AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
avnis decision
note
consoling him
confession
dinner!!!
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
horror movie
dressing
Untitled Part 34
AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 66
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
family !!!
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

avnis denial

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By alka000

Evening neil comes directly to the hospital and msgs ali and riya to come to hospital

Neil goes inside the hospital , he thinks to go to avnis cabin but unfortunately mithali sees him

Mithali : hey neil , u here?

Neil : hi mithali , yes I am here

Mithali : wow neil u came here to pick up me , by the way I was thinking to come to yur home now , but see my luck u only came to pick up me , thanku

Neil : ahh actually mithali we r going out , we r going to xyz club

Mithali : oh wow neil , not bad u too r making plans now a days

Neil : ahh actually its not my plan , its rohit plan

Mithali : what y did rohit come in between?

Neil : becaue it was his plan that we all r going out now

Mithali : who all?

Neil : u , me , rohit , ali , riya and avni

Mithali : what ??!!

Neil : yes u can ask rohit if u want

Mithali : but he told me that he is going to take only avni out

Neil : what ?

Mithali : yes he said me he wants to spend some time with that poor girl avni alone

Neil gets angry but controls his anger

Neil pov : I knw it , this guy treats avni as more than a friend , I have to keep an eye on him

Just then rohit comes there , he sees neil and gets angry , mithali sees rohit and calls him towards them

Mithali : rohit what is this , u said me that u r going alone with avni , but here neil is saying that we r also going with u people

Rohit looks at neil who is staring at him angrily

Rohit : no I did not say that I will take avni alone I just said that if u don't come then me and avni will be alone that's it , but I am glad that u people r also coming with us

Neil still glares at rohit angrily

Rohit pov : don't know y did I lie I could have just said that yes I want to take avni alone , what is wrong in that , I love her and I want to confess my love , but don't know what happened when I look at neil I get scared but no worry I will ask neil directy to get out of my way today and then I can happily spend with my avni

After some time they all go to xyz club

At club all were dancing except avni and neil

Avni msgs neil

Avni : what happened hubby , y r u looking so angry ?

Neil : nothing like that I am not angry

Avni : no something happened to my hubby , plse tell me na

Neil : nothing happened I am just tired

Avni : really ? once look into y eyes and tell me

Neil : avni leave about me , y r u not dancing with them

Avni : when my hubby is sitting alone then how can I enjoy

Neil smiles and looks at avni , avni signals him to have a dance then they both go for a dance

While dancing mithali tries to come close to rohit , seeing this avni gets very angry and comes in between neil and mithali , neil smiles seeing avni jealous and mithali gets angry

Mithali gain tries to go near neil but this time neil goes out of dancing floor excusing himself , avni smiles and dances with riya and ali

Seeing neil alone at the table rohit goes towards neil , neil sees rohit coming towards him and gets angry

Rohit : hey neil what happened y did u come out of dance floor

Neil : I am not in a mood to dance and y did u come near me ?

Rohit : hmm ok I am coming straight to the point , u know I wanted only me and avni to come to dinner but unfortunately she called all of u

Neil gets angry

Neil : what do u mean by that ?

Rohit : see neil u very well know what do I mean , I like avni infact I love avni and I want to spend some time with her and I want to confess my love , but u always come in the midlle

Hearing this neil looses his patience and holds rohits collar and drags him out where there is no one

Rohit : neil r u mad what r u doing leave me

Neil : how dare u say that ? don't u dare to think about avni in such a way

Rohit : y neil I am not doing anything wrong I just love her and I will confess my love

Neil : but she doesn't love u

Rohit : how do u know neil , and if she doesn't love me its ok , but first let me try atleast

Neil leaves rohits collar

Neil : I am sry but I know she doesn't love u

Rohit : neil can I ask u something , u too love avni right?

Neil doesn't say anything

Rohit : I know u too love her and so u get angry on me , even I too but It doesn't mean that we both fight like this we should take a step and I will take a step and will confess my love for avni , if she says ok I will be the most luckiest man in the whole world and if not I will be very unluckiest person

Neil doesn't say anything and is very angry on rohit , avni comes out in search of them

Neil : avni let us just go I am tired

Avni : what ? but we did not had our dinner yet

Neil : we can have it in our house

Avni : but neil

Neil : u r coming or not?

Rohit : hey neil how can u shout on avni

Neil : u plse don't come between us

Rohit : who r u to say this ?

Neil : I am .... And he stops saying the truth seeing avni

Avni : whats happening guys y r u fighting ?

Neil : avni plse come let us go , I don't want be here even for a minute

Rohit : hey neil whats wrong with u , if u want u can leave but y avni , u don't worry about avni I will drop her

Neil gets angry and holds rohits collar

Avni: neil r u mad leave him

Neil leaves rohit

Neil : avni u don't know y did he bring u here , he brought u here so that he can spend some alone time with u and this was said by him to me

Avni gets shocked

Avni : what?? Rohit ??

Rohit : aaav avni yes I love u

Neil gets angry and holds rohits collar once again

Avni : neil plse leave him

Rohit smiles and neil gets shocked

Avni : rohit I am sry I don't love u and I am not at all interested in u

Rohit : but avni

Avni : no rohit not a word more , u proposed me and I gave my answer and plse remember one thing not only now I will never love u because i am already engaged

Neil smiles , rohit gets shocked

Rohit : I am sry avni and its ok , by the way who is the lucky person, is he neil?

Avni : nooo , my would be stays in America he comes next month , no one knows this except neil , ali and riya

Rohit looks at neil who is little bit relaxed now

Rohit : oh that is y neil is saying me that u r not going to accept me , what yaar neil u could have told me before it wouldn't have come to this extent

Neil doesn't know what to answer avni covers him

Avni : ahh actually rohit I told them not to tell anyone

Rohit : oh ok , and now I am also not going to tell anyone and neil I am sry

Neil feels guilty for misbehaving with rohit and he too says sry and they both hug each other

Avni smiles seeing this

Avni : ok come let us have dinner

They three go inside and all of them have dinnertogether    but neil is still upset 

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