HER SELFLESS LOVE

By bts_rainbow

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A family based story manan their kids n their family Manan are married they have kids nandini LOVE manik but... More

character sketch
mansion
part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7
part 8
part 9
part 10
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 14
part 15
part 16
part 17
part 18
part 19
part 20
part 21
part 22
part 23
part 24
part 25
part 26
part 27
part 28
part 29
part 31
part 32
part 33
part 34
part 35
part 36
part 37
part 38
part 39
part 40
part 41
part 42
part 43
part 45
part 44
part 46
part 47
part 48
part 49
part 50
part 51
part 52
part 53
part 54
part 55
manan mansion
part 56
part 57
58 + promo

part 30

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Manik came inside n found nandu was already up..he went n sat beside her . manik cupped her face n ask "how r u feeling now " he asked in concern

Nandini smile n said " I'm fine " her eyes fall on clock n went wide ...."8 baj gaye...mein itni der( late) tak soti reh gayi " she scream n was about to got up.. But before only Manik pulled her n made her sit " chup chap se baithi raho yaha par...n dare u got up from the bed b don't some work. I'm warning u" he said strictly

" manik par..." Nandini was about to say something but in return she got a glare from manik

Nandu - aap u har bar ankhein( eyes)
dekha kar...mujhe Dara nahi sakte" she said n made a pout

Manik so wanted to kiss her pout but somehow controlled himself n said "dara sakta hoo...n u have to listen me
U never take care of yourself ..always like a rabbit run n jump here n there...n the result is this....u always fall sick " he said n nandini frown "aap ne mujhe rabbit bola" she asked

Manik - aur nahi toh kya rabbit hi ho tum....unnecessarily keep on running either behind MaViAr or doing work..now I'm going to wake up kids n till that time take rest " he said

Nandu - manik plzzz at least...allow me to wake them up...they will trouble u " she said in a pleading tone as she knows her babies quiet well

Manik - oh hello ! Don't underestimate
me ..I can handle them very easily n without your help " he said being overconfident " now u take rest I'll be back in ten " he said n went to kids room

Nandini prayed in mind " ten minutes.. ten minutes mein toh yeh bacho KO utha bhi nahi payenge ...baghwan ji plzzz inki help Karna "

Here manik came to wake up kids...after 30 minutes kids woke up n first question him " mumma ta ( kha) hai ? " manik said them truth that she is not well

N that was it three of them ran to their Mumma leaving Manik behind
Manik was continuously calling them n said to stop but it fall on their deaf ears...having no option manik also went behind them

He entered n found the kids asking nonstop questions to nandini

Manvik - Mumma aap to ( KO) ta ( kya) his

Nandini - kuch nahi jaana Mumma KO thoda sa fever ho gaya tha " she said

Aryan - Mumma aaj hum chab (sab) cool ( school) nahi jaege ( jayenge)

Manik n nandu spoke together " kyu??

Vivaan - ale aap ta yan lakenge ( arey aap ka dhayan rakhenge)

Manik said in mind " meri biwi ke saath mujhe koi time kyu spend karne nahi deta....dekho inn tino ( three) ko khud se toh uth tey nahi..aur meri biwi ka dhyan rakhenge...yeh dhyan rakhenge toh mein kis liye hoo yaha"

Manik said to kids" no u all will go to school.. I'm there na I'll take care of your mumma " he said but kids nodded in no...n there start the cute fight between daddy n sons

Manik - meine kaha na tum sab school jaoge

MaViAr spoke in union - NO amm nai jayenge ( no hum nahi jayenge)

Manik - jaoge !! He said sternly

MaViAr - No !!

Manik - YES

MaViAr - No !!

Nandini was just moving her head left to right looking at their fight .." Bas now quiet all of u" she said in fake anger ...n the daddy n sons Malhotra became quiet

Nandu turned toward manik - manik bache toh zid karte hai..aap bhi kya unke saath ladne lag gaye...unhe samjhana chaiye ( manik kids r stubborn u have to make them understand.. Instead of that u r fighting with them )

Manik made a grumpy face n kids face lighten as their Mumma scolded daddy...kids show tongue to manik n manik glare at them " dekho nandu woh mujhe chida ( tease ) rahe hai.." He complain to nandini

Nandini turned to kids but before only kids pull their tongue inside n made an innocent face ...by looking at their face nandu couldn't scold them but she was sure that Manik won't be lying as she know her babies quiet well

Nandu - babies aap sab toh good boys ho na " to which kids nodded in yes " so good boys never miss their school.
Aur second thing Mumma aab bilkul thik hai...so now get ready for school"
She said n kids agreed half heartily
So Nandu kiss them on their cheeks lovingly to cheer their mood

Manik smile n said their kids that today he'll give them bath .so he n kids move to kids room. But this task was quiet tough for manik because if he hold manvik n vivaan.. Then Aryan would ran out of the bathroom... If he hold Aryan then other two will ran out . After lots of pleading n warning them that he'll complain to their mumma... Kids took bath n also make manik fully drenched in water " god how nandu handle this little devil's all alone...I must say its quiet tough job "he thought

Manik them made them wear their uniform n took them to nandini ..as they want to have breakfast with Nandu

Manik entered with kids to their room... Nandini too freshen up
She look at manik n found him fully wet ..she asked him

Manik came after changing clothes..till now servant had brought their breakfast.. Nandini was feeding
her babies n manik was feeding Nandu n himself was also eating

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