*Eva has lots of notifications and is very very VERY excited to start rocking and rolling.*
Eva: Ink! Want to critique some art with me?
Ink: Of Course! Uh, do you want Blueprint to join us?
Eva: Why would I object?
Blueprint: H-huh? Really? Okay! Let's see the art!
Eva: Number One!
BluePrint: Ooh! The background is really nice. The black with the Stars compliment the bright blues and tans of the character.
Ink: Though the black tattoo throws the viewer off from where the closed eye is. I'd recommend maybe opening the eye or making the tattoo a color that's is almost black instead of the same black as the eye
BluePrint: they eyebrow seems a little bit too big for her. Her mouth also looks a little disproportionate. If you turn her to a perfect angle Hern mouth would be completely on one side. I know it's common for anime but it's one of my pet peeves.
Ink: I really like how she's all Cooordinated looking one direction and the hair is where it should be for a view like that. All in all, it's a nice work.
Eva: Great job, guys. Onto number two.
Blueprint: again woth the Stars! Sorry, I just really really really love space!
Ink: Well, for starters the first things I see are the brightly colored eyes and hair. The coloring is exceptional and it brings the viewer into central points. The crown is and added touch thst makes you drawn to the hair more.
BluePrint: However the necklace looks really awkward. The little stopwatch looks way too small and it looks like a charm the size of Eva's pinkie fingernail.
Ink: His clothes get lost in the background with their coloring. I think making him wear a dark maroon or some sorta of dark warm color that isn't to bright or light would have been best.
BluePrint: I love the value and highlights used in the character. Makes it really pop.
Eva: Onto the last drawing of this chapter.
Eva: Wow, it's a prettier me.
Blue: Well, this one is awkward positioning all the way around. As I can see, at least. She's craning her neck a little and her mouth is doing the same thing I mentioned before. I get that her hair is covering up her second eye, but from the view the viewer has some of the eye should be visable.
Ink: The shadowing from the hair is spot on. I like the little toothpaste patter nightlight on the bangs.
BluePrint: The freckles were a nice touch and the cyan tank top brings out her skin tone even more.
Ink: Out of all the ones Ive seen, this is my least favorite. Sorry Dawn.
Eva: Okay, I think that does it for Now. Whoop De Doo...