okay so here is the first chapter from the story that is coming and the first bit is starting like in the episode this is base on so the start is paste you will know the differents once they leave to go to the lions and i change it a bit from shiro: to ask and stuff at the end so i hope you like it
chapter 1
" Coran, How soon will we get to the Blade of Marmora's base?" ask shiro
"Based on the coordinates that Ulaz gave us, we should be there within a few doboshes". said coran
"I can't wait to see it! I mean, they were able to fold space-time, and that was just at an outpost! "said pidge excitly
"Mm, the space taco. It left us too soon". [stomach grumbles]. said hunk
"Well, sure, but my point is, imagine how amazing their home base will be!" said pidge
"Exactly. It could take on any shape. Like a space jelly donut. Or long, like a space éclair. Or a space cheese blintz with a cherry sauce on top. Maybe a little dusting of powdered sugar. That's the stars". smile hunk
"Aw! Now, I'm hungry for breakfast". said lance
"Guys, this is a serious mission. We need to focus". yell keith
[mockingly] "We need to focus." said lance
"The base is in range". said coran
" Take us in slowly". said shiro
"That might prove the tiniest bit of a challenge". said coran
"Is that a black hole?" ask hunk
"No, no, no, no, no. It's two black holes and a giant blue star." answer coran
"That's not better." said hunk
"No kidding. Just inside a black hole, the temperature is one millionth of a degree above absolute zero. But, just outside of that, it's hundreds of millions of degrees Celsius." said pidge
"Okay, it's like when you try to nuke a frozen burrito in the microwave, and it comes out all scorching hot on the outside, but it's still frozen in the middle, right? "said hunk
" Now, I'm hungry for lunch! "said lance
"Guys, quiet! Coran, where's the base located? "said keith
"In between those three deadly celestial objects". said coran
"The perfect defensive position". said pidge
"Or the perfect trap". said allura
" Yeah, I'm with Allura. Maybe we shouldn't, like, go in there at all? "said hunk
"What are you talking about? We have to go in! This is the whole reason we came out here! There is no other option! "yell keith
"Okay. Jeez. Calm down". said lance
[electronic beeping]
[female computer voice] "Identify yourself."
"Open a hailing frequency, Coran. We are the Paladins of Voltron, sent here by Ulaz." said shiro
[female computer voice] "Two may enter. Come unarmed."
"Why would they insist we come unarmed? Shiro, this doesn't feel right". said allura
"We've come too far to turn back now". said shiro
"They just sent us a route to the base, but we'll have to move quickly. Because of the solar flares, it's only open for another varga. Then, it will be closed for two quintants". said coran
"They're gonna close it for two years?" said hunk
"Two days". said pidge
"Oh". said hunk
"So, any thoughts on who's gonna join you on this little mission? I'm thinking things might get a little hot, so you're gonna want someone who can stay cool. "said lance
"You're right. Keith, you're coming with me". said shiro
"Keith's a hothead! He's probably going to shoot first and ask questions later! And they're not gonna be able to answer his questions because they'll be dead!" yell lance
"We haven't yet severed Zarkon's link with the Black Lion, so it has to stay here. And the Red Lion can withstand the heat from that sun. So, yes, it'll be Keith". answer shiro
"The course to the base will be quite treacherous, to say the least. You're walking a razor's edge between the gravitational pull of the black holes and the sun. One false move, and you'll either be crushed into infinity or burnt to a crisp." said coran
"great" sigh keith
"keith come on" said shiro
keith walk after shiro but they went to keith room and shiro told him to put his arms out which he did and shiro made sure there was no more wepons on him then walk away keith baryard but keith went for his knife and hide it in where he bardysard unsaul was then shiro came back but stopped and said "i just want to check one more time if you have no wepons" which shiro found the knife and took it and put it on a self in keith room and grab keith wrists and walk to the red lion
"Keith, is everything okay?" ask shiro
"I'm fine." said keith
"You kind of blew up at everybody back there. You'll have to control your emotions if you're going to lead this group someday". said shiro
