Critical (Jamilton)

By iamyourprotagonist

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Six years later, Thomas thinks he's finally ready to move on, to let go. He's ready to get on with life and l... More

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1. Happy Birthday!
2. Sure, You Can Raid My Fridge
3. Me? Traumatized? Never
4. No Seriously, Disney Cures Anything
5. The Talk
6. Alex, Please See a Psychiatrist
7. Alexander At The Psychiatrist, A Mini Opera
8. Yo Das Gay
9. Be Happy For Papa John's Pizza
10. Dancing With The Stars, Except Better
11.Cold Hands: The Ultimate Wea-- O He Dead
12. Things Were Getting Too Chummy
14. Wait What No Stop What
15. Petty Petty Petty Petty
16. Eliza Gets A Boyf
17. Sometimes That's How It Be
18. Dates With The Bois
19. Pegleg's Great Advice
20. Thomas, Your Response?
21. This Had Better Come To A Stop, Alex
22. Andre Plays Pity-Mon Instead of Poke-Mon
23. I Can't Find Usnavi
24. Uh, France?
25. Correction! I'm DrinkING. Present Tense. Grammar, Thomas.
26. Alex's Best Friend Is A Toilet
27. Superdad on Easy St.
28. This Story Needs An Ending
29. Let's Make A Deal
30. An Order Of Crazy With A Side Of Stupid
31. That Makes So Much Sense
32. It's A Beautiful Night, We're Looking For Something Dumb To Do
33. If You Could Stop Dying, That'd Be Great
34. Rachel Ray, Peter Griffin, Sam Adams, Papa John, Mario
35. Epilogue, Read In The Voice Of The SpongeBob Narrator
BONUS: Git Married Skrub

13. Dear Theodosia, Your Dad Kinda Sucks

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By iamyourprotagonist

Jefferson

Thomas walked with Burr down the halls, holding doors as they walked and talked since Burr was shorter (despite being older) even though Thomas couldn't think of anyone that bothered him more than his coworker. The day was over and both were heading home, talking about the newest events. 

"So what's the word on our wife?" Thomas asked, though he probably already knew the answer. 

"They don't she's gonna make it," Aaron muttered. "I don't know how to tell Teddy, she's just. . ."

"She's too young to understand," Jefferson offered. 

"Exactly. But I can't act like her mom isn't--" the other man cut himself off. "I'll figure something out."

"Alex and I could watch her more if you need. Philip and Georges both like playing with her, I could just start a babysitting service." 

"I just might take you up on that," Burr said. He ran a hand over his face. "Could I drop her off tonight? I want to go visit Theo." 

Thomas thought for a second to make sure he didn't have anything planned for the night. "Yeah, that'd be fine." 

Burr nodded and the conversation got quiet as they got into the parking lot. They both went to their respective cars after Aaron clarified that it might be an overnight thing, which Jefferson was fine with, considering Thomas was going to Eliza's anyway and he usually just stayed the night whenever he did.

Before going to Eliza's, Jefferson stopped to grab Alex, drag him to the store, pick up some snacks and things to keep the kids from destroying anything, and actually go to pick up Georges. It took a little longer to get out of that house because both Hercules and Lafayette were still playing parents to Alexander. Laf even checked Alex's temperature for some reason.

Finally, though, they got to Eliza's place and Burr dropped Theodosia off. 

"Okay, so you'll be here to get her in the morning?"

"Most likely," Burr said, handing over her Hello Kitty bag. "If not, I'll let you know or I'll send Charles or something--"

"You're going to send your boyfriend to pick up your daughter while you're visiting your sick wife. Seriously?"

Thomas saw Alex gently push Theo inside more, probably to keep her away from a conversation she didn't need to hear. 

"That seems real great there, Burr."

"You've had affairs too, Thomas." 

"Yeah, in high school. You're a grown man with a child. How do you think that's going for her, huh?"

