THIS STORY IS DEDICATED TO BECCAxKATE because in class today she re-wrote her story like TEN TIMES!!!
anyways i'm trying something new so please please PLEASE comment vote and 'tell a friend to tell a friend to tell anther friend' to read my stories thnx
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I watched in horror as the bullet left the gun and hit the love of my life
“NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!” I screamed. Devonte fell to the hard cold floor at once
“I told dis yute that if he came near you he’ll suffer the consequences didn’t I Deon?!?!” Tequarn spat glaring at me with tears in his eyes. "I told you to stay away from dis yute didn’t I Deon!!” He was crying now “I told you that I love you and what do you do? You go and take my love for granted.” His face suddenly turned expressionless. He pointed the gun at me
“What the f*ck Tequarn?!?!” I started panicking. I could hear about 3 sirens in the background
“If you don’t love me then no one can” Just before he shot me, there was a loud bang and he fell to the floor. The bullet went through his heart. I looked behind him to see Devonte standing holding a gun. He started to walk but dropped straight down.
“Devonte!!” I yelled running to his side
“Deon...” he said holding my hand. I was crying
“Devonte, I’m pregnant.” He smiled weakly
“I’m gonna be a dad...” he said sounding tired. He groaned in pain and rolled onto his side. ”I’m tired. I think i’m gonna sleep now...” he started to close his eyes
“What? No! Don’t go. Don’t leave me PLEASE!”I was shaking him to wake up.
“Please step back Miss, he will look after your friend.” The ambulance woman said to me. The man who was in the ambulance was next to Tequarn.
“He’s gone” the man said.
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They put Devonte on a gurney and took him to the hospital.
Hi my name is Deon Dewer, I’m 16 and this is how life goes on
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i made it up in class today
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