Ahkmenrah: The Fourth King of...

By HackedByAWriter

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He was prepared to say his last prayer. But the blow never came. Instead his saw the Nubian fall to the groun... More

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Prologue
Chapter 1: Race
Chapter 2: Wrath of the Pharaoh
Chapter 3: Banquet
Chapter 4: The Tablet
Chapter 5: Fair "Maiden"
Chapter 6: The Heirs
Chapter 7: Three Ways To Kill A King
Chapter 8: Cobra
Chapter 9: The Knife
Chapter 10: Poison
Chapter 11: Sea Storm
Chapter 12: Big Brother
Chapter 13: Self Defense
Chapter 14: Crocodile Tears
Chapter 15: Resurrection
Chapter 16: Long Live the King
Chapter 17: Dreams of Serpents and Victory
Chapter 18: The Storm Has come
Chapter 19: Being Reckless
Chapter 20: Fear Silence and Secrecy
Chapter 21: The Crown of the Nile
Chapter 22: The First Flash of Lightning
Chapter 23: Dark Horse
Chapter 24: Ramses the Great
Chapter 25: Wild
Chapter 26: Learning of Sargon
Chapter 27: Keeping the Peace
Chapter 28: The Messenger
Chapter 29: The First Blow
Chapter 30: Man, Woman and Child
Chapter 31: Remembering
Chapter 32: Nightmares
Chapter 33: Threads of Mortals
Chapter 34: This War
Chapter 35: Martyrs
Chapter 36: Have Faith
Chapter 37: The Most Spectacular Fashion
Chapter 38: Fight Song
Chapter 39: Blood Gold and Lions
Chapter 40: Conquered
Chapter 41: Defiance
Chapter 42: New Hope
Chapter 43: Phase One
Chapter 44: Vengeance
Chapter 45: Most Dangerous Job
Chapter 46: Thirst and Hunger
Chapter 47: A Promise
Chapter 48: Return of the White Lioness
Chapter 49: Thirteen
Chapter 50: Hathor and Sekhmet
Chapter 51: Fame and Glory
Chapter 52: Pain
Chapter 53: Life and Death
Chapter 54: The In Between
Chapter 55: Death March
Chapter 56: Lies
Chapter 57: Tears
Chapter 58: Rogues of the Nile
CHapter 59: Embody
Chapter 60: Heated Moments
Chapter 61: Food is Power
Chapter 62: Love and Hurt
Chapter 63: Raging Hearts, Nervous Smiles and Sentimental Slop
Chapter 64: Shattered Rain
Chapter 65: Strangeness and Honor
Chapter 66: Old is Gold
Chapter 67: Flesh and Bone
Chapter 68: Heartless
Chapter 69: Scars to her Beauty
Chapter 70: Love's Labours
Chapter 71: And This
Chapter 72: A Race
Chapter 73: Guardian
Chapter 74: Knives in Hearts
Chapter 75: The Plummet
Chapter 76: Method and Madness
Chapter 77: War Against Love
Chapter 78: Monster
Chapter 79: Blind Fools and Thieves
Chapter 80: To Kill A King
Chapter 81: A Clash of Swords
Chapter 82: The Truth of Kings
Chapter 83: The Plunge
Chapter 84: Of Whores and Mothers
Chapter 85: Fire and Water
Chapter 86: The Winged Soul
Chapter 87: The Smile
Chapter 89: Threads of Silence
Chapter 90: Racing the Sun
Chapter 91: Queen
Chapter 92: Exile
Chapter 93: Gifts
Chapter 94:
Chapter 95: Just Like Old Times
Chapter 96: Queen Slayer
Chapter 97: An Ambrosia of Ashes
Epilogue 1/3 - The Stories of Our Lives
Epilogue 2/3 - Who Would Want to Live Forever?
Epilogue 3/3 - King of Kings

Chapter 88: The Throne

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Khufu looked up at the door as it creaked open. In came a haggard unkempt Ahkmenrah followed closely behind by a weary Sabra. Khufu felt his heart seethe with a rage he didn't know he was capable of. He had hoped that somehow Ahkmenrah would follow his brother's demise. Ahkmenrah walked over to the few ministers who were present. He flashed them a bright grin.

"I am sorry..." he murmured. "I haven't been present."

Ahkmenrah barely acknowledged Khufu.

Bastard! Thought Khufu. I am practically running this country while you emptied half the wine cellar.

"I know that I have...I..." continued the King. "I have been mourning. I acknowledge that I have been irresponsible in my conduct and I am prepared to accept my mistakes."

"We understand." Answered an official, Ramose. "Kahmunrah was dear to all of us, but no doubt you would have been the most affected by his loss. The nation bears witness to your brotherhood."

Ahkmenrah nodded his head in acknowledgment.

"Will you forgive me?" He asked. Simply, plainly. Gods he looked so pathetic, so unkingly with his starting of a beard, slightly emaciated features and red eyes.

I wouldn't have asked for forgiveness if I were in his place. I didn't even mourn my own brother. I would give them no reason to beg for forgiveness. A king never begs.

"You highness" started Khufu. "There is nothing left to forgive. You are our King and we are merely your subjects."

"I was not your only King." Said Ahkmenrah, his eyes slid coolly to Khufu. For a moment the icy piercing look of Kahmunrah was alive within the young King's features. "The coronation parchments had been tampered with, by right and the will of my father, Isis bless him, Kahmunrah was also Pharaoh."

"Tampered!" Cried a fat incredulous official. "Who could have done it?"