"Jefferson, you are nothing more to me than a coworker and one of the guardians to my daughter's friend, I don't need you to lecture me."

Aaron shoved some money at Thomas and walked off. Thomas flipped him off as he went and went back inside where the two boys were already chasing their friend around the living room. Alex and Eliza were watching in the kitchen. 

"So what's the word on his wife?" Eliza asked, pushing herself to sit on the counter to listen.

"They don't think she's going to make it," Thomas whispered. 

"Rough," Ham said sympathetically. Jefferson thought back to how he reacted to his own mother's death. He was twelve years older than the girl in the other room and it still hit him pretty hard. Thomas didn't want to think of how Theodosia might handle it.

But it wasn't Thomas's job to tell her so he wouldn't find out first hand.

After a while of gossip that mostly surrounded the Burrs, the adults dissipated around the place. Thomas had moved to the stove to make boxed mac n cheese for the kids while Eliza sat playing with Georges's hair on the couch watching a movie. Alex was sitting in the kitchen with Thomas and Pip was with Theo at the table with coloring pages.

"You know that stuff is horrible for you, right?" Alex laughed as Thomas cooked.

"Oh, shut it. You have no place to be lecturing me about health, Mr. Coffee's-Better-Than-Sleep." Thomas turned around and pointed the spoon at him with a sassy pose.

"Caffeine is the best thing on the planet, Thomas."

"Second best," Jefferson corrected.

"In comparison to you? No, still the best."

"Hey!"

"Caffeine gives me the power I need to do the things I do! Technically, you hold me back."

"I hold you back from arguing with everything that moves."

"Exactly!" 

Thomas rolled his eyes and kept cooking until Philip walked in. 

"Uncle Alex?" Pip said nervously.

"What is it, sweetpea?" 

"Theo's sad." He pointed to the table where Theodosia was coloring slowing with her head resting on the table. "Mama's busy and Uncle Tommy's cookin', so you gotta talk to her." 

Thomas looked at Alexander, who looked like he wasn't at all prepared to talk to a kid. Jefferson gave him a supportive thumbs up as Philip dragged him off. 

A couple minutes later, Alex and Theo walked by the kitchen, heading outside. Ham told Thomas that they'd be back in a second, so he kept cooking. When the two weren't back inside after he'd finished, he went to go get them. Instead of opening the door right away, though, he stopped and listened to what was happening on the other side. 

"Pip told me you're a superhero," he heard the little girl say. 

Alex laughed. "That's right, I beat up tons a bad guys, but you know what?"

"What?"

"I lost my mom too. I was a little older than you though, so you can grow up and be a way cooler superhero, right?"

"Yeah. . . But I don't wan'er to leave," Theo said. "Daddy's gonna marry the other guy."

"Is he nice?"

"Uh-huh, but he isn't Mama."

"I know, but remember, you can just be a cooler superhero after this, okay?"

Thomas decided that he'd done enough eavesdropping and opened the door, seeing the two sitting on the porch. 

"Food's done," he said quietly. 

Alexander nodded and patted the kid on the head, sending her inside to eat. She seemed to be happier as she ran inside to eat with her friends. 

"What was that about?" Thomas asked quietly before Alex had a chance to go inside. 

"She heard her dad talking to Lee about her mom. She doesn't want anything to change." Ham looked at her with nothing less than sympathy as she put two noodles on her teeth and pretended to be a cheesy vampire.

"Well she seemed to talk to you pretty easy," Jefferson noted. 

"What can I say? Kids love a calm guy." Hamilton shrugged. 

Thomas couldn't hold back a laugh as he went fully into the house. 

"What! I can be calm if I want to be!" 

"Right." 

"I can be!" 

"I completely believe you." 

"You sound sarcastic." 

"I would never use sarcasm with you, darlin'." 

"That's a total lie! This entire relationship is built on sarcasm!" 

"Well, ya got me there, Alex," Thomas shrugged. He laughed again as his boyfriend went off about how he could definitely be calm if he wanted to.

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