OUR CUTE FAMILY (✔)

By kuku369

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This story is about four brothers and four sisters. How the Maheshwari brothers ends up falling in love with... More

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By kuku369

Hlo everyone 🙋
I know I'm late this time. I'm sorry for that but I already told you that once my college will start I'll not be able to update that much regular😅. I'll try to make it twice in a week or maybe more than it if possible. Updating daily is not possible. Hope u all will understand.
Thank you so much for ur votes and comments. Ur comments always makes me smile. Keep supporting. Luv u all 😘❤.
Happy reading.

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All were standing quiet😂.

Naina: di jiju let's go and exchange the rings.

All nods and starts leaving towards the stage but Laksh didn't move.

Laksh (thinks): why I'm feeling nervous? Taking a decision and choosing a path is easy but walking on it is very difficult.

Ryan: bhayu, where are you lost? Let's go.

Laksh: nothing, let's go.

And all goes to the stage.

Ragini too was nervous but her excitement overpowered her nervousness.

Sanskar gives the ring to Laksh.

Arjun: come on bhai put the ring in bhabhi's finger.

Laksh nods, smiling tightly.

He moves his hand towards Ragini's slowly. His hands were shaking a little but no one noticed that. He takes Ragini's hand in his and puts the ring in her finger.

All claps happily and Laksh immediately takes his hand away. He was looking like he just did the toughest task in the world.

One of the guests calls Naina and she leaves towards her.

Swara also gives the ring to Ragini.

Misha: go ahead di.

Ragini nervously holds Laksh's hand in her's.

And slowly slides the ring in his finger.

Suddenly Ragini's facial expressions changed. Laksh looks at her and then at his hand.

Others looks at both of them confused.

Arjun: bhabhi what happened?

Ragini: it's not going inside more than this.

All looks at her shocked.

Sanskar: bhabhi you try it once again. It will go.

Ragini uses a little force, Laksh winces.

Laksh: aahhh... What are you doing?

Ryan: bhabhi a little more force.

Laksh glares him.

Laksh: the size is small. It's not of my finger's size.

All looks towards each other.

Ragini (a little angry): the fault is yours only.

Laksh: what I did?

Ragini: you're the one who didn't come with us to select the ring.

Laksh rolls his eyes.

Swara: now what to do?

All were not understanding what to do.

Ragini (in mind): sagai to hum kisi bhi halat mein karke chodenge. (engagement will be done at any cost)

Ragini: it's your fault now you have to pay for it.

Laksh looks at her confused.

She holds Laksh's hand and uses her full strength to push the ring inside his finger.

Laksh winces in pain.

Laksh (shouts angrily): you mad woman. What are you doing? Leave my hand. You'll break my finger damn it.

But Ragini seems unaffected. Her full concentration was on putting the ring in while others were cheering her up.

All: come on di/bhabhi. You can do it.

Laksh glares all of them dangerously.

Laksh (trying to free his hand): you idiot, leave my hand.

He shouts with more anger filled voice.

Everyone along with Ragini scares. She leaves his hand.

Laksh looks at his hand and finger which was extremely red now. He then glares Ragini who was looking everywhere but not at him.

Just then Naina comes there.

Naina: what happened?

Swara tells her everything.

Naina: but it's not possible.

Arjun: what is not possible?

Naina: the ring can't be small.

All: why?

Naina: because it's a size adjustable ring. It can be adjusted accordingly.

All looks at her shocked while Laksh was looking at everyone with red eyes. All gulps. Ragini was showing him all her teeth.

Laksh takes a breath of relief.

Laksh: thank god Naina you came. Otherwise your sister would have left only three fingers in my hand.

Ragini gives a confused look. She starts counting her fingers.

Ragini (proudly): no Mr Maheshwari, four would be left.

Laksh (mockingly): one is thumb not finger.

Ragini smiles sheepishly while others laughs hard at this.

Sanskar: now come on bhabhi put the ring in bhai's finger.

Ragini nods and again takes Laksh's hand in her's, scared of him.

She adjusts the ring accordingly and slides it.

All takes a sigh of relief and claps happily.

All: thank god

Misha: let's go and have dinner. I'm feeling very hungry after dancing.

All laughs hearing it. They leaves for the dinner area.

Ragini: I'll come in a few minutes.

She leaves saying this.

All settled down at the table for dinner when Ragini comes and sits on the chair beside Laksh's.

Ragini: give me your hand.

Laksh: why?

Ragini: just give it to me.

But Laksh didn't budge.

She forcefully takes his hand.

Others were looking at them silently. They were looking towards each other time to time, smiling seeing the unique jodi of their respective siblings.

Ragini caringly starts putting an ointment on Laksh's finger.

Ragini: it will reduce pain and redness.

Laksh takes his hand away.

Ragini: I'm sorry.

But he didn't say anything.

All had their dinner, chit chatting.

Slowly all the guests left only Maheshwari's and Gadodia's were there.

Laksh: I think we should leave now.

Ryan: ya, tomorrow we have to go to college as we are not much regular from the last several days.

