I am trying to make the characters behave like that of in the original books. I cannot stand if the characters of the FanFiction is too own-characterlike... so I'm trying to, you know, "recreate" them as Rick Riordan's characters without any... side affects idk.
And uhm, English is not my first language so please bare with me.
Edit: So... I was like 11 when I wrote this, so this fanfic is under a really throughout re-editing. I'm feeling so embarrassed.
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(Magnus POW)
"Bling bling!"
Groaning, my eyes shut open at the sound of my alarm clock. Still feeling sleepy and very much grumpy, I slammed my hand down on the alarm clock, grabbed it, and threw it on the wall opposite of my bed, where the poor/absolutely mean thing scattered into tiny pieces not even the valkyries would be able to gather. I had to clean that up later. But for now, I could do what I wanted to. It's my day off.
Blitzen and Hearthstone had told me, they would take care of the Chase Space for me and Alex for about a week. If there was happening something seriously terrifying like a talking chicken sudden appearance, a blue wolf's attack, or a sudden call from Loki, they would text me.
Luckily, they hadn't.
I got up, took a bath, got some clothes on, and walked out of my door to get some breakfast with my buddies. Then something randomly popped up in my head; I should go get Alex first.
Alex was normally a late asf-sleeper - and that girl slept as long as she wanted to - I didn't know how I knew she was a girl, I just had this amazing feeling in my stomach that told me! Cliché and cheesy. Oh, please, you don't have a life... wait, I'm dead
Standing right outside her room, staring at her door, I felt insecure. Honestly, I knew she wouldn't open the door, but I did it anyway.
I knocked softly on her door, not even daring to knock more than two times. If she didn't want company, she wouldn't react.
Then to my surprise, I heard a loud, annoyed growl coming from the inside, and a faint chuckle escaped my moth.
"Alex?" I said to her. No answer. The door was dark green (with a faint pink color?), and I had a feeling she painted it herself. The thought put a small smile on my face. "Alex?" I said again, a bit louder. No answer. Just the green door looking at me with its creepy non-existent eyes.
Great, I was fearing and talking to a green door. Hmmmm... Maybe they could talk to? I smiled a little at the thought thinking of Jack flirting with Alex's door. He would float beside me and say: "Oh hello pretty door!" Then he would whisper to me: "Do you think she would open up for me?"... then laugh like a maniac.
Suddenly, someone opened the door, and I found out that I'd been leaning on it. I fell right on top of a surprised Alex. We just layed there in the door opening, and looked into each others eyes. She had the most beautiful two colour eyes. Her hair was messy, but it still shined. A little gasp came out of her mouth, but then she leaned her head a little up, and captured my lips. Even if we had been dating for a couple of months now, and I had kissed her before, I still felt that unbelievable satisfaction of doing it. I had eventually earned the prize, for not staring like an idiot, after kissing her. Her lips were smooth, and tasted like strawberry. Suddenly I felt her leg on my waist, and then it was me, who was laying on the ground. While she did the kind-of-judo-flip, her lips were still on mine. I didn't know how she could do that without pulling away. Not that I cared. She pulled away, and was now sitting on my chest.
Her lips curled into a smirk. Then she stood up, and gave me her hand. She pulled me up with her einhejrstrength. Then she just looked at me, like if she just saw me now. Just seeing her look directly a me, made me feel like a hundred of dead butterflies was coming to life in my stomach. It was a little time since we kissed, but I felt it couldn't be more perfect.
"What are you doing here, idiot?" she said. She took her arm under mine, and locked them together.
"Breakfast." I said simply, avoiding her eyes. Why did I avoid her eyes? I could feel her smile, when we walked over to the feasthall, but when I looked at her, I suddenly got the feeling that I forgot something. Something that had to do with Alex? Something related to her good kissing-mood?
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When we walked inside the feast hall. Mallory, Halfborn and T.J were already at the table, waving enthusiastic at us. Alex pulled her arm to her, and ran over to them. She hadn't been in the hotel lately, because she was at the Chase Space, working. I know it's gonna sound ridiculous, but it was actually her who did most of the work. I was normally at the kitchen talking to Blitzen and Hearthstone, or sitting at my office (which were actually just my bedroom) writing to one of Odins servants - not valkyries - so he could send me food, pillows and all that stuff, to make the Chase Space more of a home, to the homeless kids. Alex took care of the kids, comforted them, and let them talk out about their problems.
Sometimes when she was in good mood, she came into my bedroom with another little kid, and made me answer some questions.
There was one day, a kid asked me if I was dating Alex. Alex was holding the little girl's hand, and smiled amused at me. As that embarrassed fool I am, I just scratched the back of my head, blushed, and answered winking to Alex:
"Well... yeah we are dating, but sometimes I feel like we're saving children, and going out on missions, more, than going on dates and kissing."
