Abhi Na Jao Chod Kar!!✔️

By ib_rikara

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What happens when Gauri who is a rude businesswoman met Om who is a fun loving person?? To know more read my... More

Character sketch
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😍😍 Oh My Mata!!!!😍😍
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New Cover.
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PROMO 1
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A big thanks...
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The Trip!!
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GOOD NEWS v/s BAD NEWS
I will try...
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I STILL LOVE YOU!
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Stay with me-Forever!
New One!
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Part-50 (EPILOGUE)
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Part 12

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By ib_rikara

No proofreading... Kindly avoid mistakes ☺☺☺☺

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Om turned towards Gauri. She was looking down.

Om (trying his best to control anger in his voice) : Kaise hua ye sab?

Gauri : didn't replied

Om: main kuch puch raha hoon..

Gauri (meekly) : vo car...car ka fuel khatam....ho gaya tha, aur...(saying that she hugged him)

She was so scared to speak anything and fear was clearly visible in her eyes. Yes she has done the act of bravery by calling police or slapping that man...not everyone has the guts to do this. bat now when she remembers that incident she can't control her tears.  She hugged him more tightly while he was thinking whether to reciprocate the hug or not. But when she didn't pulled back he too hugged her.

Sometimes later:

He pulled back from the hug.

Om(scolding her): kya jarurat thi unn logo se kal panga lene ki? Mana kiya tha na maine...par meri baat suno tab na. Agar kuch ho jata to? Agar mein nahi aata to...aur agar iss sunsan sadak par gadi bandh ho gayi thi to kisi ko phone karna chahiye na...aur sabse badi baat iss raste se jane k liye mana kiya tha na maine,lekin nahi...tum samajti kya ho apne aap ko,han? Ye tumhari office nahi hai jo sab tumhari baat sunenge...

Then he realised her state.She was not meeting her gaze with him. He regretted his anger. His clothes were tore by them. He looked everywhere but not her. May be she felt awkward with his gaze on her. 

Om: I am sorry, vo mujhe aise nahi bolna chahiye tha, pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha...galti tumhari bhi nahi hai..sorry mein tum par chillaya. acha chodo vo sab...car ki keys kaha hai, ghar chalte hai.

Gauri: maine bataya to sahi, fuel khatam ho gaya hai..

Om: are yaar, mein Rudra ko phone karta hoon(but there was no network in his mobile) ye network ko bhi abhi jana tha...ab kya karenge...yaha par to koi lift bhi nahi milegi.

Suddenly there was big sound of thunderstorm and she again hugged him. His anger melted at that time and he cuddled her. It was raining heavily and they have to find shelter. He was looking for some shelter when she mumbled most unexpected three words.

Gauri(crying): I am sorry, mujhe aapki baat sun leni chahiye thi...sorry...

He couldn't see her in this state. He caressed her hairs to soothe her. They were fully drench in the rain and both can feel the heat of their bodies which was totally new for both of them. The situation was becoming awkward so to avoid it he slowly broke the hug.

Om: tum thik ho na? (she just nodded positively) ab kya karenge? I mean gadi bhi bandh hai aur iss halat mein, tumhare pass kuch hai gadi mein? duppatta ya koi extra t-shirt(she nodded in negative)(he looked at his t-shirt which was fully wet, but at that instant it was not the problem. He also understood that she might be feeling uncomfortable in front of him in that state so he removed his t-shirt and make her wear it. Now he was only in his vest. It was the first time after that she looked at him. He broke the silence) ...isse pehle ki shardi lag jay koi safe jagah pe chalte hai...(he dragged her under a tree) tum yaha khadi raho mein aata hoon. (he started to go when he felt tug at the end of his wrist. He looked at her)

Gauri: mein bhi saath chalungi...

Om: tum already bheeg chuki ho...

Gauri: please...

Om: acha chalo...

They looked near jungle for sometime and as always, there was a hut. Both felt relieved that there will be someone inside it. They headed towards it. Om slowly opened the door, but there was no one. 