"I have a few suspects." Said the Pharaoh his eyes moving away from Khufu. "But it is no matter now. I intend on implementing some of my brother's policies to honour him. No doubt you have learned of the birth of my nephew."

"The bas-"

"He is no bastard." Cut off Ahkmenrah. "He is my nephew and the son of a legal marriage. Besides even of he was not, I believe a King is able to keep consorts, and any first born son, whether born out of wedlock or not, will be the unconditional heir to the throne. His father was Pharaoh."

Khufu shifted. That pulled down his chances once again, now that Ahkmenrah had declared his nephew heir to the throne.

"Your majesty," started another official, his name being Meryre. "When will you like these policies to be implemented? And what exactly are they?"

Ahkmenrah seemed to ignore him as he made his way up to the throne. He stared at the gilded seat for a few seconds. His jaw tightened as he swallowed down what seemed to be a sob.

"What day is it?" He asked.

"It is the second day of the third month of the new year."

Nine months. That's how long his reign had lasted. And there were fifteen days until Kahmunrah's birthday. He would have been twenty years of age.

"In fifteen days, prepare for a feast." He ordered. "I will honour my brother through a Heb-Sed."

"Is it not too early for a Heb-Sed?" Suggested Khufu.

"I believe we have not had one of those in our dynasty Uncle," said Ahkmenrah with a grin. "None of my forefathers have survived to rule for thirty years. Besides, I feel like my powers need some revival."

"Of course sire, would you like us to prepare your chariot?"

"No." Answered Ahkmenrah firmly.

"No?" Echoed Meryre.

"I want to do it the old way?"

"The old way?"

"Have you forgotten your history Meryre?" Asked Ahkmenrah sweetly. "Before Narmer was Pharaoh, the Kings did not ride chariots around the city on their Heb-Seds. They had to run barefoot and naked in front of all his subjects. They had to do five laps before sundown or they would be executed."

"Sire you..."

"What?" Asked Ahkmenrah raising an eyebrow. "You think I've gone mad? Do you call this madness? I am reviving the old traditions and the histories that you have forgotten, the traditions that have become mere formalities to you."

"And the execution?"

"Well, I wasn't going to go that far." Admitted Ahkmenrah. "But I see your point. From now on Kings will choose whether they want to be executed or not."

"And what is your choice sire?" Asked Khufu.

Ahkmenrah knew that his great-uncle was humoring him

"I don't fear death." He told them. "If I do not complete the task you're a permitted to - no I order my own execution."

Ahkmenrah grinned at the surprise in their faces and he could almost feel Sabra ready to reprimand him.

"Please prepare the festivities. You are all dismissed."

He knew they wanted to go against him. After all, they couldn't lose a third King in the space of a year. But they also knew his word was law so they all left. Sabra was the only one who stayed behind.

He faced her, still grinning.

"What was that all about?" She demanded, crossing her arms.

"I'm reviving the traditions." He told her.

"The execution bit?" She pressed him further. "I've been working my ass off to keep you safe and you're going to throw it all away. Kahmunrah sacrificed his life for you and you're just..."

He stepped forward closing the gap between them, he held her eyes firmly as he let his smile fall to reveal a deadly serious expression. Was it him or did her breath hitch?

"I know what I'm doing." He told her. "Trust me, I intend on being there for Ramses, I won't give up on him."

"Then why are you doing this?" She spat back.

He didn't answer her instead he turned back to the throne.

"I am no king." He said. "I never was meant to be. But here I am and I have failed. I allowed us to be conquered. I have allowed this country to fall into strife and war. My people have lost faith in me. Don't tell me otherwise. If I were to conduct a Heb-Sed, the way they have been doing for the past Dynasty, the people will call me depraved, they will say I only wanted an excuse to feast and whore. But I do not. I want to honor my brother, I want to revive this kingdom. I want to build it again from the ashes. Even if I fail, death will not be a terrible option, I will at least see my brother and father again."

He paused and looked at her.

"A Heb-Sed my father told me, rejuvenates the King's powers. A Heb-Sed was a test to prove that the King could still be strong and healthy enough to rule. I want to prove it to them. More so I want to prove to myself that I am capable of ruling and I will not do it from the comfort of a chariot. They need to know that I am willing to burn my feet and face the sun and possibly meet my own death for them."

"You sound like Kahmun when he's in his Kingly melodramatics." She said. "But I still don't think this is a good idea."

"You doubt my prowess?" He questioned. "When I was a child I used to race around the city many times a day."

"It's not the same. You're still recovering from the alcohol in your blood and your leg hasn't healed properly from the War."

"All the better." He answered unaffected. "Oh and Sabra?"

"Yes?"

"If...I am not saying that it will happen but if...by some foul play I don't end up well completing the race by sundown." He paused, unsure how she would react. They were only three words but they could break everything there was between them or change it all for the better. "I want you to know that I...well...I trust you. I trust you enough that if I fail, it will be your sword that will deliver the killing blow. Is that understood?"

He felt an anger surge within him. He was a heretic, a blasphemer, and a hypocrite. He had just waxed poetic about bravery and yet he still couldn't tell her he loved her.

"Ahk..."

"Is it understood?" He asked, a wild wrathful edge to his voice.

He held her eyes sternly willing her to accept.

"Yes." She answered finally.

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Do you think Ahkmenrah will win or not? How do you feel about Ahkmenrah's inability to confess? Do you think it is necessary for him to go through with the old style of the Heb-Sed festival?

Let me know!

- Sargun ❤️

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