AVNEIL: its all about destiny

By alka000

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its a story on avneil and is all about how they meet how they fall in love with each other More

introduction
who is she?
note
friends
meeting again
thief
new start
Untitled Part 8
marriage alliance
note
honey moon
note
neils concern
note
colleague
realization
mithalis return
regret
note
consoling him
confession
dinner!!!
avnis denial
note
nanis love
note
leave
karvachauth
unwanted guest
debar
horror movie
dressing
Untitled Part 34
AVNI NEIL KHANNA
Untitled Part 36
problem
proposal
note
movie night
crush
Untitled Part 42
alis experience
gift
Untitled Part 45
juhi!!!!
note
punishment
distance
meet
Untitled Part 51
gossiping
Untitled Part 53
Untitled Part 54
Untitled Part 55
Untitled Part 56
slam book
who is he?
scooty
slappp
whats the reason ?
friends?
Untitled Part 63
note
Untitled Part 65
Untitled Part 66
Untitled Part 67
Untitled Part 68
jealousy track 1
avnis turn
note
jealousy track 2
Untitled Part 73
important
memory back??
Untitled Part 76
kidnap!!!!
ignored
Untitled Part 79
finding them
note
Untitled Part 82
consoling her
important
family !!!
pregnant
Untitled Part 87
Untitled Part 88
my new avneil story
Untitled Part 89
Untitled Part 90
epilogue

avnis decision

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Avni realizes what she is doing and leaves neils shoulders as she pushed him inside the bathroom by helding his shoulders , while neil was adoring her

Avni is not able to make eye contact with avni and is furiously blushing

Avni : oh o I am sry neil , I was tensed and did not know what was I doing

Neil : but avni what happened y were u tensed

Avni tells him that mithali came , just then mithali comes into neils room

Mithali : neil ! neil ,, where is this guy , may be he is in bathroom

She goes near bathroom and bangs the door , avni gets tensed and whispers to neil

Avni : neil now what to do ?

Neil : shhh (he closes her mouth)don't worry relax and don't talk loud

Avni nods in yes

Neil : mithali I am having my bath u go and sit in the hall I will come after few minutes

Mithali : its ok neil I will wait here for u

Avni gets angry at mithali

Avni pov : how shameless she is how can she wait for a guy who is having his bath

Neil looks at avni who is seriously thinking something

Neil : avni what happened

Avni : I am thinking how could she barge into our room without permission and that too for my husband

She says it in the flow and realizes it later and gets embarrassed while neil admires her

Neil : its ok avni no need to get embarrassed , its normal to a wife to get jealous I can understand

Avni : I am not jealous

Neil : hmm as u say

Avni : neil plse ask her to go , I am getting late

Nei : ok wait I will go and ask her to leave

And he starts leaving only to be stopped by avni

Avni : neeeil r u mad u will go like this infront of her only in towel

Neil realizes that he is in towel and he thinks to tease avni

Neil : yeah what is there in that , I am in my towel right? And by the way u too saw me no?

Avni : oh really for u me and mithali are equal?  great !! and she turns to other side being annoyed by neil

Neil smiles and pulls her towards him

Neil : u know what wifey u look soo cute in anger and don't worry I will not go like this infront of any girl

Avni feels shy and she looks down , but neil makes her look towards him

Neil : ok , now relax I will ask her to go

Avni smiles at him

Neil : mithali u just plse have ur breakfast I will come down

Mithali : hmm ok neil I will be waiting for u

Mithali leaves from there , They come outside of the bathroom and neil locks the door

Avni : neil y does she come to our house daily , cant she go alone to hospital and when she can come to our house alone then y cant she go alone to hospital?(she says in anger)

Neil smiles seeing avni in anger

Avni : what??

Neil : nothing , I never saw u being this much angry

Avni : ahh neil , I am sry for being rude but

Neil : shh avni u r not being rude its natural and I don't know y does she comes to our house , but we cant say anything to her because her father is good friend of our father so inorder to maintain friendship we don't say anything to her , even if her father is not so close to us how can we just be rude to her ? am I right?

Avni : yes and I am very lucky to be part of this family who respect each and every one

Neil : even we r lucky to get u in our family

Avni smiles

Avni : I think she left , now I too will go , but how will I go out

Neil : don't worry I will manage

After that avni leaves to hospital somehow , day passes in their respective works

And at evening avni comes to house , she sees bebe and swetha sitting on sofa and watching tv while Prakash was busy in his phone , they see avni coming inside

Bebe : come puttar sit here , how was ur day

Avni : fine bebe

Swetha: beta y r u looking tensed

Now Prakash and bebe look at avni

Prakash : yes beta what happened y r u looking tensed

Avni : actually bebe I want to ask u people something which may annoy u

Prakash : nothing will annoy us beta u first ask what do u want to ask without any hesitation

Avni : bebe I still have one month of internship and after that I will become a senior doctor and then I can reveal my identity

Bebe: yes puttar , but what do u want to ask

Avni : bebe because of me u all r suffering from few days , u people r hiding truth because of me , u people r suffering I dont want that and i made a decision

Swetha; what is that beta

All were curious to know avnis decision

Avni : bebe for one month can i shift to hostel

Neil : noo

All turn back and avni was shocked to neil

Avni : neil..

Neil : no avni i am not going to support u for ur stupid decision and i will not allow u to do any such stupid thing

Avni : but neil

Swetha: avni neil is right we r not going to allow u to stay at hostel and how dare u to say that we r suffering because of u ? never again speak like that , u r our daughter and daughters will never make their family suffer , how did u even think that we will allow u , haan?

Avni : but maa ,

Neil : no arguments on this avni

avni was in the verge of crying , prakash sees this and goes near avni

Prakash : puttar i know y r u saying so , but never think u r suffering us and about u living in a hostel , i too don't agree with that , but how can we say no to ur wish , if u want i have another option , we have a flat in abc colony and u can stay there

Bebe, avneil and swetha looks at prakash

Bebe: prakash what r u mad? What r u talking about? Will u send her there that too alone ,

Prakash : bebe first let me complete my sentence plse , bebe there does not need to stay alone because nani is staying in our flat

Bebe , swetha gets happy hearing that and avni gets confused

Swetha: what nani is here in mumbai and u r saying us now

Prakash : i was about to say but this took place and so avni can stay there happily with nani for one month

Avni : but papa who is nani ?

Swetha: beta nani is our bebes friend we all call her nani and prakash ji y don't u ask her to stay in our house

Prakash : swetha j ii asked her but she refused because she wants to stay at a place where temple is nearer to house so that she can daily go to temple and i was even searching for caretaker who can take care of her , but avni asked us she want to stay away for one month so i got this idea avni staying with nani

Swetha: wow prakash ji its a good idea , they can take care of each other , but i don't like avni to go away

Bebe: even me too ,

Avni : maa , bebe plse just for one month plse

Swetha and bebe look at each other

Swetha: ok beta as u wish but u should daily meet us and we too will come to u

Avni gets happy and smiles while nodding in a yea and hugs bebe, swetha and prakash thanking them

All this while Neil gets very sad and is very angry on all for accepting avnis stupid decision and he rushes to his room angrily which is noticed by all

Swetha: hmm now u should console ur hubby for upsetting him

Avni gets sad

Bebe : avni puttar don't worry , he love su a lot and he is upset thats it , he will understand , go , go and talk to him

Avni nods and goes to her room

Avni sees neil on the couch , as soon as she goes near neil he gets up and goes inside the bathroom and closes the bathroom door harshly

Avni pov : oh no did i do wrong , he is very angry on me , i should had first ask him and then to family , oh god plse help me in consoling him 

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