Of course the little kid didn't understand my exact meaning, which I found really good. Find out yourself why. I actually just said it for fun, but when the kid left the room, Alex asked me, if I could take her out on a date. I just smiled, maybe a little sheepishly, and pulled her into a kiss. Actually she stopped me, with laying her hand on my chest,
"I'm not kissing you before, you've taking me out on that date, Mags." She smiled, and walked out of the room. I just stared dumbfounded at her. Maybe I was waiting for her to come back, and give me the kiss. I sighed, and sat down to finish my paper writing.
I hadn't got time to take her out on that date though, so I think I was kind of lucky when she kissed me before.
She rarely did what she did, when she walked over to our buddies: She gave Mallory a hug, and high fived the boys. Then she sat down beside Mallory. I smiled at them, and sat down beside Alex. Then, magically, a plate appeared in front of me.
"Falafel." I said immediately. It appeared too, in front of me.
"Magnus," Mallory said, and sighed. "You CAN'T eat falafel in the morning." I looked annoyingly at her.
"But I like falafel." I said, and took a bite of it. I tasted good. I know that Valhallas food are supposed to be the best, but I still thought that Fadlan's Falafel's falafel was better. Please, don't kill me Odin.
"Just let him, Mal." Halfborn said. "Hmm... If Magnus love falafel that much... It could be worth a try..."
"Don't." Mallory warned, her eyes burning fiercely over a falafel.
"Falafel." Halfborn said smiling. All signs of his formerly food vanished and got replaced by the same falafel at mine. He send me a look and took a bite. His eyes cleared up and a huge smile covered his face: "Gods, this is good!" he yelled. I smiled at him. His voice was so high that some hotel guests were looking weird at us. Mallory slapped him on his head and signed defeated.
"Ouch." He said frowning at her. She just shrugged her shoulders. Alex rolled her eyes. Sometimes, Mallory and Halfborn, just bickered like an old couple. Not that it worried me that much. Oh, maybe I should replace "sometimes" with, "always", if you get my point.
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It was time for our daily death, and I teamed up with floor 19.
We ran over the field, and like always, we were the target - or more specifically: me. Just because I was the bloody healer, and could heal my buddies, then it doesn't mean that I'm the most dangerous! Then suddenly, Jack, appeared in front of me. He looked as good as always, (feel my sarcasm, please).
"Good, you're out." I said to him. "Go kill some for me, will you?" If he had a forehead, then I could imagine him frown.
"Dude, is there no 'it's so good to see you, Jack!' or 'I missed you so much, Jack! or-" I cut him of.
"Jack, I missed you so much." I tried to sound enthusiastic, but I couldn't. I knew he wouldn't attack if I didn't say anything like that. "Would you please kill someone now?"
"Thanks, buddy. It's kind of a shame, that all these weapons around here are males," He then said. A guy from floor 25, came running up to us. I almost smacked my head, of his stupidity.
"I miss that hottie, Riptide." The sword continued, while it cut the dude in half. The dude gave someone behind me thumbs up. I quickly turned around, but it was to late. Jack didn't get it either. There was a girl behind me. She were black pants, and a white shirt with the quote: Dead is a good thing! She pointed the sword directly at me, and swung her sword. Jack this time, were quick, and blocked it when the blade were about 1 inch, from my face. Then, I felt a sudden pain in my leg, and an ax were deep buried in it. Of course I was under a attack. Another guy behind me, were still in his throwing position, but before he could dance in succeed, or whatever he would do, someone with a wire, cut his head of. I looked to my right, and saw this smirking, green-haired girl looking at me.
"You're such an idiot." She said. She looked at the ax in my leg, and frowned. "Get that out now!" she commanded. I sighed and tried to pull it out.
"Dude, you okay?" My sword said. The girl was laying on the ground, dead.
"I'm fine." I answered. I gasped in pain. Alex sent me a look: You're clearly not okay.
"You're not!" she said, and began walking over to me.
"Alex, it doesn't matter, I'm going to die, I don't now, in about 5 minutes?"
"You're NOT gonna die!"
"It doesn't matter!"
"Yes it does!" She was now face to face with me. I just thought she was going to say, something romantic like: 'I care about you to much' or 'I love you'. But, yeah, I'm really bad at guessing. "If you die, then you can't take me out on that stupid date after this, because you're healing!" Oh, I thought. "And then I can't kiss you properly!" she screamed now. That was why she was being in such a good mood, this morning! We were going on a date! I'm such a bad boyfriend! When she said the last sentence, the battle stopped in the reach of a half mile.
"Uhm... I meant..." she looked around, her face, as red, as my red sweater. "And then I can't kill you properly...?" It sounded more like a question, than an angry line. I saw Halfborn and T.J looking at each other. Then they burst out in laughter. Halfborn trowed his sword, with tears in his eyes, so fast that it hit a einheir in his chest. He didn't notice it because he laughed so much. All the fighting began again.
I looked at the blushing Alex, and when a spear finally hit me in the chest, I caught Alex' waist and starred into her sparkling eyes:
"Then do it now." I said. Without saying anything, she kissed me. I could feel her body shake, and knew she'd been stabbed or something like that, but right now we didn't cared. We both died in each others arms: That's what I call a honorable dead.