

Bhavya: mein nahi aungi...

Party Day:

The party was held in one of the resort which was fully booked by Gauri. Om and Gauri were already present there as they were welcoming the guests with Bhavya's parents. As Rudra told it was a casual theme party they wore simple party dress.

Gauri:

Om:

They were waiting for Bhavya from long time but he and Rudra didn't came yet.

Om: tumhe kya lagta hai vo aayegi?

Gauri: Rudra ne kaha hai na vo use lekr aayega to vo jarur aayegi!

After 5 minutes they both entered in the venue with hand in hand. Om and Gauri smiled at each other after looking at them. They came to Om and Gauri.

Gauri: welcome guys...

Rudra: thank you...

Bhavya: mom dad kaha hai?

Om: vo tumhare uncle aunty k saath andar hai...by the way you both are looking beautiful together...

Bhavya:

Rudra:

Gauri: par ye aane k liye maan kaise gayi?

Rudra and Bhavya looked at each other. 

Flashback:

At Bhavya's home:

Rudra was consoling Bhavya to come at the party because she didn't wanted to that party happen. 

Rudra: par kyun? 

Bhavya: tum samaj nahi rahe ho...mein kaise samjaun? 

Rudra: dekho mein pichle aadhe ghante se puch raha hoon,,mein samjunga tab na jab tum kuch bologi...tumne koi reason hi nahi diya hai to mujhe kaise pata chalega ki tumhe party mein kyun nahi aana...

Bhavya(taking a deep breath): mein nahi chahti ki koi tum par ungli uthaye...

Rudra(confused): mujh par? par kyun? bolo Bhavya...

Bhavya: agar sabko pata chalega ki hum shadi karne vale hai to, vo tumhe bura bhala kahenge...ki tum (she was he hesitating) tum...Saumya...Saumya ki

Rudra: Saumya ki kya?

Bhavya: Saumya ki maut k ek hi saal mein tum dusri shadi kar rahe ho....

Rudra became silent for sometime...After sometime he spoke,,

Rudra(calmly): dekho Bhavya jisko jo bolna hai vo bolne do...hame pata hai ki hum kuch galat nahi kar rahe aur hamare irade nack hai,,aur log to hamari pith piche bhi baat karenge, uske liye tumhe ya mujhe apni khushiyan kurban karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...(he gave her a parcel) ye dress mein tumhare liye laya hoon...sab kuch bhuul jao, apna mood thik karo aur jaldi se ready ho jao...mein yahi wait kar raha hoon...

She took the dress reluctantly. After sometime Bhavya came out of the washroom wearing dress given by Rudra. She was looking beautiful and he lost in her beauty. She started combing her hairs while Rudra was still looking at her. After a minute he came to her and she looked through mirror in his eyes. 

Rudra(looking in her eyes): you are looking beautiful...

Bhavya(her face turned red): aur tum bhi, bahhot ache lag rahe ho...

Rudra: thank you...

Bhavya: acha chalo...Guari intejar kar rahi hogi...

Rudra(forwarded his hand): chalo...(she put her hand in his)

Flashback ends:

Gauri and Om: Awwwww!!

Om(to Gauri)(mimicking Rudra): Bhavya, you are looking beautiful...

Gauri(acting of blushing): aur tum bhi bahot ache lag rahe ho Rudra...

Rudra and Bhavya(embarrassed): stop it guys...

Gauri: Bhavya,,Rudra ne thik kaha...jitne log honge utni baatein hongi...

Om: aur agar sab k bare mein soachoge to tum kabhi aage hi nahi badh paoge...agar koi bhi tumse kuch kahe na to...to tuhari gun kis kam k liye hai...(she chuckled)

Rudra: acha ab yahi khada rehna hai ya andar bhi chalenge...

Gauri: han chalo...sab wait kar rahe hai tum dono ka...

They all went inside.

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Precap:

Om was coughing badly.

Gauri(panicking): Rudra please doctor ko phone karo...

Om(still coughing): nahi doctor ko bulane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai...mein thik hoon,,mein aata hoon...

He went into the washroom.

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Hii guys,,,how was the chapter? I hope you all liked it. Please vote and comment if you liked it.  It means a lot. This time I'm not going to ask for votes...vote only if you liked it,,I'm not forcing. 

One more thing,,I'll update one part before or on 29th...so you all tell me which update do you want? Epilogue of 'the trip' or next part of this ff...let me know I'll update that!!

Thank you!!

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