As you can see, once I get through combing, editing, removing, and adding parts to the newest version, I had decided that this needs a new title, as well as a summary, please let me know what you think of the new title and summary in the comments, and whether or not you'd like to see snippets of the rewrite posted?
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Title: Through the Sands of Time
New Summary:
Who knew that one night in Cairo would end up with her being flung into the ancient world, thus changing her life forever.
Pharaoh Bes was known to have a reputation of being careless, cruel, and heartless.
Bailey DuMont was a strange woman who had both captivated and infuriated him from the beginning.
They were never supposed to meet, but the Fates have a funny way of making the impossible possible; with the arising dangers and a murder attempt, it's up to Bailey and Bes to work together to foil whatever plans are about unfold.