OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.
Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars
Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed (purple will be everywhere if you shed) one! Noone
cod (only riverclam can do that, buy me a river) hurt her family now .
StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!" (Wow she just "Figted")
"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" (Write a book?) "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." (New? New fighting moves?)
"Ok." They went to the frost (burrr) togather (gathering?) and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. (Uhhhhhhhh, bodies?) "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." (BARK BARK)
"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed (fur, fur, everywhere.) just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! (Ready to beat up firestar so much he loses a life)
"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.
"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. (Oof) "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." Idfdkuigrfvuigkugieroyviuvvroe "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god (will she be the new god?!?!) was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? (PROPHECY MEOWED!?!?)
"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. (Is he mad?) "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," (cool)
"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? (Yes you are evil) She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? (YOU ARE EVIL I SAID AND YOU KILLED ALOT OF CATS) "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. (Is he sad) "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. ( S O K A W A I I )
"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.
"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."
"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. (Yeah, it was fun getting beat up by your apprentice) So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. (That's against the warrior code)
Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. ( 🔓 Watch moonkitti for the locks 🔒 )She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. (Holeclan? Is that a new clan?)
Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."
"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"
"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) (#starpawXjazzpaw) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.
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