Naina: hmm, we too.

Sanskar: let's go now.

They bids bye to the girls and leaves.

Tri sisters hugs Ragini.

Trio: happy engagement di.

Ragini (smiles): thank you

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MM:

The brothers enters tired and falls on the sofa in the hall.

Ryan: finally, the engagement is also done. Yippie...

Arjun: I'm so happy. Soon marriage will be done too.

Sanskar: yaah...

Laksh looks unbelievably at his over exited brothers.

Laksh: now go to your rooms and sleep.

Trio nods.

Trio: good night bhai.

Laksh: hmm... good night.

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Laksh's room:

Laksh was laying on his bed after changing. He looks at his red finger and the engagement ring.

Laksh: it's just the beginning don't know what all is on the way for me. Kya hai ye ladki? (What that girl is) Whatever she is. Now, only she's in my fate.

He takes a long breath and closes his eyes.

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GM-

Ragini's room:

Ragini: AGAIN I made him angry on me. I'm such a big idiot. Hope his anger vanish soon. But I'm so happy that I got engaged to him. Yeah...

Saying this she looks at her engagement ring happily.

She goes to her cupboard, takes out a coat and sits on the bed.

// It was the same coat which Laksh made her wear one the day of the fashion show.//

She smells it and keeps it near her heart.

Ragini: love you so muchhh my dear Akdu.

She says smiling and sleeps hugging the coat.

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Raglak's engagement news was in the air. It was headline in every newspaper and on every news channel. After all the great young businessman LAKSH MAHESHWARI got engaged to the fashion icon RAGINI GADODIA. Many heart broke listening to the news of the most eligible bachelor Laksh Maheshwari's engagement. And same in the case of Ragini too.

A few days passed.

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MI:

It was evening.

Laksh was in his cabin. Sanskar already left for home. Laksh was also leaving for home early. He comes out of his cabin when he heard one of his staff member's words "look she's so beautiful and hot yaar".

Laksh frowns and goes towards that man.

That man was holding his phone in his hand and was showing something to the other.

Laksh: what is this? Let me see too.

Both of them scares and looks at Laksh.

P1 (stammering): it's no...nothing siiiirrr....

Laksh: really, then show it to me.

Saying this he snatches the phone from his hand.

And the thing in the phone at which they were looking and passing comments made Laksh red in anger. He throws the phone away that it breaks into pieces.

Whole staff shudders at this.

Laksh (roaring): YOU BOTH ARE FIRED.

P2: sir please sir don't do this. It was not my fault. Please... He was the one passing those comments. Please sir.

Laksh (shouts): ROHAN...

Rohan, his secretary come there running.

Rohan: yes, yes sir.

Laksh (in a warning tone): they both should not be seen in this office tomorrow. Got it.

Rohan: yes sir...

Laksh leaves from there fuming.

P2 to P1: what you did idiot? Don't you know who she's to sir? Now because of you I lost my job too.

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MM:

Laksh enters in full rage.

Laksh (shouts): come out three of you.

Three of his brothers comes out immediately, sensing the anger in his voice.

Sanskar: bhai, what happened? Why are you so angry?

Laksh: give me her number.

Trio looks at him confused.

Ryan: whose number bhayu?

Laksh (trying to control himself): that girl... Oh uhhmm your bhabhi's number.

Trio looks at him surprised.

Arjun (teasingly): oh, so you want Ragini bhabhi's number?

Laksh gives him "I will kill you" look.

Arjun shuts his mouth.

//Wrong timing my boy😅.//

Ryan: note it bhayu.

He tells him her number and Laksh dials it from his phone.

She picks up the phone only after one ring.

Before Laksh could say anything.

Ragini (shouts): you idiot, ba****d why are you calling me again and again. If you again called me then I'll break your mouth with my punches. You don't know I'm learning self defense. I already told you three times that I don't want any credit card, debit card, adhaar card, I don't want any card. Then why the hell are you disturbing me? Just.....

Laksh (closing his eyes and shouting): SHUT UP...

Ragini scares to hell and she even understands who is on the line😂.

Ragini: Mr Mahesh... Maheshwari.

Laksh (gritting his teeth): ya, me only.

Ragini: sorry...

Laksh: just tell me where are you now?

Ragini: I'm uhm in my off... office.

Laksh: okay...

Saying this he disconnects the call.

Ragini looks at her phone with confusion written on her face.

Ragini: what was that? And why he was asking where I'm? Oh god what is all this? He seemed extremely angry.

There Laksh left the house immediately after the conversation.

His brothers too looks at him confused.

Ryan: what was that?

Sanskar: don't know.

Arjun: why bhai was asking about bhabhi's whereabouts.

They looks towards each other confusingly and then towards the door.

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So, how was that? Finally, the engagement is done. Do u guys liked it? Tell me via ur comments. I'm waiting and don't forget to hit the star.

Next: angry young man Laksh Maheshwari in Ragini's office.

Ignore grammatical mistakes.
Thank u🤗
Be happy always😀

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