OUR CUTE FAMILY (✔)

By kuku369

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This story is about four brothers and four sisters. How the Maheshwari brothers ends up falling in love with... More

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By kuku369

Hlo everyone 🙋
Thanks for all ur valuable comments and votes. Keep supporting.
Finally ur wait is over. As this part is filled with Raglak scenes 😍. Hope u'll like it.

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Night:

On the dark and lonely road.

Only moon light was there.

Laksh and the person looks at each other and get's shocked.

The person was none other than our Ragini. Her car was also damaged but she didn't get any injury.

Both: tum/aap

Ragini: oh my god Mr Maheshwari, your head is bleeding.

Ragini takes a step towards him but Laksh steps back, still holding his head.

Laksh (shouts): stay away!! Can't you see? Don't you know how to drive? You damaged my car completely. You're just good for nothing. Poori duniya mein tumhe meri hi gadi mili thi thokne ke liye. Tumne kya kasam kha rakhi hai ke mujhe chain se jeene nahi dogi? (In the whole world you only got my car to crash with. Have you taken any oath not to let me live in peace?)

But Ragini was not paying any heed to his shoutings and scoldings. She was just looking at his bleeding head with concern.

Ragini (calmly): if you are done with your scoldings then let me see your head.

Laksh: I don't need your concern.

Ragini shakes her head in disbelief.

Ragini: stubborn!!

Laksh glares her.

Ragini goes to him and checks his wound. She blows air on it.

Ragini: this is not much deep. Do you have any first aid kit in your car?

Laksh (looking away): I don't have any.

Ragini sighs. She removes her dupatta.

Laksh (confused): what are you doing?

Ragini: wait...

She tears her duppata in one fourth part, keeps the remaining part on Laksh's car and ties it on his bleeding head.

Laksh (irritated): what are you doing, idiot girl?

Ragini: it will reduce blood loss. I'm sorry.

She says feeling guilty.

Ragini (looking at his car): how will you go to your house now?

Laksh (angrily): I'm planning to fly.

Ragini shakes her head in disbelief at the man in front of her.

Ragini: why are you so rude always?

Laksh (pointing towards Ragini): I'm like this only. Do you have any problem? If there is any, then keep it to yourself. I don't care.

Ragini glares him and takes a step back but she puts her leg on a stone and loses her balance. She holds Laksh for support but falls along with him.

Both of them rolls down into the jungle.

Ragini was holding Laksh tight and was closing her eyes in fear and Laksh was looking at her with blood shot eyes.

Laksh: are you insane? What was the need of holding me? Now just because of you I'm in this state.

Ragini opens her eyes and looks at the angry young man.

Ragini (pouts): sholly..... Pleajjj don't choutt. (Sorry, please don't shout)

She says cutely.

Laksh was lost in her pout and her childish way of talking. Soon he comes out of his trance.

Both of them stands up.

Laksh: now, what we'll do? How we'll go out of this jungle?

Ragini (proudly): simple, we'll go back by the same way with which we came here.

She says pointing to that side.

Laksh gives her "unbelievable" look.

Laksh (immitating her and making faces): we'll go with the same way.

Ragini looks at him with a cute angry face.

Laksh: can't you see it's a sliding path? We can come using it but can't go back. Idiot!!

Ragini nods her head in understanding but then she remembers his last word.

Ragini: you called me idiot!!

Laksh: idiot will be called idiot only and you yourself proved it. I called you idiot before also but you're realising it now.

Ragini: I'm not an idiot you are an idiot.

Laksh: you just keep quiet and stop eating my brain.

Ragini keeps quiet twitching her lips.

She was trying hard to remember when he called her idiot before😂.

Laksh: don't stress your small brain. You are not going to remember that.

Ragini looks at him shocked.

Ragini (in mind): how he knows what I'm thinking?

Laksh: we have to find another way out.

Ragini nods and both of them starts walking.

It was night and jungle too so there was dark everywhere.

Ragini holds Laksh's arm tightly.

Laksh looks at her and then at her hand.

Laksh: what?

He asks pointing to her hand.

Laksh: leave my hand.

Ragini shakes her head in no.

Laksh (controlling his anger): why?

Ragini: I'm scared of darkness.

Laksh: I can't believe it. The great RG is scared of darkness.

He says making fun of her.

Ragini: say whatever you want to say but I'm not going to leave your hand.

Laksh didn't utter anything and let it be like that only. He takes out his moblie and turns on the torch. He looks at Ragini's scared face. She was sticking to him like a scared kitten.