Guari: yaha to koi nahi hai...

Om: oh wow...mujhe to pata hi nahi tha...chalo ab.(he went inside)

Gauri: I mean aise kaise kisi k ghar mein ja sakte hai.

Om: dekho, bahar barish mein rehne se to acha hai ki hum yaha baith kar subah hone ka intejar kare,koi na koi lift to mil hi jayegi subah. Ab andar bhi aa jao.

She take a view of the room. There was one small almirah in the left corner,some wooden sticks near it and a small charpai in one corner. A big bunch of grass in the middle of room. It looks like no one was living there from long time.

Om: mein ye cupboard mein dekhta hoon agar kuch mil jaye pahenne k liye to...

(he opened it. There were clothes so he took one for him and for her,too.)

Om: ye lo...(giving her a sari)

Gauri: ab ye kya hai? 

Om: sari hai,,,vo movies mein nahi dikhate..aise jangal mein, aise kamre mein ek sari to hoti hi hai. phir heroine vo sari pehanti hai aur hero use bas dekhta hi rehta hai...(in filmy style)aur phir vo dono ek dusre k kareeb aate hai, aur pass, aur pass, aur...

Guari: stop it...just stop there. How cheap Mr. Oberoi! aap aise time mein bhi ye sab soachte hai...

Om: jyada sharif banne ki koshish mat karo...ye lo ise pehan lo, 

Gauri: yaha?

Om: nahi...jungle mein...meein bahar hoon,tum pehan lo.

She took that sari from him. It was a simple black sari. She searched for the skirt and the blouse. She wore it and then called Om. He looked at her from top to bottom and from bottom to top. She felt his gaze over her and became embarrass but to her surprise he smiled,then chuckled and then started laughing holding his stomach.

Om: OMG Gauri, tumhe sari pehnni nahi aati?

Gauri(she again looked at herself, she has just circled the sari and then put the pallu on shoulder, due to which she couldn't move,too): aap to aise hans rahe hai jaise aapne sari pehnne k classes liye hai. (he was still laughing) chup..ekdum chup...

He stopped laughing for sometime and looked at her and she also looked at him. He again burst out laughing and this time she too joined him.

Om: acha, bas bahot ho gaya, (he calm himself down) tum 2 minute bahar wait karo mein ye change kar leta hoon.

She started to walk but due to sari she was going to fell down but Om tried to catch her resulting both fell on the grass. A small eyelock was shared by them. His hands were on her exposed waist while her hands were resting on his chest. After 2 minutes she tried to get up as well as he but again fell down. 

Om: tum...tum pehle khadi ho jao...(He make her stand up and then he also stood up.) agar tumhe koi problem na ho to mein pehna doon?(he asked hesitantly) 

Gauri: aapko aata hai? (while he nodded) thik hai.

He started tucking the upper part into the skirt and then started wrapping sari around it. It was obvious that he touched her but she didn't felt uncomfortable at all but was lost in his touch... he was so lost in his work that he didn't noticed his effect on her. She was feeling his every touch, it was first time when a men is so close to her. She knew that he has no bad intentions but she couldn't stop imagining more to it. 

Om: ye pakdo...(when he gave her the plates he has made she came out of her la la land) acha ab ise yaha par laga do...

She knew that what he was trying to say so she tucked the plates in the middle of the skirt. Then he took the end of the sari and put it on her shoulder.

Om: perfect...aise pehante hai sari...

Gauri(she looked at him who was looking like a child with bright smile who just won a race): thank you

Om(he put his hand on her forehead then on her cheek then again on forehead): nahi, fever to nahi hai...

Gauri: kya kar rahe hai aap?

Om: nahi mein check kar raha tha kahi tumhe fever to nahi hai na...(she raised her eyebrow) nahi vo tumne aaj thank you aur sorry dono bola na, aur mujhe iski aadat nahi hai...isiliye check kar raha tha,tum thik to ho na.

