AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
avnis decision
note
confession
dinner!!!
avnis denial
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
horror movie
dressing
Untitled Part 34
AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 66
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
family !!!
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

consoling him

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After sometime neil comes out of bathroom , while avni  goes near him to pacify him but he storms out of the room leaving avni alone

Avni pov : i am sry neil , plse don't behave like this with me , plse

She is in the verge of crying after sometime she too goes down and everyone were having their dinner

After dinner neil goes to his room followed by avni

Avni : neil plse once listen to me

Neil ignores her and goes to balcony

Avni couldn't hold herself more and hugs neil from behind and starts crying while neil is shocked

Avni : neil I am sry , I shouldn't have take a decision without asking u , but plse forgive me , I know I made a mistake but plse talk to me (she says all this crying)

Neil turns back to avni and cups her cheeks

Neil : shh avni , plse don't cry , I cannot see u crying and yes u made a mistake , yes u could have talked to me once instead of making ur own decision , but its ok I know y u did this and now plse don't cry see I have forgiven u

Avni looks at him

Avni : really?

Neil smiles and nods his head in a yes , avni smiles and hugs him

Avni : thanku neil

Neil : but avni is it necessary to go?

Avni : plse neil only for one month

Neil looks down with sad face

Avni again hugs him

Avni : sry neil , but plse accept , it is not that we r not going to meet one month right? We can meet daily there in our flat , plse neil don't be sad

Neil smiles and kisses her forehead which surprises him and her because it is first time when neil had kissed her , both avni and neil blushes

Neil : ok avni because its only a month and if u did not come after a month I will not spare u

Avni : okk

They both smile at each other and sleep peacefully

Next day early morning avni packed her stuff by the time  neil woke up and she was ready to go

Avni looks at neil who is now awake , as soon as neil sees avni he goes to her and hugs her tightly

Neil : I will miss u avni

Avni : I will miss u too

They both be for few minutes in each others embrace and are not willing to leave each other

Avni : neil plse go and get ready u have to drop me

Neil : oh yeah I forgot

Breaking the hug he goes to wash room and quickly freshens up

All the khannas go to their flat and meets nani and nani is overwhelmed with joy meeting all of them and she is very happy because of avni staying with her

Nani : thanku Prakash for keeping avni with me for one month

And they talk for sometime and its time for them to go back to their respective works

Avni hugs everyone in the home and becomes emotional

Swetha: see avni I don't want u to stay here but for ur happiness I agreed to this

Avni gets emotional and hugs swetha

Avni : u r best mother in law a girl can ever have in her life

Bebe : oye than what about me

Avni smiles and hugs bebe

Avni : I love u bebe

Everyone smiles

Bebe : ok then bye puttar take care

Avni : bye bebe , bye maa , papa take care bye , bye neil

Avni look at neil and neil looks at avni sadly not willing to leave each other

Swetha: neil come fast we have to go , ur papa is getting late and u too

Neil : maa u people go I will come later

Everyone understands that the newly married couple needs some time and they go

Avni gets happy when neil says that he will stay here in the flat for sometime

They go to avnis room

Avni starts placing her things in the cupboard while neil admires her, avni feels conscious and tries to divert the situation

Avni : neil !!

Neil : hmm

Avni : r u not getting late?

Neil : and u ? u r also getting late right?

Avni : no I took leave for today

Neil gets up with a jerk

Neil : what u took a leave and u r telling me now?

Avni : yeah but

Neil : then come with me

He drags her out of the flat without even wasting a second

In car

Avni : neil what is this ? where r u taking me?

Neil : patience wifey u will get to know

Neil takes her to a big bungalow where there are no one

Avni : wow neil I love this place , but whose house is this ?

Neil : it is our farm house

Avni : wow neil , its very cool , y didn't u bring me here before

Neil : because we did not get time

Avni : hmm by the way thanku for bringing me here

Neil : its my pleasure wifey

They go inside and they call ali and riya to come there

After sometime they four spends the time watching movies , playing cards and so on

Afternoon avni and riya were in the kitchen preparing lunch and in the hall neil and ali were playing video games

Ali : hmm so neil did u confess ur love for avni ?

Neil : no yaar I am feeling afraid that she might say no

Ali laughs out loudly

Neil : ali!! What happened y r u laughing?

Ali : neil hen what should I o? u r saying as if she is ur friend and if u propose she will leave u

And again he laughs but stops when neil glares him angrily

Ali : ok ok but really neil? Do u thnk that avni will leave u ? never , she loves u a lot and I can guarantee u

Neil : and how do u know?

Ali : because I can see it in her eyes and u say did u feel anytime that she doesn't like u?

Neil : no never

Ali : then what else u r waiting for , go and confess ur love to her

Neil : but if she loves she can only confess right

Ali : neil plse don't expect too much from girls they will never propose first and that too avni I know that she has no ego problem but she is a shy girl , so u only confess it first

Neil : ok thanks yaar ali , today I will confess my love

Here in the kitchen

Riya: so avni , did neil propose u ?

Avni : no riya

Riya: what?

Avni : yes but y r u shocked ?

Riya: and don't tell me that if he will not then u will go and confess ur feelings

Avni : yes riya , I couldn't hld it myself anymore , I know neil too loves me , so what if I confess my feelings first , Its ok for me even if he don't confess first

Riya: babes don't be stupid , girls should never propose a boy because it only increases his pride

Avni : no riya , neil is not like that , I know about my neil , he is so calm and mature in nature , he is not egoistic and he can never hurt me . so y cant I propose him , I will go and propose him today itslef

Riya: ur wish babe and all the best

Riya hugs avni and there neil hugs ali

So let us see who will confess first   

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