Laksh couldn't control his smile seeing her like that.

He was moving his hand up with the phone, while walking.

Ragini (irritated): is this a place or time for taking selfies?

Laksh looks at her horribly.

Laksh (glaring): oh Ms VCD I'm not taking selfies. I'm looking for network.

Ragini: oh. VCD means "very cute doll". Right?

She asks grinning like a child.

Laksh shakes his head at her.

Laksh: no, VCD means "vamp chudail dayan".

He says controlling his smile and smirking.

Ragini's face turns red due to anger.

Ragini: you MD, how dare you called me all this again?

Laksh: I know I'm the "most dashing " man. You don't need to say it.

He says raising his shoulders, showing attitude.

Ragini: no you are highly mistaken Mr Maheshwari. MD means "monkey donkey".

Laksh glares her.

Laksh (pointing to her): you... (smirks) leave my hand.

Saying this he turns off the phone's torch too.

Ragini: no no sorry please. I promise I'll not call you that again. Please turn the light on. Please...

She pleads.

Laksh: ok, but dare you...

Ragini shakes her head.

Laksh turns on the light again.

Laksh: do you have any network in your phone?

Ragini: my phone is left in the car.

Laksh: hmm... good!! I had expected this from you.

Ragini makes faces.

They keeps walking for more than hour but were not getting any way out.

Laksh: shit man!! How we'll go out now?

Ragini: what's the time?

Laksh (looking at the phone): 11:15.

Ragini (pouts): I would have slept till now, on my soft bed.

Laksh looks at her with irritation.

Laksh (sarcastically): ha and I must be playing cricket at this time.

Ragini (exited): really? You play cricket at this time. Maza aata hai?

Laksh (closing his eyes tightly): gawd, leave it!!

Just then the phone's light turns off.

Ragini holds his arm more tightly.

Ragini: why you turned it off?

Laksh: battery dead.

Ragini: oh god, what we'll do now?

Laksh: without light I'm not even getting where to go.

Both of them keeps walking for another hour but of no use.

Laksh: we should take rest now. Walking aimlessly in the dark is useless.

Ragini: what? Rest, here in this jungle?

Laksh: do you have any better idea? Or any clue about the way outside?

Ragini shakes her head.

Laksh: then... Just do what I'm saying. We'll search for the way after sunrise. We have to find a place to sleep.

Ragini: sleep!! Here in this jungle, on this muddy ground?

She says with an irritated look.

Laksh rolls his eyes at her.

Laksh: no no your princess bed is on the way and wild animals like lion, tiger will sing a lullaby for you, ok. You wait for it. I'm going to find a place for me to sleep.

Saying this he frees his hand from her and starts walking.

Ragini runs after him and holds his hand again.

Ragini: I'm ready to sleep on the ground.

Laksh chuckles but Ragini was too scared to notice that.

Laksh: you sleep there (he says pointing near a big stone) and I'll sleep here (pointing near a tree).

Saying this he goes towards the tree and sits there like this👇

Ragini comes there too and sits beside him.

Laksh looks at her confused.

Laksh: what now?

Ragini: I'll sleep with you.

Laksh (shocked): whaaatttt?

Ragini: I WILL SLEEP HERE WITH YOU.

She says stretching each and every word.

Laksh: are you mad? Oh god I would have asked it to you thousand times till now, already knowing that you are a mad woman only.

Ragini (pouts): I can't sleep there alone. There are wild animals in the jungle and I'm scared of dark too. Please...

Laksh (hits his palm on his forehead): okay!!

Ragini grins.

Laksh (closing his eyes): my brothers must be tensed for me.

Ragini: my sisters too.

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MM:

Ryan (tensed): it's 1 in the morning and bhayu haven't come till now.

Arjun: where's he?

Sanskar: I have called the watchman of the office he said bhai has left office before three hours.

Ryan: I'm scared. He must be fine na?

Arjun: me too.

Sanskar: don't worry. He'll be fine. I'm going to search for him on the way from home to office.

He starts leaving but Ajun holds his hand.

Arjun and Ryan: we'll come with you too.

Sanskar: but...

Ryan: no but we'll come.

Trio leaves the house.

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GM:

Swara: we can't sit here keeping hand on hand. I'm going to search for di. God please keep her safe.

Naisha: we'll also come along with you.

Swara: ok

And they also leaves to search for Ragini.

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So how's it? Hope it was upto ur expectations. Do tell me whether you liked it or not.

Next: jungle mein mangal continues😂.

Ignore any mistakes.
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