Gauri: mein bahar hoon, aap change kar lijiye.

He changed his pants and called her inside. It was opposite this time. She lost in him...he was wearing only pants and vest and this time she observed him completely. He was looking hot then ever. She couldn't take off her eyes from his muscular body. She could see the perfectly shaped abs through his vest. He came forward and snapped in front of her.

Om: Gauri...

Gauri: han...han boliye?

Om: kaha kho gayi?

Gauri: nahi kuch nahi...aur ye kya pehna hai? where is the shirt?

Om: shirt...vo shirt mujhe acha nahi laga to maine nahi pehna, pata nahi kitne dino se vaha hoga, (winking at her) vaise tum kyun puch rahi ho?

Gauri(she was irritated by now): vaise to mujhe bhi ye sari achi nahi lagi...kitni dull hai...phir bhi maine pehni hai na!!

Om: tumhare pass koi option nahi hai...agar nahi pehnnai to mat pehno...

Gauri: urghh...(she went from there and stand by window.)

Om(he chuckled): mein Rudra ko phone try karta hoon...

After some time:

Om was sitting on the grass while she was still standing there looking outside. 

Om: khadi khadi thak jaogi, baith jao...

She turned to him and found him sitting on the grass. Yes her lags were aching so she sat on the charpai. But her bad luck!!!! It was broken and she directly fell on the ground,, it was small so she didn't get any injuries. Om looked at her and again started laughing. She tried to stand up but again that sari came in between. She looked at him who was laughing like a mad.

Gauri(shouting): Mr. Oberoi...

He immediately stopped laughing and looked at her. She was looking rather glaring at him. He went to her and forwarded his hand. She held his hand and he pulled her towards him, due to this sudden action she fell on his chest. Again they shared an intense eye lock. No one tried to break it as they were enjoying it. Her hands were on his chest while he was holding her securely by her waist. But at that time his phone rang and they came out of their dream land. She composed herself and sat on the grass.

Om: thank god...hello Khanna

Khanna: sir aap...

Om: tu meri baat sun, isse pehle ki network chala jaye. office k piche jo short cut hai na uss raste pe Miss Sharma ki car hai...hum log vahi par hai...

Khanna: thik hai sir mein abhi aata hoon...

Om: okay. aur shayad phone na lage to vaha par hi wait karna...hum aa rahe hai.

Khanna: okay sir.(he cut the call)

Om: chalo...Khanna aa raha hai...

Gauri: vo...aap kisi ko batana mat, jo bhi hua use bhul jaiye. bekar mein sab pareshan honge.

Om(sitting near her): tum thik ho na? (she just nodded)

She was touched by his care for her. Everyone cares for her so much and what she was doing in return, hurting their feelings. He helped her in the situation when most of the men blame only women. Understanding her condition gave her the space she needed. Made her laugh to forget the pain and make her feel special by his gesture. Some happy moments which she will never forget in her life time. Indeed he is a gentleman.

Om(forwarding his hand): chale?

Gauri(put her hand in his): hmm...

Om: vaise tumne apna khayal badla?

Gauri: kis bare mein?

Om: Mr. Oberoi se Omkara k bare mein...

Gauri(she chuckled and started walking from there): chaliye, Khanna aata hi hoga. 

Om(he called her from behind): Gauri...(and she turned to him with a bright smile.) I prefer Om...

Gauri: chaliye...

They came near her car and just then Khanna stopped the car in front of them. Rudra came out from the car immediately and hugged Gauri.

Rudra: tu thik to hai na?

Gauri: han, 

Rudra(pulling back from the hug): gahr kyun nahi gayi thi itni raat tak...aur ye gadi ko kya hua? Aur tere kapde,, ye kya pehan rakha hai...(looking towards Om) aur tune bhi? aadha nanga kyun ghum raha hai? (she looked at Om while he just glared at Rudra)

Om: Tu chal sab batata hoon mein tujhe...

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Precap : leap of a month with some sweet memories.

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