The Murder Of 1998

By Babyafro

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(BOOK ONE OF THE HUNTER SERIES) (COMPLETED) A loving wife, a devoted mother, and a hardworking nurse. This is... More

Authors Note
Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty-Two
Chapter Twenty-Three
Chapter Twenty-Four
Chapter Twenty-Five
Chapter Twenty-Six
Chapter Twenty-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Eight
Chapter Twenty-Nine
Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty-One
Chapter Thirty-Two
Chapter Thirty-Three
Chapter Thirty-Four
Chapter Thirty-Five
Chapter Thirty-Six
Chapter Thirty-Seven
Chapter Thirty-Eight
Chapter Thirty-Nine
Chapter Forty
Chapter Forty-One

Chapter Eight

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"I kinda wonder how he turned blind in one eye," Walter said as he drummed his fingers against the wheel of the car. He made a sharp turn that made Seth grab on tightly to the car door handle.

"Geez, could you drive more wildly?" He said sarcastically. Walter only chuckled. "And why do you say that? Thats none of your business anyways." He sighed. The day was getting closer to the night. The sky turned into a beautiful reddish–pinkish color. Seth thought it was magnificent. But Walter didn't necessarily think like his partner. He wasn't as emotional as he was. And he sure as hell wasn't one to look on the brighter side of things. He was fearless and a bit of a jackass at times. But Seth still loved him no matter what. Even if he did give him a hard time.

Walter parked into one of the empty spaces in the hospital's parking lot next to a handicap spot. Seth wasn't very stoked to walk into the hospital, especially considering the fact that Raymond had tried to take his own life.

The two men walked in, flashing their badges to woman at the front desk.

"Were here to see Raymond Hunter." Seth said. The lady with a black bob nodded and began to type on the computer.

"He's in room 213 on the third floor."

Seth thanked her and walked over to the elevator with Walter, pushing the button with the arrow pointing up. He stared at the numbers changing, the elevator slowly making its way to the first floor.

"After you," Walter said, holding his hand out. Seth smiled and walked in before Walter did as well.

"So," Seth began, pushing the button to the third floor, "how's your sister?"

Walter sighed. He shrugged his shoulder. "I don't know. Sometimes she talks to me and sometimes she doesn't. Its kinda frustrating honestly. She can't even remember anything that happened."

"Yea but, can you blame her? I mean she went through such a traumatic experience. She was kidnapped and tortured. You gotta give her some credit for having the courage to even have small talk. Thats not easy for victims like her." Seth scratched the back of his head. "Just saying."

Walter didn't respond. He only stared at the floor. He didn't want to think about anything that related to his sister at the moment. He felt useless that he couldn't help her in any way. He had to comfort her from a distance. The fact that she couldn't remember anything else like the person who did this to her, or where she was when she managed to escape, it made it all worse. At least in Walters eyes. He begged for her to remember something. Maybe a road sign or a building she perhaps walked by while making her escape. But nothing came of it.

The elevator doors opened. Walter lifted his blue eyed gaze up to be greeted by a man with shoulder length brown hair. He knew the man was a nurse due to the fact that the man was wearing light blue scrubs while the doctors and interns wore either purple or dark blue scrubs. The nurses however, wore light blue ones. His eyes wondered down to his ID card hanging from his shirt pocket.

Jeremy brown.

His eyes widened a bit but he quickly averted his eyes as the two detectives walked out the elevator and letting the nurse walk in.

"Seth," Walter whispered, "that nurse that just walked into the elevator was Jeremy Brown."

Seth lifted an eyebrow and turned to look at Walter. "How'd you know that?"

"I saw his name on his ID. That was him. W-what do we do?"

Seth rubbed his chin, pondering. "Go." Walter stared at him for a few seconds before nodding his head and heading towards the stairs instead of the elevator. Seth looked up ahead. He walked down the hall until he found room 213. Slowly, he opened the door. Inside was the loneliest man laying on the hospital bed and curled up in a ball while laying on his side.

"Mister Hunter?" Seth called out. There was no response from the man. He only stared at the flowers on the seat next to the bed. Seth walked closer to him. "I'm so sorry for what you're going through. Believe me, I am."

"Then stop wasting time here and get out there to look for my wife's killer." Raymond whispered. Seth paused in his steps and frowned.

"We are. Right now in fact." Seth took a couple more steps towards the man, sliding a hand into the pocket of his pants.

"I didn't try to kill myself. I just... I just wanted something else to help take some pain away." Raymond gripped on tightly to the sheets. "They say that I didn't cut deep enough because I was too drunk and my coordination was off. They say I'm... lucky." He let out a sob. "Whats so lucky about living when you want to die?"