"Lead the group?" chuckle keith
"When we were stranded, I told you, if anything ever happens to me, I want you to lead Voltron". said shiro
"I thought you were just delirious with pain. Why would you make me the leader? "ask keith
"Because I know what you're capable of, if you can learn some self-discipline." answer shiro
"Why are we even talking about this? Nothing is gonna happen to you." said keith
"It's just in case. I need you to get focused. When you and Allura ran off, it put us all in jeopardy. If you're going to be a leader, you've got to get your head on straight and you nearly brought a knife to the blades headquater if i didnt check then never mind" said shiro
"I'm sorry. I've just had a lot on my mind." said keith
"I know. We all have. "said shiro
[grunts] - [alarm blaring]
"We're getting drawn in by one of the black holes!" yell keith
"Get us out of here!" yell shiro then keith got back on track
"Great job! That was close." yell shiro
"There's nothing here. This place just looks like a plain asteroid. "said keith
[loud rumbling]
a door open on the ground and two members came out and ask them to follow which they did
Zarkon Castle
"I am going to ask you some questions. I will know if you are lying" said hagger
The Blades Of Marmora
"I am Kolivan, leader of the Blade of Marmora". said kolivan
"My name is Shiro and this is Keith. We are Paladins of Voltron". said shiro
"I know who you are". said kolivan
"Then you know we were sent by one of your own. "said shiro
"Ulaz was a fool to divulge this location to you. He had a penchant for ignoring orders and following his impulses. That's what got him killed." said kolivan
"He gave his life to save us! What he did brought us here today, and Voltron is ready to assist you. Are we welcome here or not?" yell shiro
"temper arent you "ask kolivan
a chuckle came out of keith mouth and at this then everyone seems to be looking at him
"whats so funny" ask kolivan having annoyance in his voice
"nothing its just shiro having a temper is like allura killing innocent people "said keith
"oh does she" said kolivan
"what no i mean that was the first time in how long" yell keith
"oh. so no. "said kolivan
"obvisely you hardly think we would put a person with a temper as leader and everyone on the team have something like shiro is the leader and i am the loner" said keith
"okay so are you the one with the temper "said kolivan with amasement in his voice
"no s-" said keith before shiro said" lets not say something we will regret "
keith roll his eyes at this and kolivan saw this and said "does he have no respect "
"not really i have know him more then anyone else on the team and yet he doesnt show much respect well depenss on the things we are saying" sigh shiro
"what was he going to say "ask kolivan
"you problay will not unstand what the words mean but lets just say one of the words were going to angry you" said shiro
"so bad word then "ask kolivan
"yes i think the way he was going i was only guessing what he was going to say "said shiro
"well we will talk then follow me" said kolivan moving towards a hall
shiro was going to follow but then felt a hand and saw it was keiths and he whisper "are you sure we should go with him i thought this was only a yes or no thing "
"we should and if you are uncomfarble just say you need to go to the bathroom" smile shiro
keith laugh
"what" ask shiro
"nothing its just well i only whisper to say what was need to say and you just whisper that wasnt and even i notice that garla have very good hearing so my guess is they problay heard you" said keith as he walk pass shiro with a huge grin
"you got paid back" sigh shiro
"nope i honstely didnt think you would say that last part "smile keith
"what is your paid back then" ask shiro
"thats for me to know" smirk keith
"i am dead "said shiro
"what "yell everyone expect keith who was laughing
"it means i am in trouble because keith is one of those people who can do things like scare the hell out of me for pay back "yell shiro
"oh "said everyone sounding embarrsed and at this point keith was laughing his head off
keith stopped laughing and said "now you know "
"what" said shiro
"2 things i expect to happen either you go mad with not knowing what i was going to do or embarrseing yourself "smile keith
"you got me" said shiro
"yep" smile keith
both of them follow kolivan
so that was the first chapter from the new story that is coming soon so what do you think will happen next