The detective frowned and lifted his hand to his eyes to rub the tears away. "I understand just how you feel, Mister–"

"Raymond."

Seth nodded. "Raymond. I'm sorry for everything you've gone through." He reached over and placed a hand on the mans shoulder.

"I'm all alone," Raymond whispered, "please, I want someone close to me." Seth raised a brow, knowing exactly what Raymond was asking for. He cleared his throat and took off his dress shoes and leaving his suit jacket on the chair next to the flowers. He got into the bed with Raymond, hugging him gently from behind. The moment when Seth made contact with him, Raymond burst into tears.

He truly was the loneliest man in the world.


-x-


Walter looked around in search for the nurse named Jermey Brown. He turned the corner, spotting the man he was looking for standing at the vending machine and looking at the options. Pretending like he was going to also get a snack from the vending machine, he pulled out his wallet and casually walked over.

"Hm." Walter tapped his foot against the floor, staring at the options. None of them looked pleasing to him.

"The popcorn chips are the best. But I felt like trying something new." Jermey sighed and ran his fingers through his long brown hair.

"Is that so?" Walter drifted in his words. He turned to look at Jermey.

"Oh, I saw you earlier on the elevator. You're that detective that's investigating Emily's murder..."

Walter felt like frowning. His attempt at being discreet failed for the most part. He knew that during his time questioning the man that he would find out that he was a detective that was looking into the case of his co-worker, but he wanted to be the one to tell him instead of him already knowing. Regardless, Walter nodded his head.

"Shit. It sucks what happened to Emily," Jermey sighed. "I mean, I was so close to her too. We and a couple of nurses would all get drinks after our shifts had ended at times. It was always nice to wind down after a long day of having patients either throwing up on you or peeing all over you. The time spent with her was just great." He looked down at the dollar in his hands. "She was like a sister to me."

"You probably already know what I'm gonna ask," Walter said.

Jermey sighed. "I was here, working a shift the entire time during that day. You can check my timecard."

Walter nodded. "Alright then. I believe you." He bit down on his bottom lip, noticing the way that Jermey stared at George Washington who was the man on the dollar bill. "You don't seem very sad about her death."

"I've cried all my tears out from '92. I'm all out of them." Jermey said.

"Right. I know I read the report." Walter cleared his throat while he leaned against the vending machine. "Did Emily ever seem off to you? Maybe she told you something or behaved in a way that you thought was weird."

Jermey looked up at the detectives ocean blue eyes. "I don't know if this counts as weird but one day the paramedics brought in a man with a GSW to the chest. Dead center. After only a few minutes of arriving, he died from blood loss since he was found nearly an hour after getting shot. Emily was so freaked out. I figured that she was just a bit shaken up from how chaotic it all was. But she stood in the corner of rooms, sometimes staring off into space."

Walter tilted his head to the side a bit. "Who was the man that was shot?"

Jermey shrugged his shoulder. "We don't know. He was never identified. No ID or drivers license. Nothing. The police never found the shooter either."

Walter had taken out his small notepad and a pen, writing down all the information he heard that he considered useful. "And how long ago was this?"

"A month ago."

Walter stopped writing and stared up at the nurse. It was recent. It made Walter feel suspicious of something. But he didn't want to make it seem obvious. He wrote down the last bit of information before tucking his notepad into the pocket of his shirt. "Thank you." He said.

Jermey shrugged and slid the dollar bill into the slot before pushing in a number. The vending machine pushed forward a bag of Chex Mix. He moved his hand under the slot to grab the snack.

"Find this bastard, will you?" He sighed and walked away from Walter.

Walter looked at the vending machine, staring at the popcorn chips. He didn't like anything that the vending machine had to offer. Everything looked displeasing. But he decided to try Jermey's suggestion. He pulled out a dollar from his old wallet and slid it into the vending machine, pushing a button on the number that was under the bag. He watched as the machine pushed forward the bag, throwing it over the edge. He slid his hand under the slot and grabbed the snack, opening the bag. He scrunched up his nose at the smell. But never judge a book by its cover, right? He grabbed a chip, taking a small bite of it.

"Not bad." He whispered.





(A/N) So yesterday I went out for the first time since Wednesday and apparently the majority of my area and other towns don't have power. The snow storm was that bad. But this morning I woke up and my WiFi was working pretty decently for a bit until it became shit again.

Also, I see the number of reads on the chapters going up, yet the votes and comments stay the same. It would mean a lot to me if you can vote and comment! It helps a lot.

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